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| 12 Sep 2015 06:58 PM |
I've been an alt for 2 years lol
And you people have yet to figure it out :| |
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goreboar
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| 12 Sep 2015 06:59 PM |
you're dignity
☠ i want to be put down, like a broken pet ☠ // この鍬でソウルジャボーイアップ |
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| 12 Sep 2015 07:01 PM |
Rate my poem for class
Cuanto más alto suba / menos ayuda te da. Como si hiciera / el mago con su mágica, lo que más queremos ya / tenemos decencia, alguna para dar la - / - ayuda por la suya. El Deán - quien hacía / sólo lo que quería, Sin pensar más en nada / de poder y codicia. La gente altiva no gana / hay que no confiarla, O perderemos nuestra / gloría y cortesía. En la gente confía / mas no se te exceda |
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| 12 Sep 2015 07:04 PM |
Nah, I'm no skid either Just pure human quality B)
HS
gloria doesn't have a diacritical mark mágica is an adjective, magia is the noun |
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| 12 Sep 2015 07:04 PM |
omg wtf was i doing omg
i wrote it while watching AHS ten piedad senor |
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| 12 Sep 2015 07:08 PM |
But other than those 2 little mistakes, pretty good
Ah, there's so much catholic music in every single genre in spanish, it's pretty hardcore
Though I'm more of a argentine tango guy myself |
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| 12 Sep 2015 07:09 PM |
thank you
we had to write a poem on a theme in "el conde lucanor" so i thought this was a good direction |
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Minutoria
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| 12 Sep 2015 07:10 PM |
| Assuming you are the alternate account of the deleted Ouendan? |
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| 12 Sep 2015 07:11 PM |
"Assuming you are the alternate account of the deleted Ouendan?"
ouendan died
que el descanza en paz |
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| 12 Sep 2015 07:12 PM |
Yeah, assuming that
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Oh my, so it was the song that was needed if you were to write about that Though the poem is very good, and it's very on track with the theme of the book
Well done ^^ |
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| 12 Sep 2015 07:14 PM |
"Though the poem is very good, and it's very on track with the theme of the book
Well done ^^"
ahh thank you <3<3<3
i even tried to write the poem with the rhyme scheme of los jugladores,
i think it is verso alejandrino |
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| 12 Sep 2015 07:17 PM |
| Alejandrino is 14 metric syllables per verse; and that's only the loose term, it can get even more specific with various rhyming and stress schemes |
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| 12 Sep 2015 07:22 PM |
" Alejandrino is 14 metric syllables per verse; and that's only the loose term, it can get even more specific with various rhyming and stress schemes "
wait did i accidentally seperate verses using / because each line is 14 syllables |
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