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| 22 Nov 2009 05:58 PM |
This is not real. I just wrote it for fun. PM me for chapter 2.
Cresent: Chapter 1 I sat down on the couch next to him. He smiled that crooked smile that I loved. I couldn't help smiling back. I leaned in for a kiss, but then the doorbell rang. I gave Edward a quick kiss and sprinted unhumanly to the door. It was Jacob. ''Hey Bella'' he greeted me. I gave him a big warm hug.Well in my case, cold. He shivered. ''Oh yeah sorry'' I apolgized. '' No problem, Bells I'm here to see Nessie'' he told me. ''Sure come in'' I gestured him to come in. He smiled. Then, that turned into a straight face when he saw Edward. But he just waved. I looked at Edward using a face saying be nice. He looked at me and tryed his best to keep smiling. I smiled back. I was staring at his glorious face and the Jake intrupted my doze. ''Um, Bell can we go see Nessie now?'' he said patiently. ''Oh yeah, sorry'' I said again. I guided him to Nessie's room, and we walked over to her bed. We looked in and we both gasped.She was gone. If I could cry, I would. Instead, I let out a scream. That was a mistake. By the time Edward got to the room, Alice and Jasper were at the door. I sprinted there. ''Alice just has a vision of you, going to the Volturi to be destroyed. What's going on?'' Jasper said in one breath. I could barely speak. ''It's Nessie, she's gone.'' Alice gasped. Jasper slowly pointed outside. There it was. Sam Uley carrying off my baby girl. Great. |
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| 22 Nov 2009 08:37 PM |
Cresent Chapter 2: I clenched my fist.I didn't know that one of Jake's old friends would actually do that.I was so deep into thought that I didn't even notice that Alice was having a vision.''Uh...Jasper?'' she said stuttering. He looked at her with wide eyes. ''No'' he said. I looked at Edward, frustrated. I could tell he was reading there minds. ''Oh no, not Alix'' Edward mumbled. ''Who is this Alix person??'' I demanded. Jasper opened his mouth to speak, but Alice started talking, ''Alix is a nomad. She dated Jasper until 1945'' she began,"She loves to see us Cullens in pain" Alice said finished. ''So what did you see her doing?''I asked. I needed my little nudger back. Badly. "She was going after Renesmee'' Alice told me. This is my first time as a vampire wanting to kill someone. I pulled on Edward's hand and we were all out the door to find my sweet little Nessie. I saw Sam, running into the forest,as a wolf. Nessie will never leave now. She probably thinks it's Jake. She's to smart, I kept telling myself. It was to late. they were no where in sight. I pulled myself to the ground. Maybe I will go see the Volturi, after all. Then, a beautiful, dark haired teenager came near us with someone in here hand. I squinted.Nessie!!! She came up to us, smirking. "I have your precious baby". I smiled, ''Thanks for finding her for us". I said trying to take her. " Oh, well your not getting her back" she said and evily laughed in Alice's face. Jasper stepped foward. " Give me my niece" he said, teethed clenched together. "Why should I, Jasper?" she asked. "because-because-" I could tell he was gonna lie. "because i love you". She smirked once again. Then, she jumped on Jasper and kissed him. Yup, that was Alix. |
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| 23 Nov 2009 01:49 PM |
| thx!! luv ur outfit ill be posting chapter 3 soon!! |
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| 23 Nov 2009 09:08 PM |
| hahaha i luv my character.alix.LULZ pwnzor story! |
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| 23 Nov 2009 09:14 PM |
| If that were me, it'd sound like this. I gave Edward a quick smack and ran outside the house laughing, as the pulled the pin out of the grenade and put it in his mailbox. The end. What you think? |
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| 23 Nov 2009 10:43 PM |
| oh hi's, bloom!! and lol to white |
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| 23 Nov 2009 10:43 PM |
Cresent Chapter 3: I looked at Alice's blank expression. I could tell she knew what Jasper was doing. He was trying to drag her into a trap. She jumped off of him with a great force and said,"I'll give you your precious-um... monster child back if you promise to love me,Jasper" and she smirked again. He looked at me than at Edward and back at Alix. "Sure I promise" he said, voice full of lies. She stepped foward and handed her to Edward. I looked down at her and smiled. By the time I looked back up she was gone. We all ran quickly through the forest, Nessie on Jake's shoulders. She loved being with him. Even if Jake wasn't imprinted I think he would love her. When we got back to the house, We all sat in the living room to talk. "Jasper, that was just a trap right?" Alice asked as soon as we sat down. He nodded. I spoke up."So, how are you gonna keep this up?" I asked him. He shrugged. We all sat there for a moment staring at him. Then finally, Jake spoke,"Why don't we just avoid her?". "It's really hard to do, escpially if it's a vampire" Alice told him. Then there was a sudden knock on the front door. I looked out the windo and saw Alix standing there. I inhumanly ran to Jasper and whispered "It's her" in his ear. He smacked his face with his hand and sighed. Another impatient knock. "Jaspey, I know your in there" she hissed.Then a sudden burst was heard and there she was, standing there in me and Edward's home. |
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bloxter33
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| 24 Nov 2009 05:25 AM |
| Oh, yay. Another dumb Twilight fangirl. |
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| 24 Nov 2009 12:34 PM |
| shut up noob. at least i have a hobby. |
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| 24 Nov 2009 12:37 PM |
| you must like it if your wasting your time even reading it and typing something about it. your probably jealous i get straight a's and can actually write a story, so i would shut your pie whole. |
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| 24 Nov 2009 10:21 PM |
Cresent Chapter 4: "Oh, you don't love me already, Jaspey?" She hissed at him. He got nervous. "Uh....Uh...." he stuttered. She just sat there watching him struggle. Then she cackled evily. "Hahaha!, You actually fell for that?" she yelled. Edward's eyebrows narrowed. "What do you mean?" Edward asked suspiously. "I have your sibilings held hostage. Rosalie and Emmet are their names?" she told us. I couldn't help letting out a gasp. She then scooped up Alice,Jacob, and Nessie and swiftly ran out, laughing. I let out a scream of frustration. Edward patted my back softly and touched his lips against my forehead, nearly kissing me. He whispered "Everything's gonna be okay" to me. I knew he was right. I sadly said "How are we gonna find them?". "We'll follow her scent. We should smell Alice and mostly Jacob too." he told me. I nodded slowly. "I'll go call Carlisle" Jasper said, running into our unused kitchen. I stood there, leaning against Edward. I'm happy I can actually call him my husband. My husband, Edward Cullen. Hello,I thought to my self, I'm Mrs.Isabella Marie Cullen. I smiled. I was so dazed that I didn't even notice Jasper come back in. I straighten up. Jasper was gasping for unneeded air. "Carlisle...said....she... has....Charlie." Me and Edward both gasped loudly. I think I was on the ground. |
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| 25 Nov 2009 05:07 PM |
| hahahaha niiiiiiice!lol alix is eviiil |
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| 25 Nov 2009 06:41 PM |
| *Sneaks out of house after planting dynomight* Okay now time to set it off *Pulls out match and throws it on gasoline.* BYE BYE *gets on bike and rides away as house explodes* |
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| 25 Nov 2009 06:49 PM |
| WEEE *Flown over sky and after a few hours is still flying* Wth? I wish i took a class on physics *Pulls out a coffee mug and pours coffee into it* |
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| 25 Nov 2009 10:20 PM |
It's really short but here: Cresent Chapter 5: I knew I wasn't dead. I'm a vampire now. I couldn't be dead. I felt Edward grab my hand a pull me up. I put stood unsteadly, holding my head. "I'm okay now,Edward" I assured him. I shook my head. "How did she get Charlie? He's at work" I asked, confused. "She must of lured him into a trap" Edward said. I nodded angrily. Just then, Jasper pushed is way through the kitchen door. He came up to Edward, whispering something in his ear. My eyes narrowed. Edward just stood there smiling that crooked smile, nodding. I just had to smile back. "Carlisle said that she took them to Sam's house." he said, chuckling. Wow. That was easy. We needed Jacob to show us the way. We all hopped into Edward's silver Volvo and drove to Jake's house. It didn't take long with Edward driving. I was first out, running ahead. "Bells, sweetie wait!" Edward shouted to me. I swiveled around quickly and saw that Edward and Jasper were right behind me. "We can't just burst through the door, you know" Jasper said. I gestured that we talk in the side forest. I had an idea. "Let's run through here," I pointed down the forest, "And sneak around back." Jasper and Edward both nodded. We all ran at vampire speed. Jasper was the first one there, so he slowly opened the back door. We all tipped-toed in. Vampires can walk really quietly. Edward gestured us to a room where laughing could be heard. There, we saw our beloved friends and family nailed down to the floor.
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| 26 Nov 2009 07:04 AM |
| WEEE *Crashes into house* WHAT THE...... I THOUGHT I BLEW THIS PLACE UP *jumps out window* |
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| 30 Nov 2009 03:32 PM |
| I apprectiate all the views. Thx!!! Sorry I havent been writing the next chapter, I need an thinking (NONE OF URS BILLY!!!) PM or post ur ideas here and ill pick the best!!! |
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| 30 Nov 2009 03:40 PM |
| sorry , (why did i write thinking?) i mean idea. |
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zaket22
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| 04 Dec 2009 06:31 PM |
| The book's titles are based on parts of the day. |
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| 04 Dec 2009 07:01 PM |
| and moon phases: new moon and eclipse |
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