Lyoxic
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| 11 Aug 2015 01:57 PM |
I - Welcome anybody who is reading my speech, I'm Lyoxic! Prefered to be called Lyo. :) As you can and may see I'm running for Senate, please read the body of this speech below!
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II - My experience in Rockport has been around like, lets say, 2-4 months, Country Concil in Monroe Country. I am very active, loyal, respectful, no matter if we fight or argue. For my Senate experience, if I get to have it, I'd give MANY ideas on what to improve, what to remove, and stuff like that. I've seen what Senates pretty much do, so you can already be counting onto me. I joined Rockport because only 1 GUY, Rvnz, has been a lot in Rockport since last year and I was like,"Maybe I should join??" And I made myself up and that's how I joined and what I am doing now. Making me new in Rockport won't stop me from becoming a Senate.
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-Lyoxic, Senate Candidate
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| 11 Aug 2015 01:58 PM |
Wrong forum. Get out OD'er.
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| 11 Aug 2015 01:59 PM |
| This is Roblox, not Congress. |
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iRxndom
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| 11 Aug 2015 02:17 PM |
NO DONT SUPPORT SUPPORT ME INSTEAD!!11111 FREE MUFFINS FOR ALL OF OT IF U SUPPORT ME I WANT TO BE A SENATE WHATEVER THAT IS |
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amrd
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| Joined: 23 Nov 2012 |
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| 11 Aug 2015 02:17 PM |
WHY ARE YOU PEOPLE IN OFF-TOPIC
When you become the lord of Narwhals, you have the responsibility to bring sparkles to the land. |
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| 11 Aug 2015 02:31 PM |
"I - Welcome anybody who is reading my speech, I'm Lyoxic! Prefered to be called Lyo. :)"
Informal senator runner-up is failed senator runner-up
"As you can and may see I'm running for Senate, please read the body of this speech below!"
No one would be reading this if they weren't going to read the body, but OK.
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Random black line for formality that doesn't impress
"II - My experience in Rockport has been around like, lets say, 2-4 months, Country Concil in Monroe Country."
Scratch that about being an informal senator runner-up, you're highly informal! >like >lets say
"I am very active, loyal, respectful, no matter if we fight or argue."
Active, loyal and respectful to who? Specifics, c'mon. And we should put that last part to the test.
" For my Senate experience, if I get to have it, I'd give MANY ideas on what to improve, what to remove, and stuff like that."
Your informality only gets worse. And what's with the idea bit? Anyone can give an idea, I could give a few right now just because. Free balloon day, ice cream parlour part night and chipotle thursday.
"I've seen what Senates pretty much do, so you can already be counting onto me."
So you're running for a position with a "what they pretty much do". Informal and inexperienced, tsk-tsk man.
" I joined Rockport because only 1 GUY, Rvnz, has been a lot in Rockport since last year and I was like,"Maybe I should join??""
You just dissed the entirety of Rockport for doing nothing aside from one guy. Good luck with boys, also, informal!
"And I made myself up and that's how I joined and what I am doing now. Making me new in Rockport won't stop me from becoming a Senate."
This whole section here confuses me, -10 points.
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Hey look, a line!
"III - Thanks for reading my speech, if you want me as a Senate, please put #Support and a nice comment below! It'll be a pleasure to see you supporting me!"
I didn't enjoy reading it, it was pretty bland. Also, why hashtags? Anyone could've just as easily posted "support". Not like ROBLOX has a trending system anyway. And I'm not supporting you, stop assuming that everyone making it to the end supports you!
"-Lyoxic, Senate Candidate"
*-Lyoxic, Informal Senate Canidate with gritty grammar and doesn't even know what the Senate does |
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Lyoxic
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| Joined: 28 Jun 2012 |
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| 11 Aug 2015 02:38 PM |
| Please, don't post complaints in a forum that someone made, it's not helpful, and, this is a game. |
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| 11 Aug 2015 03:04 PM |
"Please, don't post complaints in a forum that someone made, it's not helpful, and, this is a game."
please gtfo. Go to C7G, not here.
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DaggerJax
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| 11 Aug 2015 03:05 PM |
| screw TRC most corrupt group evar |
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| 11 Aug 2015 03:37 PM |
| i support the fact that you are stupid and this is the wrong subforum |
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| 11 Aug 2015 03:37 PM |
support
King of swag. (Not the wrong way, Unless you put it.) |
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iiMattx
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Inkswell
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| Joined: 11 Dec 2011 |
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| 11 Aug 2015 03:42 PM |
No support whatsoever, you don't even sound like you know what you're doing. " I've seen what Senates pretty much do, so you can already be counting onto me. " UH, I'VE SEEN IT ON TV ONCE, SO I'M PRETTY SURE I CAN DO IT.
Vote El Presidente, or else. |
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iiKateeee
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| Joined: 07 Aug 2012 |
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| 11 Aug 2015 03:43 PM |
#Support Senator Runner, iiKateeee |
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iStratix
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| 11 Aug 2015 03:51 PM |
| support and wrong forum section |
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| 11 Aug 2015 03:56 PM |
Support Rockport Senate kool kid |
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| 11 Aug 2015 04:24 PM |
"Please, don't post complaints in a forum that someone made"
I'm not complaining though. I just posted what I thought about your speech thing.
"it's not helpful"
You could use what I said to improve it, checkmate!!!!
"this is a game."
You're in the forums, that's not an excuse to be used here!!! |
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jcj10
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| Joined: 20 Feb 2009 |
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