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| 10 Aug 2015 02:03 PM |
I've took the time to make a little mall with two stores right now. I'm planning to extend to over 20-30 stores and maybe 5 anchor stores.
Tell me what you think of it and give me any ideas of what I should put in it!
I'm planning on putting on outdoors so everyone can go outside and also spawn there instead. I'm planning to make the hall a wide area with a sky view on top of you. I won't add a second story. You can own a shop there for free (as long as you build it)! Just PM me and I'll help you out. I'm looking for some help on this game! Anyone caring to help can just PM me!
This will be paid access soon! I'm hoping you'll give me some ideas to make this mall a good game! |
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| 10 Aug 2015 02:06 PM |
I can't share a link to my game sadly. Place ID = 282251628 You can also click on my profile and you can find it there since it is the only place I got active. |
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| 10 Aug 2015 03:35 PM |
Really? I asked because you didn't even enter. Judging only two people came into a server with me and I was with them. If you were to come along, I would see three tickets in my Place Traffic Award instead of two.
Please judge when you come in the server, not by the thumbnail. |
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Plungeit
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| 10 Aug 2015 03:41 PM |
Your game looks nice! I like the style of it, especially with the logo above the doorway and a flag just next to it. This game has a lot of potential.
Here's some things that could be improved: -The hallway is very claustrophobic. Try expanding it's width a few blocks. -More shops (I know you are working on this) -Add ability to own a shop
Rating: 8/10 Good work! :D
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| 10 Aug 2015 03:49 PM |
My plan was to make users own a store and actually build it. However, I don't know if it will work so well. |
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| 10 Aug 2015 04:07 PM |
I'm changing up the floor for Microsoft. Kmart's floor will stay the same and in fact, someone can "adopt" Kmart and sell their own clothing in it or something. Gamestop building will be done and I'll start in Cinnabon. |
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| 10 Aug 2015 06:24 PM |
| Pretty nice so far. On a scale of 1-10 I'd rate it a 7/10. Needs stuff inside of the shops, plus it feels a little cramped inside. |
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| 10 Aug 2015 07:24 PM |
Thank you! Do you mean it feels cramp in the hall or the shops? The hallway will be upgraded soon. Also, I'm going to give players the option to PM me and build their own shops! |
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| 10 Aug 2015 11:24 PM |
| I'm going to script up an advanced music system so the mall can have some nice music. |
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| 11 Aug 2015 03:23 PM |
| it'd be nice if you gave the hallway a bit more design and colour. it looks really bland compared to the neon signs of the shops. plus, the windows store sign has a bit too much neon. try removing the neon from the white in the windows logo. |
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| 11 Aug 2015 03:49 PM |
All right! Thank you for your feedback.
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| 11 Aug 2015 11:34 PM |
Next update coming real soon! The mall actually kind of looks like a mall now! Music system to listen to music while shopping! |
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| 12 Aug 2015 12:02 AM |
Done! The update went successful! Music system has nine songs and will repeat. It will take about 18-20 minutes to listen to the whole thing. I'll start adding a store and then I'll make the right section of the mall a bit more pretty. Also, the mall will be a bit more larger. |
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| 12 Aug 2015 03:20 AM |
You tried.
3/10
just mı̸̸̸̸̸̸̸̸̸̸̸̸̸̸̸̸̨ade you wipe your screen |
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| 12 Aug 2015 11:50 AM |
I think your place is great. I gave a thumbs up. I feel like you could probably add some stuff inside, but other than that, it's great.
I would appreciate it if you could give my a place a visit too. http://www.roblox.com/games/116921900/Free-Admin-WIP
61 favorites, please visit my place! :)
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| 12 Aug 2015 01:39 PM |
| lol "check out my game" LOLOL BEST THREAD EVER RATED 11/10 |
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| 12 Aug 2015 03:15 PM |
@henrypeterson
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