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| 18 Nov 2015 10:41 PM |
Talking like you have a bae, don even have a single hoe Talk to me when you get shoes more expensive than twinkle toes You're not even real, [N] you a fake original Talk about my brother again and you know how it'll go
I'ma finish your [S], finish it [F] quick You just a poor [A] [N] asking for [F] [D] After I'm done with diss you will for surely quit Quit the life you think is a [F] hit
Think a lil once more before ya try to roast me Ending this [S] with some hella big boasting Done ya bad enough, shut your [A] up and never let it open For the next time you try and insult the family I love I'll make your [A] broken |
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1Riblock1
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| 18 Nov 2015 10:52 PM |
| why not just say it to his face |
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| 18 Nov 2015 10:57 PM |
| I am, I'm just asking others an opinion on it, anything I can change, then I'll memorize it and get in him after school. |
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| 19 Nov 2015 06:14 AM |
| why dont you just say this to him, and dont rap it? |
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Zeluka
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| 19 Nov 2015 07:20 AM |
add this 2 it
so next time i see you in the place i'm hollering 1-8-7 with my glock in your f'in face cause real g's don't go out that quick so it's cool if you bite my sht bch |
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| 19 Nov 2015 07:39 AM |
| I made it into a diss rap, that I'll memorize and I'm saying into him today. Just was asking for opining @above I'll are if I can get that in here too |
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JunJoe
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| 19 Nov 2015 08:13 AM |
| lmao pls dont embarrass yourself |
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| 19 Nov 2015 10:56 AM |
| if you say this irl you'll look like more of a doofus than you already do |
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| 19 Nov 2015 03:36 PM |
for your sake for his sake for everyone's sake just don't rap to your friend |
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| 19 Nov 2015 04:28 PM |
| yes im black irl, and too late already dissed him |
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| 19 Nov 2015 04:35 PM |
how did it go? did you have a rap battle? did you fight? |
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| 19 Nov 2015 04:36 PM |
| god dammit op, you were warned. what's the point of asking for advice if you're going to do stupid crap anyway? |
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| 19 Nov 2015 04:51 PM |
| In my school if you diss someone they will most likely fight you or jump you. |
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| 19 Nov 2015 05:45 PM |
He got Hella mad and said he got me to Monroe Whatever that means rofl |
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| 19 Nov 2015 05:49 PM |
At my school I've seen kids get beat up for no damn reason
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| 20 Nov 2015 06:50 AM |
Talking like you have a bae, don even have a single hoe Talk to me when you get shoes more expensive than twinkle toes
(You're not even real, [N] you a fake original) - This just didn't make sense to me your basically repeating yourself
Talk about my brother again and you know how it'll go
I'ma finish your [S], finish it [F] quick You just a poor [A] [N] asking for [F] [D] After I'm done with diss you will for surely quit
(Quit the life you think is a [F] hit) - Just didn't like the line I'd replace it,
Think a lil once more before ya try to roast me Ending this [S] with some hella big boasting
Done ya bad enough, shut your [A] ( I'd just replace [A] With Mouth or [F] and replace your with the) up and never let it open
For the next time you try and insult the family I love (I'll make your [A]) Again this just doesn't make sense to me. broken -----
[Quick Re-Write of what i WOULD DO with the majority of your words, don't just say mine, but try to change it]
Talking like you have a bae, don't even have a single hoe Talk to me when you get shoes more expensive than twinkle toes You're fake, unoriginal, but that's something everyone already knows Talk about my brother again and you know how it'll go
I'ma finish your [S], finish it [F]in quick You just a poor [A] [N] asking for some [F] [D] After I'm done with this diss you will for surely quit and If you wanna fight, SWING, I'm not scared to take a Hit.
Think a lil once more before ya try to roast me You got nothing to flaunt so quit all this boasting Done your bad enough, shut your mouth and never let it open For the next time you try and insult the family I love, I'll make your Jaw broken |
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| 20 Nov 2015 06:52 AM |
| @Trippy PM me I'll help you out |
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| 20 Nov 2015 08:25 AM |
@T-Haze, I like that version mind if I take it? @Derpp I already said I to him but I might make it a single He said he is getting me today so I got disses strapped |
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| 20 Nov 2015 06:08 PM |
| Go Ahead but atleast try to revise yours. |
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