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Re: Cresent: what happens after breaking dawn

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Scruffymushu is not online. Scruffymushu
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22 Nov 2009 05:58 PM
This is not real. I just wrote it for fun. PM me for chapter 2.

Cresent:
Chapter 1
I sat down on the couch next to him. He smiled that crooked smile
that I loved. I couldn't help smiling back. I leaned in for a
kiss, but then the doorbell rang. I gave Edward a quick kiss
and sprinted unhumanly to the door. It was Jacob. ''Hey Bella''
he greeted me. I gave him a big warm hug.Well in my case, cold.
He shivered. ''Oh yeah sorry'' I apolgized. '' No problem, Bells
I'm here to see Nessie'' he told me. ''Sure come in'' I gestured
him to come in. He smiled. Then, that turned into a straight
face when he saw Edward. But he just waved. I looked at Edward
using a face saying be nice. He looked at me and tryed his best
to keep smiling. I smiled back. I was staring at his glorious
face and the Jake intrupted my doze. ''Um, Bell can we go see
Nessie now?'' he said patiently. ''Oh yeah, sorry'' I said
again. I guided him to Nessie's room, and we walked over
to her bed. We looked in and we both gasped.She was gone.
If I could cry, I would. Instead, I let out a scream.
That was a mistake. By the time Edward got to the room,
Alice and Jasper were at the door. I sprinted there.
''Alice just has a vision of you, going to the Volturi
to be destroyed. What's going on?'' Jasper said in
one breath. I could barely speak. ''It's Nessie, she's gone.''
Alice gasped. Jasper slowly pointed outside. There it was.
Sam Uley carrying off my baby girl. Great.
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Scruffymushu is not online. Scruffymushu
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22 Nov 2009 08:37 PM
Cresent
Chapter 2:
I clenched my fist.I didn't know that one of Jake's old friends would
actually do that.I was so deep into thought that I didn't even notice
that Alice was having a vision.''Uh...Jasper?'' she said stuttering.
He looked at her with wide eyes. ''No'' he said. I looked at
Edward, frustrated. I could tell he was reading there minds.
''Oh no, not Alix'' Edward mumbled. ''Who is this Alix person??''
I demanded. Jasper opened his mouth to speak, but Alice started
talking, ''Alix is a nomad. She dated Jasper until 1945'' she
began,"She loves to see us Cullens in pain" Alice said finished.
''So what did you see her doing?''I asked. I needed my little
nudger back. Badly. "She was going after Renesmee'' Alice told
me. This is my first time as a vampire wanting to kill someone.
I pulled on Edward's hand and we were all out the door to find
my sweet little Nessie. I saw Sam, running into the forest,as
a wolf. Nessie will never leave now. She probably thinks it's
Jake. She's to smart, I kept telling myself. It was to late.
they were no where in sight. I pulled myself to the ground.
Maybe I will go see the Volturi, after all. Then, a
beautiful, dark haired teenager came near us with someone
in here hand. I squinted.Nessie!!! She came up to us,
smirking. "I have your precious baby". I smiled,
''Thanks for finding her for us". I said trying to
take her. " Oh, well your not getting her back" she
said and evily laughed in Alice's face. Jasper stepped foward.
" Give me my niece" he said, teethed clenched together.
"Why should I, Jasper?" she asked. "because-because-" I could
tell he was gonna lie. "because i love you". She smirked once
again. Then, she jumped on Jasper and kissed him. Yup, that
was Alix.
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22 Nov 2009 10:05 PM
Kewll...
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Scruffymushu is not online. Scruffymushu
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23 Nov 2009 01:49 PM
thx!! luv ur outfit ill be posting chapter 3 soon!!
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23 Nov 2009 09:08 PM
hahaha i luv my character.alix.LULZ pwnzor story!
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23 Nov 2009 09:14 PM
If that were me, it'd sound like this. I gave Edward a quick smack and ran outside the house laughing, as the pulled the pin out of the grenade and put it in his mailbox. The end. What you think?
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Scruffymushu is not online. Scruffymushu
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23 Nov 2009 10:43 PM
oh hi's, bloom!! and lol to white
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23 Nov 2009 10:43 PM

Cresent
Chapter 3:
I looked at Alice's blank expression. I could tell she knew
what Jasper was doing. He was trying to drag her into a trap. She
jumped off of him with a great force and said,"I'll give you your
precious-um... monster child back if you promise to love me,Jasper"
and she smirked again. He looked at me than at Edward and back at Alix.
"Sure I promise" he said, voice full of lies. She stepped foward and
handed her to Edward. I looked down at her and smiled. By the time
I looked back up she was gone. We all ran quickly through the forest,
Nessie on Jake's shoulders. She loved being with him. Even if Jake
wasn't imprinted I think he would love her. When we got back to the
house, We all sat in the living room to talk. "Jasper, that was
just a trap right?" Alice asked as soon as we sat down. He nodded.
I spoke up."So, how are you gonna keep this up?" I asked him. He
shrugged. We all sat there for a moment staring at him. Then finally,
Jake spoke,"Why don't we just avoid her?". "It's really hard to do,
escpially if it's a vampire" Alice told him. Then there was a
sudden knock on the front door. I looked out the windo and saw Alix
standing there. I inhumanly ran to Jasper and whispered "It's her" in
his ear. He smacked his face with his hand and sighed. Another
impatient knock. "Jaspey, I know your in there" she hissed.Then
a sudden burst was heard and there she was, standing there in me and
Edward's home.
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bloxter33 is not online. bloxter33
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24 Nov 2009 05:25 AM
Oh, yay. Another dumb Twilight fangirl.
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Scruffymushu is not online. Scruffymushu
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24 Nov 2009 12:34 PM
shut up noob. at least i have a hobby.
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Scruffymushu is not online. Scruffymushu
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24 Nov 2009 12:37 PM
you must like it if your wasting your time even reading it and typing something about it. your probably jealous i get straight a's and can actually write a story, so i would shut your pie whole.
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24 Nov 2009 10:21 PM
Cresent
Chapter 4:
"Oh, you don't love me already, Jaspey?" She hissed at him.
He got nervous. "Uh....Uh...." he stuttered. She just sat there
watching him struggle. Then she cackled evily. "Hahaha!, You
actually fell for that?" she yelled. Edward's eyebrows narrowed.
"What do you mean?" Edward asked suspiously. "I have your sibilings
held hostage. Rosalie and Emmet are their names?" she told us. I
couldn't help letting out a gasp. She then scooped up Alice,Jacob,
and Nessie and swiftly ran out, laughing. I let out a scream
of frustration. Edward patted my back softly and touched his lips
against my forehead, nearly kissing me. He whispered "Everything's
gonna be okay" to me. I knew he was right. I sadly said "How are
we gonna find them?". "We'll follow her scent. We should smell
Alice and mostly Jacob too." he told me. I nodded slowly. "I'll
go call Carlisle" Jasper said, running into our unused kitchen.
I stood there, leaning against Edward. I'm happy I can actually
call him my husband. My husband, Edward Cullen. Hello,I thought
to my self, I'm Mrs.Isabella Marie Cullen. I smiled. I was so
dazed that I didn't even notice Jasper come back in. I straighten
up. Jasper was gasping for unneeded air. "Carlisle...said....she...
has....Charlie." Me and Edward both gasped loudly. I think I was
on the ground.
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25 Nov 2009 05:07 PM
hahahaha niiiiiiice!lol alix is eviiil
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25 Nov 2009 06:41 PM
*Sneaks out of house after planting dynomight* Okay now time to set it off *Pulls out match and throws it on gasoline.* BYE BYE *gets on bike and rides away as house explodes*
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Scruffymushu is not online. Scruffymushu
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25 Nov 2009 06:48 PM
lol
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25 Nov 2009 06:49 PM
WEEE *Flown over sky and after a few hours is still flying* Wth? I wish i took a class on physics *Pulls out a coffee mug and pours coffee into it*
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Scruffymushu is not online. Scruffymushu
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25 Nov 2009 10:20 PM
It's really short but here:
Cresent
Chapter 5:
I knew I wasn't dead. I'm a vampire now. I couldn't be dead. I felt Edward grab my hand a pull
me up. I put stood unsteadly, holding my head. "I'm okay now,Edward" I assured him. I shook
my head. "How did she get Charlie? He's at work" I asked, confused. "She must of lured him into
a trap" Edward said. I nodded angrily. Just then, Jasper pushed is way through the kitchen door.
He came up to Edward, whispering something in his ear. My eyes narrowed. Edward just stood there
smiling that crooked smile, nodding. I just had to smile back. "Carlisle said that she took
them to Sam's house." he said, chuckling. Wow. That was easy. We needed Jacob to show us the way.
We all hopped into Edward's silver Volvo and drove to Jake's house. It didn't take long with
Edward driving. I was first out, running ahead. "Bells, sweetie wait!" Edward shouted to me.
I swiveled around quickly and saw that Edward and Jasper were right behind me. "We can't just
burst through the door, you know" Jasper said. I gestured that we talk in the side forest.
I had an idea. "Let's run through here," I pointed down the forest, "And sneak around back."
Jasper and Edward both nodded. We all ran at vampire speed. Jasper was the first one there,
so he slowly opened the back door. We all tipped-toed in. Vampires can walk really quietly.
Edward gestured us to a room where laughing could be heard. There, we saw our beloved friends
and family nailed down to the floor.
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26 Nov 2009 07:04 AM
WEEE *Crashes into house* WHAT THE...... I THOUGHT I BLEW THIS PLACE UP *jumps out window*
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Scruffymushu is not online. Scruffymushu
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30 Nov 2009 03:32 PM
I apprectiate all the views. Thx!!! Sorry I havent been writing the next chapter, I need an thinking (NONE OF URS BILLY!!!) PM or post ur ideas here and ill pick the best!!!
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Scruffymushu is not online. Scruffymushu
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30 Nov 2009 03:40 PM
sorry , (why did i write thinking?) i mean idea.
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04 Dec 2009 01:49 PM
They all die
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04 Dec 2009 01:49 PM
They all die
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04 Dec 2009 06:31 PM
The book's titles are based on parts of the day.
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04 Dec 2009 07:01 PM
and moon phases: new moon and eclipse
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