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| 24 Aug 2015 08:11 AM |
theres a guy that doesn't use any spelling or grammar when hes rping so it got really annoying
since im the owner of the rp group I told him to use spelling and grammar and he barely changed
so I decided to edit one of his posts with proper spelling and grammar etc. this is the edited version and underneath is the non edited version. it sounds like a different person.
PJ was sitting inside his house, when suddenly, Brownie came to him with her food bowl. "Aw, I'll get you some food, girl," He said as he got up and poured her the food. He was hoping he would get a knock on the door, seeing as how the group said they would go to his house. But instead they went to Matt's place.
Pj sat inside when suddenly Brownie came to him with her food bowl. "Aw, ill get you some food girl". He got up and poured her food which she than proceeded to eat. Her water bowl was already full. He was hoping he would get a knock on thw door seeing as how the group said they would go to his house but instead they went to Matts. |
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zeldu22
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| 24 Aug 2015 08:11 AM |
theres a guy that doesn't use any spelling or grammar when hes rping so it got really annoying
since im the owner of the rp group I told him to use spelling and grammar and he barely changed
so I decided to edit one of his posts with proper spelling and grammar etc. this is the edited version and underneath is the non edited version. it sounds like a different person.
PJ was sitting inside his house, when suddenly, Brownie came to him with her food bowl. "Aw, I'll get you some food, girl," He said as he got up and poured her the food. He was hoping he would get a knock on the door, seeing as how the group said they would go to his house. But instead they went to Matt's place.
Pj sat inside when suddenly Brownie came to him with her food bowl. "Aw, ill get you some food girl". He got up and poured her food which she than proceeded to eat. Her water bowl was already full. He was hoping he would get a knock on thw door seeing as how the group said they would go to his house but instead they went to Matts.
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| 24 Aug 2015 08:12 AM |
you didnt even have proper grammar plus, this is an awful roleplay. go roleplay on atf:r or something, not complex roleplay or something like that |
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| 24 Aug 2015 08:16 AM |
"you didnt even have proper grammar plus, this is an awful roleplay. go roleplay on atf:r or something, not complex roleplay or something like that"
I dont use grammar on the forums
it only sounds awful because hes an awful rper
and fyi it wasnt even in a game its group wall rp so think before you assume |
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Enlighty
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| 24 Aug 2015 08:17 AM |
theres a guy that doesn't use any spelling or grammar when hes rping so it got really annoying
since im the owner of the rp group I told him to use spelling and grammar and he barely changed
so I decided to edit one of his posts with proper spelling and grammar etc. this is the edited version and underneath is the non edited version. it sounds like a different person.
PJ was sitting inside his house, when suddenly, Brownie came to him with her food bowl. "Aw, I'll get you some food, girl," He said as he got up and poured her the food. He was hoping he would get a knock on the door, seeing as how the group said they would go to his house. But instead they went to Matt's place.
Pj sat inside when suddenly Brownie came to him with her food bowl. "Aw, ill get you some food girl". He got up and poured her food which she than proceeded to eat. Her water bowl was already full. He was hoping he would get a knock on thw door seeing as how the group said they would go to his house but instead they went to Matts. |
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| 24 Aug 2015 08:24 AM |
| so I don't use grammar I don't really care that's just me |
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