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| 05 Aug 2015 01:34 AM |
| i promised to update all of my stories but i only did twice in june |
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| 05 Aug 2015 01:35 AM |
| all i can do to fix this is read other stories but ehh |
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| 05 Aug 2015 01:35 AM |
First Chapter= http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=168577010 Second Chapter= http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=168578754 Third Chapter= http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=168580678 Fourth Chapter= http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=168583163 Fifth Chapter= http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=168591774 Chapter Six= http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=168592909 Chapter Seven= http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=168594277 Chapter Eight= http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=168665738 Chapter Nine= http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=168667484
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=169291152
have some ideas |
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| 05 Aug 2015 01:36 AM |
@the
i know its parody stuff but jeez them paragraphs |
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| 05 Aug 2015 01:40 AM |
@greenie
then why post here
@the
your writings nice, but theres no paragraphs tho
like its kinda a wall of text |
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| 05 Aug 2015 01:42 AM |
i cant change it k
ill add some spaces between it ya know so its not a giant mess |
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| 05 Aug 2015 01:42 AM |
| but then again my writing isnt A+ so |
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| 05 Aug 2015 01:43 AM |
@the
i am aware of this. just tips for next time. |
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| 05 Aug 2015 01:47 AM |
| if you see me making a thread about story roles remind me to put spaces ya know? |
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