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WoundedPlayer is not online. WoundedPlayer
Joined: 23 Aug 2015
Total Posts: 13
24 Aug 2015 05:18 PM
Why am I so sad?
It just got me thinking
Of the darkest memories
My happiness, it escapes me
The sadness comes in
And despair kicks in
I feel a thousand knives
Slashing my emotions
I cry rivers filled with misery
The curtains close up
And I fell deep into the river
But I can breathe just fine
My pain is unbearable
It made me feel like nothing at all
I feel a giant sting in my heart
And I feel emotional
But as I cry
I take my heart
And fill it with pain
I dont feel any special
All I get is nothing
And I feel emotional
The clock is ticking
And as it ticks
I get more emotional
I sharpen my knife
And strike the happiness
The joy, it left me
And sorrow creeps in
And as the sadness gets me
All I can do is cry

But as I cry
I fell deep in the pain
But I can't feel it
I feel like a bomb
Ready to blow
Ready to blow me into pain
But as I cry
I feel like ice
Freezing in tears
But as I cry

As I fell into the abyss
The emotional pain caught me as I fell
It grabbed my heart
And filled it with tears
And as the tears fill up my heart
I can feel the the joy leave me
I can feel the shots of bullets
Targeting my heart
And as the tears spill out
All I feel is despair
The feeling of emotions
Is not what I wanted
And as I cry
I take in the pain
And fill my sadness
With despair
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luffyman50 is not online. luffyman50
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24 Aug 2015 05:19 PM
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WoundedPlayer is not online. WoundedPlayer
Joined: 23 Aug 2015
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24 Aug 2015 05:21 PM
Dude, what the heck :(
I only wanted to share what I wrote, I didn't think I would get MASS criticism! It wasn't supposed to be "cute" and "funny"! :(
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WoundedPlayer is not online. WoundedPlayer
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24 Aug 2015 05:23 PM
Why is ROBLOX so cruel? ;-;
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CorrodedBlade is not online. CorrodedBlade
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24 Aug 2015 05:23 PM
this has quality. that of an average cringy emo preteen, squeaking while reciting a mediocre copy-pasted poem at a poetry reading, live on the mic.
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Papafrye2 is not online. Papafrye2
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Total Posts: 1579
24 Aug 2015 05:24 PM
Play, its just copy paste
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WoundedPlayer is not online. WoundedPlayer
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24 Aug 2015 05:25 PM
I didn't copy this from anything! I actually wrote it! Well, I copied it from my Evernote but I still wrote it!
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getsome is not online. getsome
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Total Posts: 165
24 Aug 2015 05:25 PM
What about mine?:

*whistle noises*
WOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
DAFDASDADADADA DADADAD ADADA FANBOY CHUM CHUM ADADADIJ ABAD ABDABDA DANF ASFNARAS FANBOY CHUM CHUM DO DA CRAZY DO DA CRAZY FANBOY CHUM CHUM DOSDJOGKODSDODODKSODODOOD CRAZYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY *more whistle noises* BRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN FREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZZZZZEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
FANBOY CHUM CHUM FANBOY CHUM CHUMA JHABSASBDADSIJSKDAJNFSBJDA BADADABDABDBADABDABDBA
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Papafrye2 is not online. Papafrye2
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24 Aug 2015 05:26 PM
No no, I mean the ' critisim ' wasnt at all what he had to type, it was copy paste.
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Papafrye2 is not online. Papafrye2
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24 Aug 2015 05:26 PM
criticism
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CorrodedBlade is not online. CorrodedBlade
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24 Aug 2015 05:27 PM
so let me break it down to a more understandable level, let's go down the checklist.
-repetitive
-cringy
-squeaky emo preteen quality
-trash

the only good thing about this is that you're not trying to link us to your soundcloud or get us to buy your mixtape.
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WoundedPlayer is not online. WoundedPlayer
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24 Aug 2015 05:28 PM
Oh, ok, sorry about the confusion
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WoundedPlayer is not online. WoundedPlayer
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24 Aug 2015 05:29 PM
I guess, but I can't even make a mixtape nor do I want anyone to listen to it, it doesnt even have a recording nor anything. I just wrote it for future references but this is what my life is right now, filled with hate and criticism. But emo preteen? Really?
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CorrodedBlade is not online. CorrodedBlade
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24 Aug 2015 05:30 PM
it couldn't get much more emo preteen.
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WoundedPlayer is not online. WoundedPlayer
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24 Aug 2015 05:31 PM
What does emo preteen even mean?
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CorrodedBlade is not online. CorrodedBlade
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24 Aug 2015 05:32 PM
go look up both words on google, and put the definitions side by side.
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WoundedPlayer is not online. WoundedPlayer
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24 Aug 2015 05:33 PM
Oh, but I am not emo. I actually really hate rock music and I don't act emo or anything, I always dress in bright colors are dark blue + grey.
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CorrodedBlade is not online. CorrodedBlade
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24 Aug 2015 06:03 PM
liking rock music doesn't make you emo.
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DynamicalTobi is not online. DynamicalTobi
Joined: 12 Feb 2012
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24 Aug 2015 06:06 PM
Grammy Song Of The Year 2016
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