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| 03 Sep 2015 06:02 PM |
curious as to why your roleplay failed? wondering if it was poor grammar or a bad plot? perhaps poor writing?
post a link to it here and people can say what they liked and disliked about it, and perhaps you can use the knowledge received from it to rewrite it and make it better. |
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| 03 Sep 2015 06:02 PM |
| also, note: you can't use genre as something you liked or disliked about a roleplay, since everyone has their own preferred genres and roleplay types |
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| 03 Sep 2015 06:03 PM |
| I'm here for the incessant berating of RPs. |
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LNG257
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| 03 Sep 2015 06:03 PM |
| No, all RPs fail because people were too lazy to join them. |
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Babyrihno
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| 03 Sep 2015 06:10 PM |
No, all RPs fail because people were too lazy to join them. [2]
You have not surrounded me, you merely placed me in a target-rich environment. |
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| 03 Sep 2015 06:15 PM |
| That statement can be applied just about everywhere and still make sense. |
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| 03 Sep 2015 06:16 PM |
| http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=172569219 |
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Babyrihno
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| 03 Sep 2015 06:17 PM |
"Posted by MintyVampire1" Oh, I'm gonna have a field day with this.
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Babyrihno
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| 03 Sep 2015 06:21 PM |
1. Werewolves are the most overused things next to Vampires ((Lil joke about Minties purity there.)) 2. This is basically and ODing simulator except you don't get to choose your retarted counterpart 3. The plot is terrible, this story makes absolutely no sense. 4. There is no way humans would overpower werewolves like this. Just a quick summary, will prepare a full rant on it later.
You have not surrounded me, you merely placed me in a target-rich environment. |
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| 03 Sep 2015 06:22 PM |
@baby
dont even bother
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Babyrihno
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| 03 Sep 2015 06:23 PM |
Criticizing Minty is fun, though :(
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| 03 Sep 2015 06:26 PM |
-your stupid -your dumb -your a troll
thats my rant on minty
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| 03 Sep 2015 07:11 PM |
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=155852563
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| 03 Sep 2015 07:13 PM |
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=170180401
i think people will bash me for this |
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| 03 Sep 2015 07:14 PM |
@tards it more of died because noone was ever active on it
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| 03 Sep 2015 07:17 PM |
I guess this kinda counts.
I went back and found a REEEALLY old RP I made when I was a noob.
So, I fixed it up a little.
http://piratepad.net/ep/pad/view/ro.cjR6wJKmjdG/latest
Think it has potential? |
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PawzKat
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| 03 Sep 2015 07:18 PM |
I'll criticize my own roleplay from last year.
Ahem.
DON'T USE THE BOOK PLOT, PAST ME.
It's never going to work out.
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marc12267
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| 03 Sep 2015 08:44 PM |
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| 03 Sep 2015 08:47 PM |
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MrStilts
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| 03 Sep 2015 09:09 PM |
| I'm quite partial to the CinemaSins method of criticism myself. Can we do a thread doing that as well? |
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Babyrihno
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| 03 Sep 2015 09:09 PM |
Where the Fudge Uncle Cinnamon Kiwi does CinemaSins come into this?
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| 03 Sep 2015 09:10 PM |
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=173134636 kk |
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MrStilts
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| 03 Sep 2015 09:12 PM |
| Absolutely none, dear rihno. I just like to use CinemaSins's method of nitpicking stories when criticizing roleplays. |
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Babyrihno
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| 03 Sep 2015 09:13 PM |
k
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