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| 30 Sep 2015 08:38 PM |
~Beat~
•Verse 1,Trippy• A Whole new.. Oh this sht is makin' me crazy Like I came from the doc uncured from rabies But man I ain't no damn rabbi I wasn't involved with the shootings or drive bys I'm just an innocent normal ass black guy I'm just as innocent as a ngga comes by A Whole new.. Btch you think that I am lying Chill yo ass I didn't say I'm denyin' I didn't say I'm denyin' Before I start screaming shouting like I am a lion Lion it up , more like btch I'm sighing it up IMA start crying it up, just kiddin' ima retry it all up
•Hook, Trippy• I ain't in piece FAM ignore me I'm broken Get myself up run away from the open Ima add it all and get myself a quotient Then from my quotient made preety ass potion To make..me..a..whole..new.. ~beat Whole new part to Aladdin Pm to help me finish this Looking for partners and duets ~Trippy
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| 30 Sep 2015 09:37 PM |
"Like I came from the doc uncured from rabies But man I ain't no damn rabbi"
Instantly ruined everything this song ever had if it had anything. 2/10 at best.
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| 01 Oct 2015 08:08 AM |
| Why its called a freestyle Ben. |
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| 01 Oct 2015 12:49 PM |
"Why its called a freestyle Ben." It being a freestyle doesn't give it the right to be horrible.
This isn't even a freestyle. It's written. lol. |
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| 01 Oct 2015 07:41 PM |
"Why its called a freestyle Ben."
It being a freestyle doesn't give it the right to be horrible.
This isn't even a freestyle. It's written. lol. x2
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| 02 Oct 2015 03:16 PM |
Typed, written, same thing. Doesn't matter which one. If it's a free-style you just think up the lyrics on the spot.
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| 02 Oct 2015 04:21 PM |
black people = animals
10/10 |
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| 02 Oct 2015 05:13 PM |
| what i did man, lol thanks at above |
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| 02 Oct 2015 06:06 PM |
"what i did man"
No, you already had the lyrics down or you had like forever to think of them. Not a freestyle.
"lol thanks at above"
He called black people animals, you racist.
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| 02 Oct 2015 06:09 PM |
i dunno dude op sounds like he really wants to be an african american so i just said lion
just pulled it out my bootyhole dud |
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| 02 Oct 2015 06:19 PM |
Ben I didn't proof read or do anything to this. I legit typed what I had in mind. Look at the top where it states freestyle smh y Tryna start a nitwitted convosation |
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| 02 Oct 2015 07:44 PM |
"Ben I didn't proof read or do anything to this."
ik yer grammer sucks m8.
"I legit typed what I had in mind. Look at the top where it states freestyle smh y Tryna start a nitwitted convosation"
yes, and it took you 5 hours to do it and think of the lyrics, thus defeating the purpose of a freestyle.
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| 03 Oct 2015 10:02 AM |
| I wrote this in 5 min. Its funny you're telling me what I did and did not do when I'm the writer of this rap. Pray for this Little kid |
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| 03 Oct 2015 11:17 AM |
"I wrote this in 5 min. Its funny you're telling me what I did and did not do when I'm the writer of this rap. Pray for this Little kid"
Aww, aren't you a tough little poser? Are you mad that I know this isn't a freestyle and it sucks?
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| 03 Oct 2015 02:44 PM |
"Um no.."
Adorable.
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| 03 Oct 2015 03:36 PM |
| being a 'freestyle' isn't an excuse to suck OP |
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| 03 Oct 2015 04:09 PM |
don't let these fuccbois hate on u man
they all suck themselves so their criticism means nothing, trust me I've seen a lot of their work |
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| 03 Oct 2015 04:11 PM |
| and also ben has no knowledge in hiphop. all he does is sarcastically glorify the "n-word" making him the edgiest kid on the face of the planet. dont let his weak words hurt u |
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| 03 Oct 2015 04:50 PM |
"and also ben has no knowledge in hiphop. all he does is sarcastically glorify the "n-word" making him the edgiest kid on the face of the planet. dont let his weak words hurt u"
Lol who are you? I know more than this kid knows about freestyles apparently. You and your wigger boyfriend can rub eachother all you want about how "good" your "raps" are, and how everyone who criticizes it is a "hater."
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| 03 Oct 2015 05:01 PM |
| woah man no need to get butthurt. all I was doing was informing op that you know nothing about hip hop, which you don't, so why so angry? lol |
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| 03 Oct 2015 05:45 PM |
"woah man no need to get butthurt. all I was doing was informing op that you know nothing about hip hop, which you don't, so why so angry? lol"
and like I said, who are you?
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