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| 30 Aug 2015 12:00 PM |
I really think this system is a bunch of bull crap just another lame excuse to make another dumb rap. How much does it take to get you to the limit, not that much cause you're loading a gun wit bullets
Guess how much it costs to pay for that little gun, It's over- priced to kill a man, one shot and they are done. Come to the ghetto, Don't start a fight yet though, Cause you people already got us on the hit list row.
Man, Donald was that racist, When the Spanish didn't say sh**, people wanna fight and our leader says "go on with it".
These fights aren't necessary, argue with me 'till I'm buried, I don't care what you have to say, I'll leave your thoughts to decay.
Keep your thoughts in your head, That's what my daddy said, He was told that everyday and not a tear was shed
Look, our leader isn't alone he has the government to guide him, but they gave him all these weapons and look how far he went with them, and he is going farther and that is the truth, fam.
How the heck we survived, no clue I'm just so surprised, our leaders keep fighting, I wonder how we're still alive. You think it's bad now Just wait next they'll leave prisoners out there cells and unsupervised.
Man, Donald was that racist, When the Spanish didn't say sh**, people wanna fight and our leader says "go on with it".
These fights aren't necessary, argue with me 'till I'm buried, I don't care what you have to say, I'll leave your thoughts to decay.
Keep your thoughts in your head, That's what my daddy said, He was told that everyday and not a tear was shed
The father saw the weapons, and they ended up overlooked. People fight against him, but He never gave a [-]. No matter How much advise he took, He says he protects us, Yet he is only hurting us, now isn't that just fabulous
Sh** is getting worse so I put my mind into this verse. Yet it does not help sh** this is like some god dang curse my message is already in this rap so don't play it in reverse.
Man, Donald was that racist, When the Spanish didn't say sh**, people wanna fight and our leader says "go on with it".
These fights aren't necessary, argue with me 'till I'm buried, I don't care what you have to say, I'll leave your thoughts to decay.
Keep your thoughts in your head, That's what my daddy said, He was told that everyday and not a tear was shed
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| 30 Aug 2015 12:13 PM |
6/10 Try separating the bars and letting us know whats the chorus and the verses. |
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| 30 Aug 2015 10:14 PM |
| 1/10 this makes me wish i had hiv |
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| 31 Aug 2015 07:09 AM |
| HIV isn't better than this, Suge Knight is. |
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| 31 Aug 2015 01:31 PM |
"Guess how much it costs to pay for that little gun, It's over- priced to kill a man"
what's that meant to mean?
you want a buy one, get one free deal on another columbine shooting, OP? |
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| 01 Sep 2015 06:35 AM |
| personally I would make 1 bar a sentence so then we know where your rhymes are and also meaning don't stretch a sentence across 3 bars and also rhyme the last words of the bars |
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| 04 Sep 2015 08:53 AM |
| @RED all i get from you is white kids cant rap basically cuz i see u talking sht on a bunch of forums that white kids posted |
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| 04 Sep 2015 09:35 AM |
"bunch of bull crap just another lame excuse to make another dumb rap."
I agree, this was just another one of your dumb raps. Great job including that in the song. |
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| 04 Sep 2015 10:39 AM |
It sounds like you got the first portion of your rap from the beginning of Lupe Fiasco's Words I Never Said.
"I really think this system is a bunch of bull crap just another lame excuse to make another dumb rap. How much does it take to get you to the limit, not that much cause you're loading a gun wit bullets."
"I really think the war on terrors' just a bunch of bull___. How much money does it take to really make a full clip. 9/11 building 7, did they really pull it." |
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| 04 Sep 2015 10:42 AM |
"Man, Donald was that racist, When the Spanish didn't say sh**, people wanna fight and our leader says "go on with it"."
"Limbaugh is a racist, Glenn Beck is a racist. Gaza Strip was gettin bombed, Obama didnt say [ish]."
Yep,definitely inspired from Lupe Fiasco. |
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| 04 Sep 2015 10:00 PM |
| ^ Other than the fact he claims like 4 lies hes the only rapper i have the tiniest bit of respect for |
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| 08 Sep 2015 02:53 PM |
you need to s t o p
shawty imma party till the sun down |
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| 09 Sep 2015 02:03 PM |
| they killed 2pac to spare him the embarassment of this rap |
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| 09 Sep 2015 02:46 PM |
oh yeah this kid's funny lol
"@RED all i get from you is white kids cant rap basically cuz i see u talking sht on a bunch of forums that white kids posted"
ayylmao this comment lads
demographic has nothing to do with the matter, the thing is this kid got no talent |
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