mboy789
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:00 PM |
r.i.p
I want to get a youtube account VERY badly :(
WHY IS IT NOT FAIR!?!!
~Cola and meal please, no bread~ |
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Zanebus
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:00 PM |
Bug I don't think you're cut out for OT.
I see a little silhouetto of a man, |
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MrCherrys
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:00 PM |
| Well technically, it may be as part of my improvisation as I decided to leave it up. I'm good like that. |
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Zanebus
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:01 PM |
HOLY I WAS LOOKING AT THE 1st PAGE. Dangit.
I see a little silhouetto of a man, |
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:01 PM |
"I can forum wherever I like, whenever I like. It's my acc." wrong. your account must abide by the roblox rules. roblox rules state that you are to post your thread in the correct subforum off topic is for threads that do not violate other rules, but do not fit in other subforums. this belongs in VCR. http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowForum.aspx?ForumID=52 this thread is spam otherwise. |
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MrCherrys
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:02 PM |
@Zane
At first I started to think 'what is he talking about' until you said, haha. It's best to look through before you post though. |
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jonny1367
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:04 PM |
you arent good like that, sorry
go come up with a unique idea, write a script that a decent number of people find funny at your school, and practice editing before making a video
maybe it wont be as bad as what you put out now |
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MrCherrys
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:06 PM |
Nah I'm alright.
I actually did write up a script before the making of the video, also I go to a music college so I don't think they'd find it interesting other than music. |
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Havemeat
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:07 PM |
| only took a few posts from OP to make me lose my respect for him |
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jonny1367
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:08 PM |
| guess you wont ever grow to be a good content creator :/ |
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MrCherrys
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:10 PM |
Havemeat?
Sorry if this is random to you but I think I know you from somewhere.
Are you this guy from the fame club group? USCM15 (whatever his name is I forgot) |
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MrCherrys
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:12 PM |
@jonny
My channel is still growing; I grew my channel by making roblox tutorials and roblox gameplays. |
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Havemeat
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:12 PM |
@mr no that was a previous owner of the account |
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jonny1367
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:16 PM |
| except that most channels about roblox have a pretty low sub ceiling |
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MrCherrys
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:18 PM |
Anyways, guys listen.
I know you're all saying I'm in the wrong forum, but there weren't a lot of people on the video creations forum; it's just lack of feedback so I decided to post here. I said I made my first animation video, and then I got to the point where I'm getting all the flame? Please guys, you're taking this way too seriously. OD'ing may be irrelevant and obsolete but it brings back the good and weird memories as I remember it back in 2010.
You guys probably won't listen so you guys are better off leaving this forum post. |
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MrCherrys
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:19 PM |
| I know right, but I might jump into something that's more recent. |
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Havemeat
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:36 PM |
okay i watched it, and i dont think you deserve decent criticism but since you're being such a stuck up brat ill tell you whats wrong with your video
- the camera work is terrible, especially during the scenes when you're controlling the camera - the plot is really boring and unoriginal (we've had a lot of oding vids already) - the jokes are stale and untasteful - the dialog is..dreadful to be honest. i lost all interest 1:30 into the video. |
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Syref
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:39 PM |
Ok, I'll do two reviews.
OPINION TRULY BASED ON VIDEO QUALITY
Obviously, character voices is crap. The camera work is decent, I guess,could be a bit better. As for the script, it's not the most original idea. Your map detail and props are not the best. I do however like the editing, with the interview bit.
Overall 3.5/10 based on quality.
OPINON BASED ON FACT THAT YOUVE NEVER MADE A MACHINIMA
It's pretty good, better than the ones I've made. If you are enjoying making machinimas, I highly suggest you try and do these. -find good resource of sound effects -voice acting, definitely a must have -better editing software (unless you already have one) -prop and map makers, gives you more creativity and more recognition as using your own stuff
Overall 8/106 for a beginner.
Keep trying mate, it looks like YouTubeing makes you happy, and that's what's important. |
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:44 PM |
| Hey, I was wondering, can I be in your next machinima? I can listen to orders you give me, and I've never really been in a machinima before, so yeah. If you reply to my post with a "yes", I would be super happy. |
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:49 PM |
| just so you know, I am NOT a troll. I'm completely honest. Trust me, okay? |
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MrCherrys
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:51 PM |
@Havemeat
Ah right so you're someone else using it, didn't know.
Beside negative things about my recording (I'm alright with your cons and stuff), is there anything good like my thumbnails, parts of the video, etc?
@Syref
Your review seems good enough and at least you're honest about it. I acknowledge it's not great but I had to start somewhere however. For my next machinima or video, I will have to find someone who are willing to take part in a video shoot. |
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MrCherrys
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:53 PM |
@Binary
I will think about it. |
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| 17 Aug 2015 10:56 PM |
| lol good video. so hi-def. i love it. |
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| 17 Aug 2015 11:07 PM |
| ur talking about getting money but you get like 3 bucks for every 1000 views and your channel probably isn't even partnered yet lol |
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