YShaarj
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| 21 Oct 2015 10:54 PM |
Where were you when I had to drop out of school, When my grandmother died and I started to loose, My mental in so many ways my self worth starts to reduce, Feeling like I had no one in this world ish what am I going to do, Sit back and let this anger get to me Nah Imma switch up the recipe, Come at the world like it is my enemy, Don't expect me To show you no empathy, Cause the way things are going I'm just screwed up mentally, Ready to blow at any point in time, There's no where to go when I lose my mind, But atleast i can still tell the difference between a dream and reality, To bad it's sad to see, What he had to be come, Ish that was hella long ago, But the verse is still deadly enough for when I switch up the flow No one showed me no sympathy so my anger began to grow, Tired of ish talkers like "why don't you come at me bro," Cause it's kinda obvious that you don't want that, We both know that your rhymes aren't set up for combat, I'm riding in the fast lane but you got a flat, Another words in rising up while you fell and went splat, I'm just trying to change the situation I'm in So let the operation begin, I'm comming for the top Making the game take a spin, But I'm not leaving it stranded, Im just killing of whoever made it stand in, The position its at now, Throwing some shots to make sure you don't make a sound, And if you standard me abandond you better not come around, You just left when you started having them doubts, Expecting me to sit at home on the couch, But then things took a turn for the worse what I mean is I changed up route, And it's about time you fs learned what I'm about, Cause when I have a goal imma capture it, The throne yeah I'm after it, Thinking I'm nothing well then your behind a few chapters itch, But I did build my self up from nothing, You threw them shots but I'm ducking, Every one of them ish now it's time to prove that Now I am something, Cause we started from the bottom now we're here, You messed around and I made you disappear, Yeah I'm the best underground so uf what you hear You better hope I don't come around cause I'll end your career, But I'm just coming out I guess killing you will be the Premier, Yep I'm About to make opening headlines, Kill you so fast you would think I had a damn deadline, Infatuated by the way you bled I'm, Loosing my mind and it's about time I fn get my, Props I deserve, Better become alert, Cause I have emerged, Now it's time to start rising up so sit back watch and obsurve, I mean it's not like you have an option, Come at me you better proceed with caution, And keep your mouth shut cause what I spit is toxic, Now I got stuck out no locksmith, When I'm spitting this flow, They know that I will soon blow, Claiming your better but your skills are Micro, Your just a guest in my show, Another one killed off now your 6 feet below, |
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Laedere
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YShaarj
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MrZelo
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Moderino
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| 21 Oct 2015 11:09 PM |
Rhyming skills= 0 Rapping skills= 0 Writing skills= 0 Copying skills= 100%
pls dont get mad iso its just constructive critism
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YShaarj
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| 21 Oct 2015 11:11 PM |
| what is this supposed to mean |
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| 21 Oct 2015 11:15 PM |
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| 21 Oct 2015 11:20 PM |
@billy
Probably yes, he is really into rapping |
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LordDbaf
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| 21 Oct 2015 11:32 PM |
| If u did do that good job. Dont hate guys |
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YShaarj
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| 21 Oct 2015 11:40 PM |
| if you give us a beat with it then sure |
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YShaarj
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| 22 Oct 2015 12:05 AM |
| Sure bro, spit some more fire |
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Azuc
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| 22 Oct 2015 12:15 AM |
heil vaktus
Have fun; don't die. |
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YShaarj
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| 22 Oct 2015 11:34 AM |
| What is this supposed to be? |
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