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Re: Comeback rap :/

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clovergate is not online. clovergate
Joined: 31 Mar 2014
Total Posts: 92
30 Aug 2015 12:00 PM
I really think this system is a
bunch of bull crap just another
lame excuse to make another
dumb rap. How much does it
take to get you to the limit, not
that much cause you're loading
a gun wit bullets


Guess how much it costs to pay
for that little gun, It's over-
priced to kill a man, one shot
and they are done. Come to
the ghetto, Don't start a fight
yet though, Cause you people
already got us on the
hit list row.

Man, Donald was that racist,
When the Spanish didn't say
sh**, people wanna fight and
our leader says "go on with it".

These fights aren't necessary,
argue with me 'till I'm buried, I
don't care what you have to
say, I'll leave your thoughts to
decay.

Keep your thoughts in your
head, That's what my daddy
said, He was told that everyday
and not a tear was shed


Look, our leader isn't alone
he has the government to guide
him, but they gave him all
these weapons and look how far
he went with them, and he is
going farther and that is the
truth, fam.

How the heck we survived, no
clue I'm just so surprised,
our leaders keep fighting,
I wonder how we're still
alive. You think it's bad now
Just wait next they'll leave
prisoners out there cells and
unsupervised.

Man, Donald was that racist,
When the Spanish didn't say
sh**, people wanna fight and
our leader says "go on with it".


These fights aren't necessary,
argue with me 'till I'm buried, I
don't care what you have to
say, I'll leave your thoughts to
decay.

Keep your thoughts in your
head, That's what my daddy
said, He was told that everyday
and not a tear was shed

The father saw the weapons,
and they ended up overlooked.
People fight against him, but
He never gave a [-]. No matter
How much advise he took, He
says he protects us, Yet he is
only hurting us, now isn't that
just fabulous


Sh** is getting worse so I
put my mind into this verse.
Yet it does not help sh** this
is like some god dang curse my
message is already in this rap
so don't play it in reverse.


Man, Donald was that racist,
When the Spanish didn't say
sh**, people wanna fight and
our leader says "go on with it".


These fights aren't necessary,
argue with me 'till I'm buried, I
don't care what you have to
say, I'll leave your thoughts to
decay.

Keep your thoughts in your
head, That's what my daddy
said, He was told that everyday
and not a tear was shed



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1x1x1x5x6x7 is not online. 1x1x1x5x6x7
Joined: 29 Jun 2013
Total Posts: 117
30 Aug 2015 12:13 PM
6/10
Try separating the bars and letting us know whats the chorus and the verses.
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PUSH5 is not online. PUSH5
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30 Aug 2015 12:54 PM
10/10 sick
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HuskiesPancake is not online. HuskiesPancake
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30 Aug 2015 01:06 PM
lol
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DeathplantHD is not online. DeathplantHD
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30 Aug 2015 01:47 PM
Uh, umm...
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Takamitsu is not online. Takamitsu
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30 Aug 2015 01:49 PM
10/10
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CapitalSteezz is not online. CapitalSteezz
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30 Aug 2015 02:33 PM
3/10
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HaywoodYablomeh is not online. HaywoodYablomeh
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Total Posts: 8096
30 Aug 2015 10:14 PM
1/10 this makes me wish i had hiv
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1x1x1x5x6x7 is not online. 1x1x1x5x6x7
Joined: 29 Jun 2013
Total Posts: 117
31 Aug 2015 07:09 AM
HIV isn't better than this, Suge Knight is.
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clovergate is not online. clovergate
Joined: 31 Mar 2014
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31 Aug 2015 12:13 PM
...
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REDDITiiPurepker219 is not online. REDDITiiPurepker219
Joined: 07 Sep 2008
Total Posts: 3656
31 Aug 2015 01:31 PM
"Guess how much it costs to pay
for that little gun, It's over-
priced to kill a man"

what's that meant to mean?

you want a buy one, get one free deal on another columbine shooting, OP?
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edgechristian is not online. edgechristian
Joined: 12 Apr 2011
Total Posts: 160
01 Sep 2015 06:35 AM
personally I would make 1 bar a sentence so then we know where your rhymes are and also meaning don't stretch a sentence across 3 bars and also rhyme the last words of the bars
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clovergate is not online. clovergate
Joined: 31 Mar 2014
Total Posts: 92
04 Sep 2015 08:53 AM
@RED all i get from you is white kids cant rap basically cuz i see u talking sht on a bunch of forums that white kids posted
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mynameisidiot14 is not online. mynameisidiot14
Joined: 25 May 2012
Total Posts: 7160
04 Sep 2015 09:35 AM
"bunch of bull crap just another
lame excuse to make another
dumb rap."


I agree, this was just another one of your dumb raps. Great job including that in the song.
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ThAfro is not online. ThAfro
Joined: 06 Jan 2012
Total Posts: 2357
04 Sep 2015 10:39 AM
It sounds like you got the first portion of your rap from the beginning of Lupe Fiasco's Words I Never Said.


"I really think this system is a
bunch of bull crap just another
lame excuse to make another
dumb rap. How much does it
take to get you to the limit, not
that much cause you're loading
a gun wit bullets."


"I really think the war on terrors' just a bunch
of bull___. How much money does it take to really
make a full clip. 9/11 building 7, did they really pull it."
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ThAfro is not online. ThAfro
Joined: 06 Jan 2012
Total Posts: 2357
04 Sep 2015 10:42 AM
"Man, Donald was that racist,
When the Spanish didn't say
sh**, people wanna fight and
our leader says "go on with it"."


"Limbaugh is a racist, Glenn Beck is
a racist. Gaza Strip was gettin bombed,
Obama didnt say [ish]."


Yep,definitely inspired from Lupe Fiasco.
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clovergate is not online. clovergate
Joined: 31 Mar 2014
Total Posts: 92
04 Sep 2015 10:00 PM
^ Other than the fact he claims like 4 lies hes the only rapper i have the tiniest bit of respect for
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HaywoodYablomeh is not online. HaywoodYablomeh
Joined: 25 May 2010
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06 Sep 2015 04:56 PM
no rhythm :(
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clovergate is not online. clovergate
Joined: 31 Mar 2014
Total Posts: 92
08 Sep 2015 11:18 AM
^ wow your blind
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hanseoul is not online. hanseoul
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Total Posts: 779
08 Sep 2015 02:53 PM
you need to s t o p


shawty imma party till the sun down
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meldo is not online. meldo
Joined: 04 Nov 2008
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08 Sep 2015 02:54 PM
expand your vocabulary
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GalaxyIII is not online. GalaxyIII
Joined: 26 Apr 2013
Total Posts: 885
08 Sep 2015 03:23 PM
Beyond SSJ Terrible
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HaywoodYablomeh is not online. HaywoodYablomeh
Joined: 25 May 2010
Total Posts: 8096
09 Sep 2015 02:03 PM
they killed 2pac to spare him the embarassment of this rap
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XxjasonxX900 is not online. XxjasonxX900
Joined: 02 Jul 2010
Total Posts: 143
09 Sep 2015 02:44 PM
now that's 2edgy4me
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REDDITiiPurepker219 is not online. REDDITiiPurepker219
Joined: 07 Sep 2008
Total Posts: 3656
09 Sep 2015 02:46 PM
oh yeah this kid's funny lol

"@RED all i get from you is white kids cant rap basically cuz i see u talking sht on a bunch of forums that white kids posted"

ayylmao this comment lads

demographic has nothing to do with the matter, the thing is this kid got no talent
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