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xAstra is not online. xAstra
Joined: 26 Jun 2013
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11 Aug 2015 12:00 PM
This is the main story I wanted to believe and build towards. For all of you wondering for the story summed up, here you go.



A kid who was bullied throughout his life and had no possible friends except just one. His one and only friend who was like a brother was there by his side for just about everything. As they went on through the years they were just about brothers. They played with eachother on the playground after school, where they would meet. One day comes around and their lives are turned around. The bullies and torture throughout the boy's life motivated him to join the army. He goes on a mission with another soldier and they later both get shot and killed. May the grave lay in the boy's name of a hero.
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xAstra is not online. xAstra
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11 Aug 2015 12:01 PM
Come watch the evolution of the story here;

http://www.roblox.com/games/282481117/Story-of-a-Soldier-45
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Plungeit is online. Plungeit
Joined: 20 Nov 2011
Total Posts: 11733
11 Aug 2015 12:27 PM
Looks nice.
I would slow down the music a bit and possibly extend the childhood part a little to show the full extent of the bullying.
Really good game!
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xAstra is not online. xAstra
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11 Aug 2015 01:11 PM
Thanks, Plungeit!
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kathy1234567890ka is not online. kathy1234567890ka
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11 Aug 2015 02:28 PM
but what
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someonedie is online. someonedie
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11 Aug 2015 03:49 PM
LOL, HE JOINS THE ARMY AND DIES LIEK A DUMMY XD
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xAstra is not online. xAstra
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11 Aug 2015 09:49 PM
Added people fighting them.
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gleamingcobra is not online. gleamingcobra
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14 Aug 2015 05:14 PM
I loved it, it was extremely sad but very inspirational, thank you.
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peaceoutb is not online. peaceoutb
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14 Aug 2015 06:08 PM
xD It wasn't 2 sad tbh the main lesson I was taught was to never join the army unless you have some special talent. Otherwise your gonna be put on the front line, and just like the story your gonna get shot and you'll be first to see the bullet.
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Ptochocracy is not online. Ptochocracy
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14 Aug 2015 06:29 PM
"You're gonna get put on the front line"

When joining, you decide your job. Yes they put you there, but its your choice.
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THEGAMEINGTUBE233 is not online. THEGAMEINGTUBE233
Joined: 31 Dec 2013
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14 Aug 2015 07:48 PM
"LOL, HE JOINS THE ARMY AND DIES LIEK A DUMMY XD"

What is wrong with you!? These people fight for our country just to keep the US safe! How would you feel if your dad or ANY family member joined the army and got shot?


@OP, Really sad game. Really good work as well.



---THEGAMINGTUBERBLX
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someonedie is online. someonedie
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14 Aug 2015 11:29 PM
The heck you getting all sore for? It's just a game, a satire joke, stupid.
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DesignerDavid is online. DesignerDavid
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15 Aug 2015 02:40 AM
Very touching. 10/10
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SkepticLemon is not online. SkepticLemon
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15 Aug 2015 04:25 AM
"They played with eachother on the playground after school"
I got the wrong impression xD

R u Srs?
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someonedie is online. someonedie
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15 Aug 2015 08:24 AM
LOL
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Jman88s is not online. Jman88s
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15 Aug 2015 09:16 AM
Why does everyone wear 2.0?


| i want dinosaurs dammit |
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THEGAMEINGTUBE233 is not online. THEGAMEINGTUBE233
Joined: 31 Dec 2013
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15 Aug 2015 11:59 AM
@Jman, it's because it makes them look like real people.




GAME: 8/8, m8 <---- 10/10



---THEGAMINGTUBERBLX
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GannibalTrixi is not online. GannibalTrixi
Joined: 07 Aug 2012
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15 Aug 2015 02:03 PM
a stupid cliche story for little girls
how come killing innocents and stealing oil is called "heroic" in the USA?
no thank u,not playing




GannibalTrixi,The commisar of RT
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KEVEKEV77 is not online. KEVEKEV77
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15 Aug 2015 02:12 PM
Some people have no hearts... :(
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xAstra is not online. xAstra
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15 Aug 2015 10:16 PM
Updated details, aswell as a picture.
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himycoolblocks is not online. himycoolblocks
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15 Aug 2015 10:24 PM
Lol I dunno
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Sxerks3 is not online. Sxerks3
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15 Aug 2015 10:57 PM
Very immersive, to say the least. I liked the ambience that the game exhibits. Its story is swell, as well.
Can't wait to see more of this.
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KEVEKEV77 is not online. KEVEKEV77
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15 Aug 2015 11:20 PM
ur name is disturbing
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JWARRIOR1 is not online. JWARRIOR1
Joined: 14 Jun 2009
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15 Aug 2015 11:56 PM
i love that idea, bringing awareness as well. i saw this awhile back and thought i would show it. It seems rather relevent http://www.roblox.com/games/155504568/Citizen-Soldier-A-True-Story
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blanchinSoos is not online. blanchinSoos
Joined: 14 Aug 2015
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16 Aug 2015 08:54 AM
the best game i ever played was this one.####### thing i like is the story. truly ################ it even made me cry!###### all i ###### to ### is..######## up the good work
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