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| 22 Aug 2015 07:18 PM |
this crappypasta is meant to teach players not to fall for those scams. read on:
Roblox. It was one of my favorite games. It was. Because of an event that happened, I am too scared to connect online ever again. It was because of someone behind their computer screen...
A long time ago, back in 2013, I was bored online. I wanted to find a fun, blocky sandbox game. I tried many sites, such as Minecraft, but they didn't appeal to me. I then stumbled across Roblox, an online brick building site. I played as a guest for the first time, and I pressed the giant green "Play" button on the homepage. It brought me to a game called; "Welcome to ROBLOX Building".
I instantly fell in love with it. Because I used to play with lego bricks when I was 5, I was the best builder in each server I played. So I made a decision to make an account, and named it; "kevin5323". Many people had fancy clothes that tried to simulate real life clothes, but I liked my basic colors and my cap.
Overtime, people started bullying me, calling me; "noobs", and "fat". I learnt to ignore it, but almost everyone in each server started calling me those names. I had enough. I decided to buy clothes, but I didn't have enough. Most people set their clothes to; 25 "robux", or 250 tickets. I didn't have enough tickets or robux to buy them, so I started going nuts. But then I found something that I thought would benefit me.
A person on Welcome to ROBLOX Building's commentary posted something like this; "GET 99999999 ROBUX HERE FOR FREE HERE: [LINKHERE]". I was happy when I saw this, but I forgot this phrase at the time; "Something's might be too good to be true".
Not knowing this was a scam, I casually clicked the link and it took me to a page. "Welcome to ROBLOX awards! In order for us to deliver your gifts, please enter your account information here". The site then brought up a Username and PW entry box, for me to put my account details in. Not knowing I made a huge mistake, I entered kevin5325's account details in there. This would then become a thing I regret.
The site then made a message pop up on my computer; "Thank you! Your prizes will be delivered in a day". I was so happy, but I didn't know what was coming up.
I decided to go to sleep, since it was 12:52 PM for me. I couldn't wait what awaits me in the morning.
When I woke up, I went on reddit to post, and then later ROBLOX. I attempted to login to kevin5323, but the account information I put in was "wrong". "What? I don't even get it.", I said. But then a couple of minutes later, a message popped up on my computer. It read; "Hello". I was scared, so I shut off my computer for the day. I was afraid to touch my computer, I went down to watch my TV for the rest of the day.
However, something awful happened later at 9:32 PM.
I heard a huge crash. I was scared out of my mind, but I thought it was just somebody else. I heard it again, and it was coming through my door. I heard it the third time, and I realized what it was; an axe. I panicked, and immediately ran to my bedroom. I locked my bedroom door, and hid under the bed, trying to not make noise. Then, the crashes stopped. I heard foot steps. Step. Step. Step. STEP. STEP. STEP. STEP. It just kept closer to where I am, I was so scared. Then, the door knob for my bedroom turned. Someone was trying to break in through my bedroom. I nearly fainted.
I had no service, since I forgot to pay my phone company. I couldn't reach for my computer to get help. I just remembered my house is only 1 story, and there was only one thing I could do; jump out of the window. I got out of the bed, and went to my window. Then, an axe crashed through my door. I had to run. So I did do one thing;
jumped out of the window.
I ran out into the forest as a shortcut to the police station. I got tired, and I fainted in the middle of the woods. I woke up in a hospital where a nurse told me I was staying here for a couple of nights. I thought it was nice that someone found me out there.
However, what was odd was that I always see a person peering through the room's windows when I try to go to sleep. |
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| 22 Aug 2015 07:21 PM |
"Overtime, people started bullying me, calling me; 'noobs', and 'fat'." "calling me; 'noobs', and 'fat'." "'fat'." All robloxians are the same size though... |
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| 22 Aug 2015 07:22 PM |
@master
i forgot to mention in the crappypasta, that the people who called me that were 2.0s |
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mikkerj
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| 22 Aug 2015 07:24 PM |
LMAO THIS IS SO BAD
but true, watch out kids, you will be murdered in your sleep if you fall for the phishing site links |
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| 22 Aug 2015 07:27 PM |
@mikkerj
ik its bad, this was literally my first creepypasta so i called it crappypasta
but i'd like to hear some constructive criticisms to improve my writing in the future. |
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NoobSalad
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| 22 Aug 2015 07:32 PM |
| I don't understand the intrusion. Who was it? Why were they there? Not quite sure how they fit into the story. |
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mikkerj
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| 22 Aug 2015 07:48 PM |
@Galacticnoobie
Actually, the writing was pretty good.
The story was really good until the last part where the guy with the axe came. It wasn't very believable since it was just the surface web and all the guy gave was his Roblox account info.
If it was the deep web then I'd believe it. Or like the guy's computer got hacked and screwed up and stuff.
Overall though, pretty good! 6/10 |
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| 22 Aug 2015 07:59 PM |
@mikker
but all websites can get a person's IP, right? |
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| 22 Aug 2015 07:59 PM |
@Galactic did you quit ATR?
http://www.roblox.com/Bacon-Pants-2-item?id=263574260 - In-case your hungry ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |
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mikkerj
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| 22 Aug 2015 08:01 PM |
@Galactic
Actually, you may be right on that. I'm not sure, but I just assumed no.
So, I COULD believe the guy with the axe actually came.
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| 22 Aug 2015 08:05 PM |
tl;dr
"just because some people say the sun is hot, it doesn't mean its hot" -jaden smith |
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Ecylados
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| 22 Aug 2015 08:07 PM |
i cant sleep now
+10.4k posts |
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| 22 Aug 2015 08:30 PM |
@TheNOTCreepyZionist
I forum in different subforums. |
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| 22 Aug 2015 08:46 PM |
@Galactic Ahh
http://www.roblox.com/Bacon-Pants-2-item?id=263574260 - In-case your hungry ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |
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| 22 Aug 2015 08:54 PM |
Good storyline, but not that good to be creepy. First of all, you're being to exact with the times. Most creepypastas have some sort of "amnesia" effect to it, so for example, instead of 9:32 PM, you should've been like, "I think at like 9 PM in the night". Yeah.
Second of all, when you blacked out in the woods and awoke, doesn't make sense either. It's pretty much impossible to be blacked out that long unless, for a reason, you went into a coma.
Third of all doesn't seem that realistic. How would they find your house? Like, with the IP sure, unless you live in a town so small they could identify where you live |
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| 22 Aug 2015 08:58 PM |
| Wait; nvm about falling in the forest and blacking out. I read that wrong. The hospital part seems correct, they could have put you into a medically-induced coma, or you just could have woken up several times and forgot (due to damage), nice job on that part |
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| 22 Aug 2015 09:02 PM |
| Originally, I had a well thought out post with suggestions and ideas, as well as constructive arguments for parts of the story that would probably make people respond with 'tl;dr' but there was some kind of violation in it that I couldn't find after like half an hour and I couldn't care to search it out anymore. So you get this. Gg, ROBLOX, gg. This story isn't the best I've read, but it certainly is not bad. a 6/10 I would say. I'd like to see more, possibly a continuation on this story, for example backstory on the user posting the scam, maybe a story about him getting banned and some banter between him and moderators, backstory on the ax psycho, cause I don't really see the ax guy being directly linked to the scam site. |
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| 22 Aug 2015 09:07 PM |
| AMAZING BUT I WANT THE LINK! I WANT 999999999 ROBUX! |
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