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| 06 Oct 2015 09:17 PM |
[Hook]: Ya, this is the good life, the good life
[Verse 1]: I be on da streets everyday I'm always strapped ha you know I gotta stay stap cuz is a [n] come up wrong ima lay his [a] flat cuz Im livin dis dope life
[Chores]: Dope life, yea yo know I'm livin dat dope life
[Verse 2]: My mom screamin at me cuz I filed a class again but I be putting dinner on da table ever night my momma proud she always askin where my money come from I jus tell I got my ways cuz she dont know Im livin dat dope life
[Chores]: Dope life yea you know I'm livin dat dope life
[Verse 3]: Ya, dat dope life is good cuz you make good money I get [b]es cuz I makin dat money for allot of people making money is a problem ha not for me makin money is as easy as [f] [b] well if you me cuz I'm livin dat dope life. |
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PUSH5
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| 06 Oct 2015 09:26 PM |
| Plz tell me what you think bout this so I know what I need to work on. |
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| 06 Oct 2015 09:28 PM |
Verses should be longer and a tad more meaningful, 3.6/10 I have faith in you, though
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| 06 Oct 2015 09:31 PM |
| Yea I see that now Ima change dat. |
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| 06 Oct 2015 09:37 PM |
| Alright I'll be coming out with a new song by maybe this weekend Idk Im not done with it but thx for being honest. |
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| 06 Oct 2015 09:39 PM |
3/10, bad lyrics with little meaning.
Well that's the end of this post. Remember to rate the post, comment the post, and subscribe if you want to see posts similar to this one. See ya. |
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| 06 Oct 2015 10:10 PM |
| Make the verses and hook longer |
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| 19 Oct 2015 02:52 PM |
| You're only 12 years m8 LMAO! Now go back to doing your homework and stop trying to act like a g.star, kiddo. |
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| 20 Nov 2015 06:13 AM |
stfu dude i bet he writes better than you idiot marshallmallows |
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