wayne2018
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| 30 Aug 2015 12:39 AM |
http://www.roblox.com/games/277594955/Aroma-Mocha-Cafe-NOT-DONE-YET I need your opinions on that. |
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wayne2018
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Exine
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| 30 Aug 2015 10:28 AM |
try using a green pastel color the dirt has a bad color, make it dirt brown or brown
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wayne2018
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| 30 Aug 2015 12:11 PM |
| What dirt are you talking about? |
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Exine
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| 30 Aug 2015 12:12 PM |
| the one in the cafe, with the plants in it |
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wayne2018
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| 30 Aug 2015 12:27 PM |
| Oh ok, I will see how it looks in other colours. |
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wayne2018
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wayne2018
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lovisp
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| 30 Aug 2015 07:28 PM |
Meh, ok I guess
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wayne2018
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| 30 Aug 2015 07:38 PM |
| @lovisp How should I improve it? |
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lovisp
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| 30 Aug 2015 07:39 PM |
Idek lol
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wayne2018
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| 30 Aug 2015 11:31 PM |
| Another Bump. I need more opinions... |
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| 31 Aug 2015 12:55 AM |
I think it's way too big, and there's too much empty space. And everything's spaced too far apart. Go around where you live and look for cafes and restaurants to see how everything is sized in proportion to the tables.
Of course, I'm sure that you wouldn't want to have to rebuild the place, so a good fix would be to add a bunch of walls to separate everything. You could make some bathrooms and storage rooms if you need ideas of how to fill in space. You could also add decorative screens, columns, and other types of big things to help separate everything. Maybe some fountains or aquariums. You could also make a raised up area with a stage. You could also cut the high walls in half making a loft overlooking the rest of the cafe, put some tables there.
Also, everything's by a grid. The planters are all straight and the tables run in equal measurements by them. It's pretty plain. Maybe make the planters in different shapes like L or U shaped. Whatever you see in Teris could work.
Other than the problems with the interior, the exterior is actually amazing. |
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| 31 Aug 2015 01:04 AM |
| Also forgot to add. Your color scheme isn't very varied. Everything is pretty much just green or white. The chairs and tables blend in too well with the planters. You can look up good color schemes online. That's where I get most of my ideas from. |
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wayne2018
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| 31 Aug 2015 06:11 PM |
| Not bad... but most cafe's have a ton of detail right now, so i suggest taking away the carpet in the cafe' and add wood flooring or something, but dont use a material, actually make the wood flooring yourself |
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