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| 05 Nov 2015 08:09 PM |
Sam:Guess since Thames is dead, I'm the new greeter...
Sam:This way to the sleeping area (Pause for a second) Sam:Shank
-Jason begins following sam around-
Jason:Why am I here?
Sam:Because you are here.
Jason:That's not an answer
Sam:I don't know much; I'm the Greenie before you.
Jason:Greenie?
Sam:It means someone new.."
Jason:So im stuck with someone who knows as much as I do
Sam:Pretty much
-They arrive at the sleeping area in the Forrest-
Jason:Why?
Sam:Enough with the questions. Just go to sleep and Issac will give you the tour tomorrow.
Jason:Fine..
-Jason Lays down in the darkness-
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| 05 Nov 2015 08:11 PM |
The key to writing something that is mostly dialogue is that you have to write good dialogue.
I give it 0/10. |
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| 05 Nov 2015 08:14 PM |
tmr. the mr. the maze r. the maze runner. |
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| 06 Nov 2015 09:31 PM |
@Wata (I also dont know why im bumping this but) This isn't my dialogue. I have a friend trying to make a movie and i'm just trying to make it easier to read. |
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