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rockmax2112alt is not online. rockmax2112alt
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01 Oct 2015 09:57 PM
1976.
Concorde Jet. Superbowl X. Apple.
Bicentinel anniversary.
Beach City.
Ah yes. It was remembered fondly Beach City was incorporated into... I forgot. It was nice: A marina was built, there was a local baseball team, and crime was pretty darn low. Businesses sprung up, and so forth many enjoyed their experince in Beach City.

Until the Crystal Gems showed up.

As they did, so did havoc, and trouble. Lots of trouble. Corrupted gems set their sights on the Crystal Gems, attacking relentlessly when they got the chance. Beach City was put in minor danger, some people hiding for their lives.

But weren't they supposed to help?

Some did. Some hid in the shadows, ready to strike at their opponents when ready. All of a sudden, everyone locked their doors at night. Curfew was imposed by police at times when it got bad.
Not all the time though. Some of the corrupted hold their ground in respect when a concert or city event was held.

Will you change the world arround you positively or negatively?

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Think of this as a Beta. If we like the reception we recieve, then we'll improve on it. Standard roleplaying rules as per usual. Please ask for info if needed. Admins are me and Englandish.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask.
OCs are allowed.
There's no set plot, feel free to make your own subplot and snowball it into one big plot.
Canon characters are not allowed.
Me> Admins> You

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Human:

Name:
Appearance:
Age:
Gender:
Job: (if any)
Bio:

Gem

Name:
Appearance
Gender Identity:
Morale: (Are you good or bad, or in between? )
Bio:
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rockmax2112alt is not online. rockmax2112alt
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02 Oct 2015 07:15 AM
excelsis deo

"And now you will see a baked Appel."
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rockmax2112alt is not online. rockmax2112alt
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02 Oct 2015 03:54 PM
bump the lump
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rockmax2112alt is not online. rockmax2112alt
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02 Oct 2015 05:42 PM
screaming
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levian8877 is not online. levian8877
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02 Oct 2015 06:25 PM
1. Not enough detail on the setting and gems.

2. A few grammar mistakes.

Overall 6/10.
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Kolrr is not online. Kolrr
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02 Oct 2015 06:27 PM
Yeah, could use some work.

I'm not an expert, but I think this could use some work.
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rockmax2112alt is not online. rockmax2112alt
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02 Oct 2015 06:35 PM
This is why I said "Beta."
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levian8877 is not online. levian8877
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02 Oct 2015 06:39 PM
If you're going to release a beta, at least finish the core parts first.
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rockmax2112alt is not online. rockmax2112alt
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02 Oct 2015 06:44 PM
Yes, I know there is a COMPLETE lack of detail (I apologize), but I'm merely testing the waters.
How much more info do you need?

"And now you will see a baked Appel."
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levian8877 is not online. levian8877
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02 Oct 2015 06:49 PM
A little more on setting, like time period and what the hell is a gem.
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Kolrr is not online. Kolrr
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02 Oct 2015 06:52 PM
Even if it's in Beta.

Still needs more information.

:/
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rockmax2112alt is not online. rockmax2112alt
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02 Oct 2015 06:53 PM
"1976"
there you go

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Kolrr is not online. Kolrr
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02 Oct 2015 06:59 PM
To be honest.

I don't really care, I don't like Steven Universe anyway, have fun with your fantasies/RP,
Good day.
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rockmax2112alt is not online. rockmax2112alt
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02 Oct 2015 06:59 PM
ok
like kid
i wasn't even talking to you

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Kolrr is not online. Kolrr
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02 Oct 2015 07:03 PM
Then don't respond, duh.

Also, using kid as an insult just makes you look dumb, on how you don't think before you say.
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rockmax2112alt is not online. rockmax2112alt
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02 Oct 2015 07:15 PM
oh my god
clearly you don't know me
I'm not trying to insult you

"And now you will see a baked Appel."
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Kolrr is not online. Kolrr
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02 Oct 2015 07:24 PM
Well,

either way, don't just assume I'm a kid. (Or say I am)

Because most people use kid as an insult. Think before you say.
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levian8877 is not online. levian8877
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02 Oct 2015 07:38 PM
What the hell is a gem!?

What the hell is a Steven Universe!?
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Kolrr is not online. Kolrr
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02 Oct 2015 07:41 PM
Steven Universe is a kid show, never watched it, but that's all I know.

A gem is a superhuman in it I guess?
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rockmax2112alt is not online. rockmax2112alt
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02 Oct 2015 07:45 PM
"a gem"
shall be explained in revised edition
"what is a steven universe"
*cries*

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MrStilts is not online. MrStilts
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02 Oct 2015 08:49 PM
"Steven Universe is a kid show, never watched it, but that's all I know."

Oh sweet, ignorant child. You have yet to be blessed by the magnificence that is Steven Universe. But do not fret, for the internet shall direct you towards the path of enlightenment!

But seriously, unlike this RP, Steven Universe is an awesome show. Go watch a few episodes on YouTube if you have to, it's great.
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rockmax2112alt is not online. rockmax2112alt
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02 Oct 2015 08:51 PM
"unlike this"
*jumps off of bridge*

"And now you will see a baked Appel."
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levian8877 is not online. levian8877
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02 Oct 2015 08:52 PM
He'll be back, no one really dies in the RPF.

*sigh*
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rockmax2112alt is not online. rockmax2112alt
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02 Oct 2015 08:53 PM
woah like man i saw the light
it was eric johnson's guitar
hot damn that's my new siggy

"And now you will see a baked Appel."
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levian8877 is not online. levian8877
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02 Oct 2015 09:01 PM
See?
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