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| 23 Sep 2015 04:50 PM |
This time I am not writing a murder mystery, but something in a different drama. I won't reveal anymore but this will be a lot more awesome than the murder mysteries. All Tess+ are in the story.
Here is a preview(this is not the start but a piece of what is to come).
The story will come out once it has been written and edited in whole(a week or 2?)
Vannarz was running as hard as he can. The arrow in his side was nothing compared to the pain of the burn on the right side of his face. With his sword out, he was on the run. He wasn't scared, he just knew he couldn't take them. LongRhino jumped out in front of him, Xhuaix from the back. He was surrounded. Vannarz didn't falter. He raised his sword up and charged towards Xhuaix. Xhuaix deflected the blow, but barely. Good, he was an easy target. He quickly brought his sword around and blocked a slash from behind. He had predicted a backslash from Long. Vannarz started panting. Long is a good foe, but Vannarz knew he could beat him. Xhuaix is less of a threat than Long is, but he can’t underestimate him. Fighting them one at a time, easy. But both? Not possible. Vannarz cursed and went to slash at Long. Long put his guard up to block it but Vannarz continued his spin to slice into Xhuaix's arm. Xhuaix screamed and dropped his sword, clenching his arm and cursing. Vannarz, panting and wounded, turned to face LongRhino. "I can beat you, surrender." Vannarz said.
"No! It isn't supposed to end this way. I'm your higher rank, that means the legion needs me more than you! I don't want to do this but it needs to be done!" Long pleaded, a tear running down his cheek. He charged towards Vannarz, sanity gone, with his sword raised above his head with both hands. Vannarz easily dodged and stabbed Long through the chest.
"You let this get to you. I'm sorry but there was no other way." Vannarz said sorrowfully.
"I understand. You traitor..." And with that, Long went limp.
"Damn it... I didn't want it to end this way..." Vannarz cursed. A sword plowed through his shoulder. Vannarz gasped in pain, but his reflexes ,made his body turn around, with his other arm holding his sword at ready. Blood and sweat dripped off Vannarz.
"Don't underestimate me! You lost traitor! Die in the name of the legion!" Xhuaix screamed as he started his lounge. The wounds started to take a toll on Vannarz. The burn, the arrow, and now this sword wound, how is he supposed to fight back? The sword came down onto Vannarz.
Roma Fall, coming soon. |
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| 23 Sep 2015 05:00 PM |
| :O WRITE MORE NOW THIS IS TOO EPIC ALREADY |
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Vannarz
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Tekki
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| 23 Sep 2015 07:42 PM |
| haha vannarz is villian getrekt |
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longrhino
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Epixus
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| 24 Sep 2015 06:56 PM |
| Hi smorg30 do you remember me, its EpicSpartan32. |
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Ricky535
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| 24 Sep 2015 07:37 PM |
| "Then Ricky comes out of no where wearing a red bandana and no shirt holding 2 uzis and kills everyone" The End. It should end like this |
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xevious01
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| 24 Sep 2015 08:31 PM |
| Hey smorg, let me in the story. At least a background character please? Never been in your stories. |
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Arnexus
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| 25 Sep 2015 05:59 PM |
| long shouldnt live, he clearly was destroyed by van! |
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