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Re: J Bridge ~ Sick Freestyle

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SuspiciousAmazement is not online. SuspiciousAmazement
Joined: 30 Jul 2010
Total Posts: 237
08 Jun 2015 08:23 PM
I showed up, but I showed up late.
I came to catch bodys, then dump those bodys in a lake.
I came to kill puppies and stuff ‘em in a crate.
I came to thrill my buddies, oh god is this my fate.

Here comes a lyrical ambassador, about to create another massive massicre.
My s[] go so hard, they make all the bars in capitol, im a beast but treated like a harmless animal.
Im attached and not detachable, im not about to act rational, not about to act practical.
Im a rap bot, im lyrically made mechanical.
My level of authenticity is not touchable, lil b[] ill eat you’re a$$ up like a lunchable.
Like I said im an animal but im still not huntable.
Im climbing a mountain of height, you just couldn’t sustain, im eradicating every memory up outta your brain, your b[] smell f1shy like shes from Maine.
But I still make that b[] w3t like shes standing in the rain.
Oh god im insane.
Im from the streets, that’s were my heart will always remain.
My freestyles are fire, I say this s[] is from the dome I bet you five dollars they call me a liar.
Sir, starting beef with me is not your desire, they talk s[] about my lyrics because im the one they admire.
Im making n[]s tear up they contracts, and n[] im so h1gh im in the Adirondacks.
B[] I make your left brain compact, once you bomb me im sure ill bomb back, got that?
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UniversalDanger2 is not online. UniversalDanger2
Joined: 27 Jan 2015
Total Posts: 431
08 Jun 2015 08:31 PM
The syllable count is fine, could be improved. I liked the idea of it, good bars.
This is probably around an 8.8/10
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Indiella is not online. Indiella
Joined: 15 Jul 2011
Total Posts: 2603
08 Jun 2015 09:20 PM
Good rhymes and good bars, but the grammar and spelling could improve. 8/10. :)
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SuspiciousAmazement is not online. SuspiciousAmazement
Joined: 30 Jul 2010
Total Posts: 237
08 Jun 2015 09:38 PM
thx noobs
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JimmyVercetti is not online. JimmyVercetti
Joined: 18 May 2012
Total Posts: 2086
08 Jun 2015 10:18 PM
This right here is the descent into insanity described in "rapping", this person has become so egotistical that they believe they are good rappers, that they write about sadistic massacres in the hopes of people being amused by it, but it is not amusing. I would recommend you help this man into a mental institution before it is too late.
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XxRainbowVortexX is not online. XxRainbowVortexX
Joined: 22 Jun 2013
Total Posts: 7
09 Jun 2015 11:58 AM
um ok
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SuspiciousAmazement is not online. SuspiciousAmazement
Joined: 30 Jul 2010
Total Posts: 237
09 Jun 2015 06:58 PM
@JimmyV Thanks for your support!
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darius979 is not online. darius979
Joined: 24 Jul 2012
Total Posts: 26
28 Sep 2015 04:49 PM
That was amazing! 9/10 fr! Message me and check out my song and see how THAT is! Thanks, here's the link http://web.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=175076431
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REDDITiiPurepker219 is not online. REDDITiiPurepker219
Joined: 07 Sep 2008
Total Posts: 3656
28 Sep 2015 04:50 PM
"I came to kill puppies and stuff ‘em in a crate."

jesus dude don't make me call peta or something
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