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| 24 Aug 2015 05:18 PM |
Why am I so sad? It just got me thinking Of the darkest memories My happiness, it escapes me The sadness comes in And despair kicks in I feel a thousand knives Slashing my emotions I cry rivers filled with misery The curtains close up And I fell deep into the river But I can breathe just fine My pain is unbearable It made me feel like nothing at all I feel a giant sting in my heart And I feel emotional But as I cry I take my heart And fill it with pain I dont feel any special All I get is nothing And I feel emotional The clock is ticking And as it ticks I get more emotional I sharpen my knife And strike the happiness The joy, it left me And sorrow creeps in And as the sadness gets me All I can do is cry
But as I cry I fell deep in the pain But I can't feel it I feel like a bomb Ready to blow Ready to blow me into pain But as I cry I feel like ice Freezing in tears But as I cry
As I fell into the abyss The emotional pain caught me as I fell It grabbed my heart And filled it with tears And as the tears fill up my heart I can feel the the joy leave me I can feel the shots of bullets Targeting my heart And as the tears spill out All I feel is despair The feeling of emotions Is not what I wanted And as I cry I take in the pain And fill my sadness With despair |
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| 24 Aug 2015 05:21 PM |
Dude, what the heck :( I only wanted to share what I wrote, I didn't think I would get MASS criticism! It wasn't supposed to be "cute" and "funny"! :( |
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| 24 Aug 2015 05:23 PM |
| Why is ROBLOX so cruel? ;-; |
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| 24 Aug 2015 05:23 PM |
| this has quality. that of an average cringy emo preteen, squeaking while reciting a mediocre copy-pasted poem at a poetry reading, live on the mic. |
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| 24 Aug 2015 05:25 PM |
| I didn't copy this from anything! I actually wrote it! Well, I copied it from my Evernote but I still wrote it! |
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| 24 Aug 2015 05:25 PM |
What about mine?:
*whistle noises* WOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH DAFDASDADADADA DADADAD ADADA FANBOY CHUM CHUM ADADADIJ ABAD ABDABDA DANF ASFNARAS FANBOY CHUM CHUM DO DA CRAZY DO DA CRAZY FANBOY CHUM CHUM DOSDJOGKODSDODODKSODODOOD CRAZYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY *more whistle noises* BRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN FREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZZZZZEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE FANBOY CHUM CHUM FANBOY CHUM CHUMA JHABSASBDADSIJSKDAJNFSBJDA BADADABDABDBADABDABDBA |
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| 24 Aug 2015 05:26 PM |
| No no, I mean the ' critisim ' wasnt at all what he had to type, it was copy paste. |
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| 24 Aug 2015 05:27 PM |
so let me break it down to a more understandable level, let's go down the checklist. -repetitive -cringy -squeaky emo preteen quality -trash
the only good thing about this is that you're not trying to link us to your soundcloud or get us to buy your mixtape. |
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| 24 Aug 2015 05:28 PM |
| Oh, ok, sorry about the confusion |
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| 24 Aug 2015 05:29 PM |
| I guess, but I can't even make a mixtape nor do I want anyone to listen to it, it doesnt even have a recording nor anything. I just wrote it for future references but this is what my life is right now, filled with hate and criticism. But emo preteen? Really? |
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| 24 Aug 2015 05:30 PM |
| it couldn't get much more emo preteen. |
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| 24 Aug 2015 05:31 PM |
| What does emo preteen even mean? |
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| 24 Aug 2015 05:32 PM |
| go look up both words on google, and put the definitions side by side. |
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| 24 Aug 2015 05:33 PM |
| Oh, but I am not emo. I actually really hate rock music and I don't act emo or anything, I always dress in bright colors are dark blue + grey. |
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| 24 Aug 2015 06:03 PM |
liking rock music doesn't make you emo.
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| 24 Aug 2015 06:06 PM |
| Grammy Song Of The Year 2016 |
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