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Re: Does this look good?

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sonicboy01 is not online. sonicboy01
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08 Nov 2015 07:02 PM
http://www.roblox.com/games/314442864/sonicboy01s-Place-Number-1

Sorry if you've already seen it, but I just wanted to know if this looks good to people who haven't seen it.

Also to people who have already seen it, I didn't update often this week due to school and tests.

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Qorm is not online. Qorm
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08 Nov 2015 07:04 PM
yes because you put effort into it and the increment is well done



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sonicboy01 is not online. sonicboy01
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08 Nov 2015 07:10 PM
@Qorm, thank you :)

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deadmilk is not online. deadmilk
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08 Nov 2015 07:10 PM
yeah i think it looks awesome!
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sonicboy01 is not online. sonicboy01
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08 Nov 2015 07:11 PM
@Deadmilk, thanks c:

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Klovod is not online. Klovod
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08 Nov 2015 08:54 PM
The roof is not correctly joined together, I can see space in between the wedges. The handles under the railing design all together needs to be corrected because the design under is not evenly spaced out with the floor and the supports under. The welcome mat is not unioned, I can see parts sticking out which looks extremely ugly. The shelves are very undetailed and I have no idea why you would use diamond plates as the handles. The dining table chair is very undetailed as well, you made it extremely simpley without any noticeable work whatsoever.

5/10

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sonicboy01 is not online. sonicboy01
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08 Nov 2015 09:22 PM
@Klv, I'll try to fix those things.

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SCS is not online. SCS
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08 Nov 2015 10:39 PM
I think you did a great job on this. I love the style employed throughout your designs and I really appreciate the attention to detail. I think your choice of materials is excellent. Everything just feels really balanced, everything flows together well and is visually appealing. Equal proportions are an essential aspect of traditional architecture and I can tell that you were careful to maintain that in your designs, especially for the building.

Just out of curiosity, is this a stepping stone to a larger project you have in mind? I think it's great on its own, but I'd definitely be interested to see any further things you make.

Keep up the great work!
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sonicboy01 is not online. sonicboy01
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09 Nov 2015 10:11 PM
@SCS, thank you so much for the feedback. I'll try to add more to it but school and tests are near so I need to study.

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