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LightRaid is not online. LightRaid
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28 Sep 2015 04:43 PM
Unquestionable in power this king is,
However, unhappily he lived, full of greed and lust
However this king was wise and kind, knowing and passionate,
But not once did he stop and think beside himself
That the love of money is the root of all evil
Once realizing greed was no way of happiness
He gave his life to God, followed the lord's footsteps
Surprisingly this king was still unhappy
Roaming the streets and trying to find a purpose
One foggy night a light appeared, a lantern glowed
Holding it high stood a shaggy man with coffee

The shaggy man homeless held his lantern and smiled
Was he really happy living like that? The king pondered
Mmmh, yes, he is happy living homeless,

The shaggy man walked by this king, and laughed

"Hello! O, gracious king!" The shaggy man roared
Tears came to the laughing eyes of the man,
But the king ignored him and kept moving forwards
No, I changed my mind, that man is not very happy...
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CHONGUS is not online. CHONGUS
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28 Sep 2015 04:43 PM
Pretty bad lol
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Unit8699 is not online. Unit8699
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28 Sep 2015 04:44 PM
Can't be too good if you have to go to C&G for approval.
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Yan117 is not online. Yan117
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28 Sep 2015 04:44 PM
typing*
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JorDandere is not online. JorDandere
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28 Sep 2015 04:44 PM
"You're pretty good" -Big Boss
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teslobo is not online. teslobo
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28 Sep 2015 04:44 PM
Literally 0 adverbs.
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Paracosm is not online. Paracosm
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28 Sep 2015 04:45 PM
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LightRaid is not online. LightRaid
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28 Sep 2015 04:49 PM
paracosm, im undeniably the cutest c&g'er there ever is or was.
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Paracosm is not online. Paracosm
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28 Sep 2015 04:54 PM
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LightRaid is not online. LightRaid
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28 Sep 2015 04:55 PM
You don't know about that?

Welp, now you know.
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teslobo is not online. teslobo
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28 Sep 2015 04:56 PM
Wait, there's 1 adverb in there.
Your word classes are still imbalanced.
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28 Sep 2015 04:56 PM
sike
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