khailfa16
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| 10 Nov 2015 07:55 PM |
Section A - Introduction Section B - Why should I be vote Section C - Ending
-Section A- Dear, Citizens of Rockport. You may wonder who I am and why I'm going for senator. I am a mature person who doesn't go off topic in speeches, I always keep my chat appropriate for young Roblox users. I've been playing Roblox for 3 years and strongly agree on Roblox rules. I believe everyone should be equal. I'm going for senator because I believe strongly that the job is for me, I might have a U.S.A, and State of Alaska background, my experiences of debating traces back to former Vice President, Governor. Leading to victory of winning the elections and gain my confident in my work. I've good past experience of debating and bring up ideas for the group. If you have a ideas or questions that you don't want to say publicly, you can always private message me. My inbox is always open for Citizens of Rockport suggestions and I'm always happy to reply them. I treat everyone the same because everyone is equal. I seek Rockport people who violates the Rockport Rules
-Section B- What drew my attention to apply for senator is, Rockport needs a person who knows what he is doing, a person who address citizens to the right direction. As being the Senator, I believe I can reduce crime on the streets by better TRC training meaning a great influx of tourists coming to our Capital to see our Rockports. More tourism means the Rockport economy will be higher. This is a great opportunity Rockport because there will be employment open for the new Citizens.
-Section C- Well, I hope I've said enough to convince you to vote for me for Senator and thank you for reading my speech! I'll be looking forward to see you at my future city!
Please have time To Vote me for Senator say #Support in the comments, It would help a lot
Signed : khailfa16
#khailfa16forSenator
#Support!
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| 10 Nov 2015 08:06 PM |
Support. I wish you good luck! I believe your a good fit for Senator
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| 10 Nov 2015 08:28 PM |
Multiple problems on this speech.
" As being the Senator, I believe I can reduce crime on the streets by better TRC training"
Okay, I can not stress this enough.
WE DO NOT CONTROL TRC. TRC CONTROLS TRC.
"TRC training meaning a great influx of tourists coming to our Capital"
Doesn't make sense, as we don't even have capitol tours.
"More tourism means the Rockport economy will be higher"
There is no economy... the most you can get to economy is buying shirts for ads.
"This is a great opportunity Rockport because there will be employment open"
How does having more people increase job space? Besides, the amount of people in jobs is fine except DOJ is having problems with that.
Remember, this is constructive criticism that is designed to help you.
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khailfa16
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| 10 Nov 2015 08:33 PM |
| @above lol, I know that's a little what I meant. But I don't really know why I added the TRC, thing. But we can open our capital for tours and events and stuff like that. |
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khailfa16
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| 10 Nov 2015 08:37 PM |
| But also think about not everyone that has a real SoR job is not active all the time ever sense school started back. |
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WlNDCROSS
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| 10 Nov 2015 08:39 PM |
| listen yo im not in no rockport but seriously tours and events this isnt real life this is a game |
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khailfa16
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| 10 Nov 2015 08:41 PM |
| @above We know it's a game, it's like having something to do in remmington and shot at TRC all the time. |
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| 10 Nov 2015 08:59 PM |
#Support
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jj1892
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| 10 Nov 2015 09:04 PM |
Support
-={jj1892 | Chief Superintendent}=- |
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calj444
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| 10 Nov 2015 09:51 PM |
#Support
I like the idea about the tours. |
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Lyoxic
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| 11 Nov 2015 04:08 AM |
#Support
Letter, noobnation!! |
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bommes
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| 11 Nov 2015 04:28 AM |
You must be joking?
Alright, people. This is why Rockport fails. No one reads the speeches through and thinks twice before voting.
This guy hasn't heard of our power separation. Or simply said: TRC CONTROLS TRC AND ROCKPORT CONTROLS ROCKPORT. There is absolutely NO way to get around this, so neither can this guy. This is the first lie I discovered. (Lie/falsestatement #1)
Second thing bothering me, I quote: "I might have a U.S.A, and State of Alaska background, my experiences of debating traces back to former Vice President, Governor."
I MIGHT, is not valid proof. Where are your screenshots, witnesses, old speeches or anything at all showing you've held those titles?
Lie/false statement #2 discovered.
Another thing that sounds ridiculous: "I seek Rockport people who violates the Rockport Rules" If you're looking for rulebreakers, talk to people on the Criminal/Prisoner on Trial rank. However I have no idea why this should be of any use to the increasing of Rockport's safety. (This makes no sense at all, error #3 discovered and revealed)
The fourth and last thing: "meaning a great influx of tourists coming to our Capital to see our Rockports. More tourism means the Rockport economy will be higher. This is a great opportunity Rockport because there will be employment open for the new Citizens."
How will you take care of bettering the economy?
We have no jobs available what so ever, citizens can't earn money, they can't spend their money either, this means we have basically no economy at all. Economy is based upon supply and demand of products. If there is no demand (no money to spend on products) there can't be a supply.
In a nutshell: This guy is talking about improving a non-existing economy. So basically not improving anything.
In a review: This man should not be voted upon, his speech is blurry and doesn't give me enough reasons to vote for him. You can read why. I hope you think the same way.
Please take this advice from an Ex-Politician in SoR.
~ bommes
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khailfa16
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| 11 Nov 2015 04:33 AM |
The USa, that i was vice president in is owned by: ITHOMA5I and the state of alaska was is owned now by: sheriff181 it was owned by Trooperboy97 at first
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khailfa16
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| 11 Nov 2015 04:34 AM |
| I messed up with my grammar that whole sentance. |
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bommes
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| 11 Nov 2015 04:35 AM |
^ I'll do my research on that, however some valid proof would help.
Now please answer the rest of my constructive criticism, if you would? |
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khailfa16
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| 11 Nov 2015 04:39 AM |
| And would I meant like employment for open: I meant like rockport services as in RDoT, RDPS, RDOJ, HLS. You know them type of jobs. |
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khailfa16
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| 11 Nov 2015 04:43 AM |
| And the one about TRC, was like i'm trying to make it better in remmington. Okay, Know you tell the things that citizens always do in remmington. Nothing but shoot at TRC and run from TRC, that's it so I was thinking we could at least offer tours at the capital. |
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bommes
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| 11 Nov 2015 04:46 AM |
^ Okay, I am very sorry if this sounds rude but:
I didn't get a single word of what you tried to explain there. I'm sorry but I didn't. |
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SoIoWoIf
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| 11 Nov 2015 09:35 AM |
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Branflakes16, Senate Candidate |
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| 11 Nov 2015 01:27 PM |
Support.
I met you before, you'll be great. may not remember though.
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