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JeffTheSwordShark is not online. JeffTheSwordShark
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03 Sep 2015 06:02 PM
curious as to why your roleplay failed? wondering if it was poor grammar or a bad plot? perhaps poor writing?

post a link to it here and people can say what they liked and disliked about it, and perhaps you can use the knowledge received from it to rewrite it and make it better.
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JeffTheSwordShark is not online. JeffTheSwordShark
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03 Sep 2015 06:02 PM
also, note: you can't use genre as something you liked or disliked about a roleplay, since everyone has their own preferred genres and roleplay types
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SirBookington is not online. SirBookington
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03 Sep 2015 06:03 PM
I'm here for the incessant berating of RPs.
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LNG257 is not online. LNG257
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03 Sep 2015 06:03 PM
No, all RPs fail because people were too lazy to join them.
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Babyrihno is not online. Babyrihno
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03 Sep 2015 06:10 PM
No, all RPs fail because people were too lazy to join them. [2]


You have not surrounded me, you merely placed me in a target-rich environment.
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SirBookington is not online. SirBookington
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03 Sep 2015 06:15 PM
That statement can be applied just about everywhere and still make sense.
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MintyVampire1 is not online. MintyVampire1
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03 Sep 2015 06:16 PM
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=172569219
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Babyrihno is not online. Babyrihno
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03 Sep 2015 06:17 PM
"Posted by MintyVampire1" Oh, I'm gonna have a field day with this.


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SirBookington is not online. SirBookington
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03 Sep 2015 06:18 PM
What is with that title?
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Babyrihno is not online. Babyrihno
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03 Sep 2015 06:21 PM
1. Werewolves are the most overused things next to Vampires ((Lil joke about Minties purity there.))
2. This is basically and ODing simulator except you don't get to choose your retarted counterpart
3. The plot is terrible, this story makes absolutely no sense.
4. There is no way humans would overpower werewolves like this.
Just a quick summary, will prepare a full rant on it later.


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TheGamingCinema is not online. TheGamingCinema
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03 Sep 2015 06:22 PM
@baby

dont even bother


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Babyrihno is not online. Babyrihno
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03 Sep 2015 06:23 PM
Criticizing Minty is fun, though :(


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TheGamingCinema is not online. TheGamingCinema
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03 Sep 2015 06:26 PM
-your stupid
-your dumb
-your a troll

thats my rant on minty


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sassygirl770 is not online. sassygirl770
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03 Sep 2015 07:11 PM
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=155852563
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tardysauce is not online. tardysauce
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03 Sep 2015 07:13 PM
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=170180401


i think people will bash me for this
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TheGamingCinema is not online. TheGamingCinema
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03 Sep 2015 07:14 PM
@tards
it more of died because noone was ever active on it


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firespark2002 is not online. firespark2002
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03 Sep 2015 07:17 PM
I guess this kinda counts.

I went back and found a REEEALLY old RP I made when I was a noob.

So, I fixed it up a little.

http://piratepad.net/ep/pad/view/ro.cjR6wJKmjdG/latest

Think it has potential?
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PawzKat is not online. PawzKat
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03 Sep 2015 07:18 PM
I'll criticize my own roleplay from last year.

Ahem.

DON'T USE THE BOOK PLOT, PAST ME.

It's never going to work out.
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marc12267 is not online. marc12267
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03 Sep 2015 08:44 PM
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=164561104
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eikoopmit is not online. eikoopmit
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03 Sep 2015 08:47 PM
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=158778757
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MrStilts is not online. MrStilts
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03 Sep 2015 09:09 PM
I'm quite partial to the CinemaSins method of criticism myself. Can we do a thread doing that as well?
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Babyrihno is not online. Babyrihno
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03 Sep 2015 09:09 PM
Where the Fudge Uncle Cinnamon Kiwi does CinemaSins come into this?


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happysupercooldude99 is not online. happysupercooldude99
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03 Sep 2015 09:10 PM
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=173134636
kk
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MrStilts is not online. MrStilts
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03 Sep 2015 09:12 PM
Absolutely none, dear rihno. I just like to use CinemaSins's method of nitpicking stories when criticizing roleplays.
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Babyrihno is not online. Babyrihno
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03 Sep 2015 09:13 PM
k


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