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| 09 Oct 2015 09:49 PM |
[PLOT]
Somewhere in the US, deep underground, there lies a facility. This facility held five hundred people. These five hundred people were taken, abducted. Most of them are from the ages fourteen to twenty seven. Some are children. Some are elderly. All of them don't know that they were abducted, or what's going to happen to them. They lack basic emotions. The constant memory wipes, bland food, and gray colours of the facility have turned them into robots. All thin, all weak, all tired. Any detection of feelings or thoughts about why they're here gets them an extra dose of memory wiping.
All of the residents of this poor, broken facility have no idea what's really going on, why they're there, why the facility was built in the first place - to enhance humanity. While the residents move around like lost souls in the facility, scientists are working day and night to master a drug, and on June 28, 2038, this drug was mastered. Simplified, this drug enhances the human body. It gives a coating to the users DNA. This "coating" makes the user feel like they have a new limb. This new limb is controllable, but, because it feels like a new limb, it requires training and practice for you to be able to truly feel with it. This new power, this new ability, it's not the same for everyone. It depends on DNA. It can be something basic - you can run faster. Or it can be something world changing - you can produce fire. The users are superhumans... but there's a catch. Most humans can't handle it. When the drug was injected into all five hundred residents, a ludicrous amount of them died, leaving only dozens left. These few dozen are children, teens and young adults. Their vastly changing minds and bodies ingest the drug quickly and move on with their lives with the drugs permanent effects.
You have just been ingested with this drug through the neck. Your entire body is burning. You want nothing more than to sleep, but you can't. You've been brought to a special sector of the facility you never even knew existed - it goes even deeper! You can see dozens more being brought in behind you, just as urgently as you. Gunned men are bringing you down to wherever this is, and you soon hope to see whatever this is soon enough. You are being dragged down a long corridor with many doors with small little windows. Looking behind you, people are literally being thrown and locked in there. Soon enough you are thrown in and you feel the cold air trying to trap you in a block of ice. A bed, a chair, that's all there is in this small room. The rest are the same. You've been brought in here because you've survived stage two; the burning in your body is still going on. Your mind is burning even more. You start asking questions. You start feeling emotions. You start thinking you're going insane, but no, you're just learning what emotions are and how regular people act. You're trapped in this cell and you need to wait for further instructions. You're super.
[RULES]
-I'm the creator and only admin. I can make new rules and I can ban you. -OOC arguments are entertaining but not encouraged and can get you a ban. -Ignore trolls. Don't bite the b8 m8s. -Powers can be anything from water manipulation to technology manipulation. Try going on the superpowers wikia, they've got good stuff. -Obligatory read my story Hey that rhymed -No OP powers please; simple powers like electricity manipulation CAN be OP, but that's allowed. When I say OP, I mean no omni-abilities, or galactic creation. Most of you are smart enough to tell what's OP and what's not in my words by now -Read the rules but I guess you'd only know that if you read the rules so if you're ready this cool, you're following the rules -Be realistic; you have no control over your powers now. They happen randomly. For example, if you have fire manipulation, expect to just spit out fire while you're in the facility. Everyone will learn how to control their powers but in due time. Don't wake up the next day in game and be some Azula-tier firebender. -You can have the same power as other people but for originality's sake it's recommended you please not -Other ruley stuff, you know the works
[CHARACTER SHEET]
Name[no full names]: Age: Gender: Personality: Appearance[no description of clothes; we're all wearing white scrubs clothing, the hospital patient kind]: Power[if you want me to choose, just say you choose]: Bio[optional]: Other[if I miss anything/if you want to add anything]:
“Bonquiqui-Shalak Conjuon Youohn Ohl'om,” I whisper. |
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| 09 Oct 2015 09:52 PM |
quality title
~Nobody exist on purpose. Nobody belongs anywhere. We're all going to die.~ |
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| 09 Oct 2015 09:54 PM |
thanks
join
“Bonquiqui-Shalak Conjuon Youohn Ohl'om,” I whisper. |
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| 09 Oct 2015 09:55 PM |
also just saying am totally using earth manip
“Bonquiqui-Shalak Conjuon Youohn Ohl'om,” I whisper. |
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| 09 Oct 2015 09:57 PM |
yeah i guess im stealing electricity manipulation too
~Nobody exist on purpose. Nobody belongs anywhere. We're all going to die.~ |
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| 09 Oct 2015 09:59 PM |
pick 10/10 not even joking, earth and electricity are my favourites
truthfully I'd use electricity manipulation now because it is my favourite, but I feel it's weird because electricity should almost always stun, if not instakill, because that's how it works in real life
and earth is different because getting hit by a rock is preferable to getting hit by lightning
“Bonquiqui-Shalak Conjuon Youohn Ohl'om,” I whisper. |
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| 09 Oct 2015 10:02 PM |
Marked.
I have to go to bed right now but I'll find a power I want and get on and claim it. |
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Sanijta
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| 09 Oct 2015 10:11 PM |
| i call air/wind manipulation or something because it's cool |
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| 09 Oct 2015 10:12 PM |
personally I hate air manip because it's not really super physical and all you can do is knock people back
I guess it can be cool if you really dig into it and think of creative ways to do it, like you can go all zaheer on someone and kill them up
“Bonquiqui-Shalak Conjuon Youohn Ohl'om,” I whisper. |
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| 09 Oct 2015 10:18 PM |
well hydre
too bad its wasted on me !!!
Name[no full names]: Jupiter (10/10 name tbh) Age: 17 Gender: Female Personality: god hydre can we just say shes super c*cky and rushes into situations. she just doesnt care about risks you know she does what she wants she just does it like she dOES IT Appearance[no description of clothes; we're all wearing white scrubs clothing, the hospital patient kind]: Jupiter is a dirty blond, her hair is coarse and short, reaching to below her neck, cropped straight with bangs as well. Her eyes are a bright teal, round yet sharp around the edges, with short but dark eyelashes. Her nose is sharp as well, and clearly juts out, and her lips are rather thin yet wide. Like, the corners of her mouth reach wider than most people's like, a little past the bottom of the iris. God, description is HELL. For her body type, it's actually rather athletic average kinda thing to be honest, though she's more top-heavy (NOT BREASTS THEY'RE LIKE WHATEVER IN ROBLOX LAND JUST IMAGINE ANY SIZE YOU WANT), with wide shoulders, slightly buff arms. Like, she's sort of strong, but only on her arms, her legs are average she runs like an average person, or some average dude in cross country. I dunno, she's not weak, she runs and lifts everyday because she wants to be the best, and she tries to eat everything she wants to it. Or, if she doesn't run and lift everyday because she can't, she totally would, because getting stronger and exercising is fun and cool and Jupiter recommends everyone to do it. Oh yeah, she can also zap things from her right hand, or both hands, whatever, it's cool. Power[if you want me to choose, just say you choose]: Electricity Manipulation Bio[optional]: thank GOD Other[if I miss anything/if you want to add anything]: eh
~Nobody exist on purpose. Nobody belongs anywhere. We're all going to die.~ |
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| 09 Oct 2015 10:21 PM |
yee accepted pick
and also, personality is a trick question for everyone
I mentioned in the last paragraph that we all have no memory or concept of what life is/was like outside the facility. We don't have much personality, too. one goal is for everyone to get more personality as the stuff happens so yee
“Bonquiqui-Shalak Conjuon Youohn Ohl'om,” I whisper. |
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| 09 Oct 2015 10:24 PM |
thanks because i totally missed that
~Nobody exist on purpose. Nobody belongs anywhere. We're all going to die.~ |
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Sanijta
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| 09 Oct 2015 10:25 PM |
"User can create, shape and manipulate air, the common name given to the layer of atmospheric gases and various compounds (mostly oxygen and nitrogen) surrounding the planet Earth that is retained by Earth's gravity, and wind, movement of air relative to the surface of the planet. It is an important factor in determining and controlling climate and weather, and the generating force of most ocean and freshwater waves. Wind occurs because of horizontal and vertical differences in atmospheric pressure, and include breezes, squalls, gusts, whirlwinds, zephyrs, gales, tempests, and hurricanes.
Since air cannot be seen by conventional methods, neither can the attacks and derivatives formed by/from it, making it an invisible and versatile weapon that is very difficult to block and dodge." i think it's cool to be able to control the climate/weather and be able to create tornadoes, hurricanes, etc. though they are OP. i might change my power though, who knows |
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| 09 Oct 2015 10:29 PM |
my CS will be up some time tonight or tomorrow, most likely tomorrow, and we're starting tomorrow too, or after we get a good amount of joiners
it's better we get most joiners in before we start because as you guess the first ~10 pages are dedicated to escaping and most people would want to be around for that because that's when most groups are gonna be decided and it'd be awkward to just join a group afterwards
“Bonquiqui-Shalak Conjuon Youohn Ohl'om,” I whisper. |
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foIie
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| 09 Oct 2015 10:33 PM |
omg marked bc i probably wont do it tonight !!
i uh
i call dibs on
uhh
idk like necrokinesis/manipulation of the dead or smth
she said, she said, she said, why don't you just drop dead? |
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HeIlHound
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| 09 Oct 2015 10:52 PM |
Are psychic powers a valid option? If so, may I reserve it? |
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kitrain
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| 09 Oct 2015 10:55 PM |
Dibs on two powers Passive Enrage:The more injured my character is, the stronger she will become. When it's progressing to high rage, a wispy aura surrounds her, and once she reaches maximum, she basicly becomes a humanoid dragon, with the aura forming wings, sharp teeth, and clawed hands and feet. This comes at the cost that it decreases the gap of herself and death faster if she is hurt. Power: Crystal manipluation Ability to make anything out of hard, titanium hard crystals. When I make a ranged weapon, it fires concentrated energy. I can also make floating drones, armor, and other things.
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| 09 Oct 2015 10:57 PM |
psychic powers as in telekinesis or mind reading, stuff like that? If so then yeah, anything like that is fine, but not together. Like, you can't just say "psychic" and have both telekinesis and mind reading, one or the other, maybe later in the thread you can have both as your character gets better.
as long as it's a power, it's fine, and there aren't any exact "reservations" because there can be more than one person with the same power; I just said what power I'm using in case anyone wanted to avoid using that power because, like in the rules, it's okay to have the same power as someone else, just not recommended for the sake of originality and realism
“Bonquiqui-Shalak Conjuon Youohn Ohl'om,” I whisper. |
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| 09 Oct 2015 10:59 PM |
@kit
as long as those powers aren't for the same character it's fine. I didn't mention it because it's a little obvious but yes, don't have two strong combinations. Sure you can have a slightly enhanced physique and a manipulation, but no two manipulations for different things, or anything of the like.
“Bonquiqui-Shalak Conjuon Youohn Ohl'om,” I whisper. |
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kitrain
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| 09 Oct 2015 11:00 PM |
Name: Amelina Age: 21 Gender: female Personality: She doesint have much of one due to constant memory wipes from her once curious mind. All she knows is that she used to be a shy girl at a college, curious about what others thought of her. Appearance: she is 5'6 in height, with a athletic body and gray eyes. Her right eye is purple, though. She also has long black hair with purple at the ends of it, due to a side effect from the powers. Power: engagement and crystal manipluation Bio: nah Other: nahn |
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kitrain
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| 09 Oct 2015 11:00 PM |
Enrage ment is a trade for trade, I need to go, though. See ya later |
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| 09 Oct 2015 11:01 PM |
Name[no full names]: Lucas Age: 16 Gender: Male Personality: Introverted. He doesn't know much of himself, but being around people has been a large stress factor to him. Appearance[no description of clothes; we're all wearing white scrubs clothing, the hospital patient kind]: His hair is messy and golden brown (as in it sort of glows in the sun; my friend has that irl and it's cool), and if combed would reach down to his shoulders. As it's not combed, it sticks up in a messy shape, only falling onto his ears and his eyes. Speaking of which, his eyes are deep brown, sticking out against his pale skin. Though the facility has starved him (implied in P1 L4, correct me if I'm wrong), he seems to be naturally unnaturally thin, but size matching his height of 5'7". His nails are bitten and his hands raw, like they've been used one too many times. Power[if you want me to choose, just say you choose]: Healing. (Like, he can take power from an enemy and heal an ally with it, etc.) Does that work? If it helps, the power doesn't work on himself, only others. Bio[optional]: N/A Other[if I miss anything/if you want to add anything]: As a side note, Lucas has poor eyesight and no glasses. (Even if they allowed him glasses in the facility, he would most likely need a new prescription by now.) |
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| 09 Oct 2015 11:03 PM |
| i clicked the thread only to ask where is your story |
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| 09 Oct 2015 11:06 PM |
@kit
almost accepted; the characters have no memory whatsoever, so delete that part about her in college, and could you explain a bit more what this engagement power is? And srsly that purple thing just seems for special snowflake effect, the drug is to make you a superhero not some 14 year old scene girl m8
@teh
accepted, and you don't have to change anything for his appearance, but the facility doesn't exactly starve people. They feed them enough to keep them full and that's it, no snacks or anything, or no overfeeding and stuff
@succ
lots of stuff in the story has been changed/determined
story takes place in sinnoh now m8
it's going to be starting its planning in point form really soon and i'll post chapter one/prologue here
“Bonquiqui-Shalak Conjuon Youohn Ohl'om,” I whisper. |
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| 09 Oct 2015 11:16 PM |
Marked, will try to join because bushy asked me
"Hit the lever!" |
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