|
| 15 Aug 2015 04:59 PM |
I just watched this movie and frankly I'm disgusted by how many cliches and plot holes they threw in this. The writers and directors need to be slapped very, very hard. 1. He let some people put him on a board, deliver him to a room, and put him in captivity just to say "I knew you'd come back." Dumb move. 2. Should've said "CAUTION! GARY STU IS HOSTILE! I REPEAT! GARY STU IS HOSTILE!" 3. Victor can kill guards with some sort of psychokinesis, but he can't kill the Fantastic Four, perhaps because their Mary-Sueness matched his? 4. Kill someone precious to them cliche. 5. "VILLAIN, DON'T DO THIS" cliche. 6. "No. I am determined to do bad things." cliche 7. Looking at the others suffering and struggling cliche. 8. It seems that the elastic guy's personality up to the end from the climax's starting point is limited to cliche. 9. "I had plans for us, but now they're over. Goodbye." cliche. 10. They only show the destruction of one place on the earth, I assume either Russia, Canada, Alaska, or Colorado. What about the other countries? What happened in Mexico, the Sahara, South Africa, Cote D'Ivoire, China, India, Brazil, etc.? Is this supposed to be nationalism? 11. "You're going down." "No I'm not. You are." then villain is defeated cliche. 12. They fly towards the hole and but then suddenly goes superspeed.
To be honest, I was pretty self-conscious considering the first half was in my style of story telling, but now I'm not. I would NEVER put this many cliches in a single story. smh
also this is my opinion, but you're welcome to critique it (not like I could stop you from doing it anyway).
|
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
| |
|
|
| 15 Aug 2015 05:14 PM |
The fact that you forgot replace the normal e for the é used for cliché.
No capes! |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 15 Aug 2015 05:16 PM |
Auto-correct said it was correct. Also you can still understand it. |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 15 Aug 2015 05:17 PM |
Nothing's wrong with it, it's just that I prefer use of cliché instead of the normal cliche like you wrote in there.
No capes! |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 15 Aug 2015 05:18 PM |
Also, are you talking about the 2015 version of Fantastic Four?
No capes! |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
| |
|
|
| 15 Aug 2015 05:35 PM |
Oh yeah... this Fantastic Four film just made the 2005 film better.
No capes! |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
Kisila
|
  |
| Joined: 01 Jul 2010 |
| Total Posts: 3452 |
|
|
| 15 Aug 2015 10:07 PM |
oh
i actually liked the movie
the ending fight scene was pretty terrible but i liked how they dealt with them getting the powers and being tested on |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|