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whiteyoshi124 is not online. whiteyoshi124
Joined: 23 Jul 2011
Total Posts: 14716
10 Nov 2015 04:19 PM
*Black Friday poll
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fsagrdhred is not online. fsagrdhred
Joined: 16 Nov 2014
Total Posts: 11009
10 Nov 2015 04:27 PM
@dys i'm going to correct all of your grammar mistakes for you with each number representing your replies
since apparently people typing perfectly is so important to you
ahha this is going to be long af

#1. *grammar *Anyhow, *Off-sale *on-sale *skyrocket < learn your hyphens, bro

#2. "But eh" < you can't start a sentence with a conjunction
*everybody
"Especially when they have to type on a laptop" < that's a fragment
"Hate these damned keyboards" < that's a fragment, too

#3. *spelled
"Now who's making ironic comments.." < that's a question

#4. *First and foremost, < introductory phrases require commas after them
oh screw it, this entire sentence is messed up man,
"First and foremost, this is a thread, and second if you're so pretentious about spamming, then how come you bothered to reply multiple times?"
just no, ok
also, wrong use of the word "pretentious" haha
"You could have just left it at the "everyone makes mistakes" reply..?"
*everybody < you use everyONE when talking about one person

#5. *smart < why did you put that in quotes?
*smart, < you forgot a comma haha

#6. ", and they..." < no comma when you use a conjunction between an independent clause and a dependent clause

#7. wrong use of the words "abrupt", "target", "variable", "thus", "succomb", "assuring"
okay tbh i stopped reading that once i got about half through because you have what you call a "rambling sentence" and i do not feel like seperating it for you man. i also do not know what that sentence was even saying.. it kind of just went on and on with that parallel structure thing you were going for.

#8. "And your..." < you can't start a sentence with a conjunction
"condenscend me" < no, that's not how you use that word
"Very typical of a party under pressure." < that's a fragment.
also, you are talking to ONE person, THEREFORE there is no "party" under pressure.


i didn't proofread these corrections because i mean i don't care about how i type online, so don't even try and correct me ok
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verygoodninja is not online. verygoodninja
Joined: 29 Jul 2011
Total Posts: 4
10 Nov 2015 07:39 PM
Thank you.
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