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mboy789 is not online. mboy789
Joined: 25 Apr 2012
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17 Aug 2015 10:00 PM
r.i.p



I want to get a youtube account VERY badly :(


WHY IS IT NOT FAIR!?!!




~Cola and meal please, no bread~
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Zanebus is not online. Zanebus
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17 Aug 2015 10:00 PM
Bug I don't think you're cut out for OT.


I see a little silhouetto of a man,
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MrCherrys is not online. MrCherrys
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17 Aug 2015 10:00 PM
Well technically, it may be as part of my improvisation as I decided to leave it up. I'm good like that.
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Zanebus is not online. Zanebus
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17 Aug 2015 10:01 PM
HOLY I WAS LOOKING AT THE 1st PAGE.
Dangit.


I see a little silhouetto of a man,
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Nteorvolri is not online. Nteorvolri
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17 Aug 2015 10:01 PM
"I can forum wherever I like, whenever I like. It's my acc."
wrong.
your account must abide by the roblox rules.
roblox rules state that you are to post your thread in the correct subforum
off topic is for threads that do not violate other rules, but do not fit in other subforums.
this belongs in VCR.
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowForum.aspx?ForumID=52
this thread is spam otherwise.
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MrCherrys is not online. MrCherrys
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17 Aug 2015 10:02 PM
@Zane

At first I started to think 'what is he talking about' until you said, haha. It's best to look through before you post though.
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jonny1367 is not online. jonny1367
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17 Aug 2015 10:04 PM
you arent good like that, sorry

go come up with a unique idea, write a script that a decent number of people find funny at your school, and practice editing before making a video

maybe it wont be as bad as what you put out now
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MrCherrys is not online. MrCherrys
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17 Aug 2015 10:06 PM
Nah I'm alright.

I actually did write up a script before the making of the video, also I go to a music college so I don't think they'd find it interesting other than music.
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Havemeat is not online. Havemeat
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17 Aug 2015 10:07 PM
only took a few posts from OP to make me lose my respect for him
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jonny1367 is not online. jonny1367
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17 Aug 2015 10:08 PM
guess you wont ever grow to be a good content creator :/
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MrCherrys is not online. MrCherrys
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17 Aug 2015 10:10 PM
Havemeat?

Sorry if this is random to you but I think I know you from somewhere.

Are you this guy from the fame club group? USCM15 (whatever his name is I forgot)
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MrCherrys is not online. MrCherrys
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17 Aug 2015 10:12 PM
@jonny

My channel is still growing; I grew my channel by making roblox tutorials and roblox gameplays.
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Havemeat is not online. Havemeat
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17 Aug 2015 10:12 PM
@mr
no that was a previous owner of the account
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internalservos is not online. internalservos
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17 Aug 2015 10:15 PM
op is an idiot
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jonny1367 is not online. jonny1367
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17 Aug 2015 10:16 PM
except that most channels about roblox have a pretty low sub ceiling
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MrCherrys is not online. MrCherrys
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17 Aug 2015 10:18 PM
Anyways, guys listen.

I know you're all saying I'm in the wrong forum, but there weren't a lot of people on the video creations forum; it's just lack of feedback so I decided to post here. I said I made my first animation video, and then I got to the point where I'm getting all the flame? Please guys, you're taking this way too seriously. OD'ing may be irrelevant and obsolete but it brings back the good and weird memories as I remember it back in 2010.

You guys probably won't listen so you guys are better off leaving this forum post.
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MrCherrys is not online. MrCherrys
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17 Aug 2015 10:19 PM
I know right, but I might jump into something that's more recent.
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Havemeat is not online. Havemeat
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17 Aug 2015 10:36 PM
okay i watched it, and i dont think you deserve decent criticism but since you're being such a stuck up brat ill tell you whats wrong with your video

- the camera work is terrible, especially during the scenes when you're controlling the camera
- the plot is really boring and unoriginal (we've had a lot of oding vids already)
- the jokes are stale and untasteful
- the dialog is..dreadful to be honest. i lost all interest 1:30 into the video.
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Syref is not online. Syref
Joined: 24 Jun 2012
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17 Aug 2015 10:39 PM
Ok, I'll do two reviews.

OPINION TRULY BASED ON VIDEO QUALITY

Obviously, character voices is crap. The camera work is decent, I guess,could be a bit better. As for the script, it's not the most original
idea. Your map detail and props are not the best. I do however like the editing, with the interview bit.

Overall 3.5/10 based on quality.

OPINON BASED ON FACT THAT YOUVE NEVER MADE A MACHINIMA

It's pretty good, better than the ones I've made. If you are enjoying making machinimas, I highly suggest you try and do these.
-find good resource of sound effects
-voice acting, definitely a must have
-better editing software (unless you already have one)
-prop and map makers, gives you more creativity and more recognition as using your own stuff

Overall 8/106 for a beginner.

Keep trying mate, it looks like YouTubeing makes you happy, and that's what's important.
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BinaryStud is not online. BinaryStud
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17 Aug 2015 10:44 PM
Hey, I was wondering, can I be in your next machinima? I can listen to orders you give me, and I've never really been in a machinima before, so yeah. If you reply to my post with a "yes", I would be super happy.
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BinaryStud is not online. BinaryStud
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17 Aug 2015 10:49 PM
just so you know, I am NOT a troll. I'm completely honest. Trust me, okay?
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MrCherrys is not online. MrCherrys
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17 Aug 2015 10:51 PM
@Havemeat

Ah right so you're someone else using it, didn't know.

Beside negative things about my recording (I'm alright with your cons and stuff), is there anything good like my thumbnails, parts of the video, etc?

@Syref

Your review seems good enough and at least you're honest about it. I acknowledge it's not great but I had to start somewhere however. For my next machinima or video, I will have to find someone who are willing to take part in a video shoot.
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MrCherrys is not online. MrCherrys
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17 Aug 2015 10:53 PM
@Binary

I will think about it.
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BinaryStud is not online. BinaryStud
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17 Aug 2015 10:56 PM
lol good video. so hi-def. i love it.
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masterblokz is not online. masterblokz
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17 Aug 2015 11:07 PM
ur talking about getting money but you get like 3 bucks for every 1000 views and your channel probably isn't even partnered yet lol
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