LightRaid
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| 28 Sep 2015 04:43 PM |
Unquestionable in power this king is, However, unhappily he lived, full of greed and lust However this king was wise and kind, knowing and passionate, But not once did he stop and think beside himself That the love of money is the root of all evil Once realizing greed was no way of happiness He gave his life to God, followed the lord's footsteps Surprisingly this king was still unhappy Roaming the streets and trying to find a purpose One foggy night a light appeared, a lantern glowed Holding it high stood a shaggy man with coffee
The shaggy man homeless held his lantern and smiled Was he really happy living like that? The king pondered Mmmh, yes, he is happy living homeless,
The shaggy man walked by this king, and laughed
"Hello! O, gracious king!" The shaggy man roared Tears came to the laughing eyes of the man, But the king ignored him and kept moving forwards No, I changed my mind, that man is not very happy... |
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CHONGUS
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Unit8699
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| 28 Sep 2015 04:44 PM |
| Can't be too good if you have to go to C&G for approval. |
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Yan117
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| 28 Sep 2015 04:44 PM |
| "You're pretty good" -Big Boss |
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teslobo
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Paracosm
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LightRaid
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| 28 Sep 2015 04:49 PM |
| paracosm, im undeniably the cutest c&g'er there ever is or was. |
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Paracosm
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LightRaid
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| 28 Sep 2015 04:55 PM |
You don't know about that?
Welp, now you know. |
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teslobo
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| 28 Sep 2015 04:56 PM |
Wait, there's 1 adverb in there. Your word classes are still imbalanced. |
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