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rachet423 is not online. rachet423
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13 Jul 2015 12:35 PM
I spent some hours editing this (I'm a noob youtuber)

Rate it out of ten please.
Hope you like the music too.

Hateful or rude comments are okay in this thread, as well as they are true and make sense.
I need your opinion guys.

Here is the video.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mDujmM04P9g
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rachet423 is not online. rachet423
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13 Jul 2015 12:43 PM
b1
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crafter103 is not online. crafter103
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13 Jul 2015 01:00 PM
9/10

work on your cutting but overall great vid
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rachet423 is not online. rachet423
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13 Jul 2015 01:04 PM
thx bro

il work on it
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rachet423 is not online. rachet423
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13 Jul 2015 02:46 PM
b2
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A2DA is not online. A2DA
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13 Jul 2015 02:56 PM
good apart from the intro
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thesquidyman2 is not online. thesquidyman2
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13 Jul 2015 08:25 PM
I didn't know montages only lasted about 40 seconds.

Intro is kinda lame.

That subscribe button annotation is REALLY off. ( I suggest using a label instead, you can see the button clearly )

You didn't even add a annotation to your last video.

Montage isn't really cool. It just looks like ANOTHER CoD ripoff.

0/10.
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rachet423 is not online. rachet423
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14 Jul 2015 12:34 AM
Thanks for your opinion squid.

My intro is lame because as I told you, I am still a noob.
I'll work on everything else.
Thanks for your opinion guys, but if you have ever seen my last videos, you will cringe.

>Bandicam

>240p quality

>no editing

>10 fps
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rachet423 is not online. rachet423
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14 Jul 2015 12:35 AM
Squid, it lasted 40 seconds because I did not have a lot of time to make this

It would have been more than two minuites if my mum wasn't shouting at me to go to bed :/

Thanks again squid.
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rachet423 is not online. rachet423
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14 Jul 2015 12:37 AM
Squid, I didn't add an annotation to that because my last video isn't very good.

My channel is going through a reform here.
I got so many bad reviews from my last bunch of videos.

Trust me, they are much worse that this.
I got 6/10 from an experienced youtuber on this one though.
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FrostyChicken is not online. FrostyChicken
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14 Jul 2015 12:47 AM
What software did you use for editing. The intro and outro was a little bland. Should've added more footage if you took hours of editing.
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rachet423 is not online. rachet423
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14 Jul 2015 12:50 AM
@frosty

of you read one of the above comments, i had to rap up things pretty quickly
i used the cracked version of fraps, which is good because it records videos like this on my pc from 2009 that i have abandoned for 2 years

im even typing this on it right now.
what is your out of ten rating? cmon man i need this to improve the vid.

Thanks to you and squid.
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rachet423 is not online. rachet423
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14 Jul 2015 12:51 AM
i used sony vegas pro and movie maker for this video
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iiEpikAlt1 is not online. iiEpikAlt1
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14 Jul 2015 02:32 AM
Dont use movie maker no matter what
Video barely edited
Outro is cancer
Did you even ask permission for the song?
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ElementNice is not online. ElementNice
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14 Jul 2015 03:13 AM
1/10 k bai and i will never reply why i rated this. because it was my opinion no need to ask why. kbai
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rachet423 is not online. rachet423
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14 Jul 2015 06:37 AM
@ii

Hell yeah I did, it was my first priority before making the video.

I'm not some noob who randomly puts music into a video. I am aware of copyright.
I'm making a new one right now, ignore my intro and outro,

This one will be better.

HOW IS THIS NOT EDITED?? Clearly you can see it is...
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TheNstar is not online. TheNstar
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14 Jul 2015 06:52 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e5Q2R9WIWVw

Heres a video on how I did mine. I usually try to fit with the beat of the song
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thesquidyman2 is not online. thesquidyman2
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14 Jul 2015 07:31 AM
@ratchet No problem, I try not to sound so mean.
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iiEpikAlt1 is not online. iiEpikAlt1
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14 Jul 2015 09:22 AM
Okay, you did ask permission. I wouldnt ignore the intro and outro, because it is part of the video, and every single part of the video must be reviewed in VCR. I said barely edited, not completely.


and thats how epikgamerman got banned
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uranium52 is not online. uranium52
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14 Jul 2015 09:35 AM
okay here we go, another shameless review.

Pros:
-Good idea
-Good music
-Nice onscreen titles

Cons:
-Terrible intro (get a real one jesus)
-Music is way too loud
-No sniper = no montage because people wont care long enough to watch it unless you are pulling off amazing shots that are near impossbile
-way too short (needs to be at least 4 minutes)
-you literally used one clip and showed every kill
-bad gun
-no awesome knife kills
-no jetpack kills
-honestly if you are playing a game with those mechanics then show them in the video, not dumb standard kills
-add a vignette
-make it match the music or it wont look good
-outro was way to long, I think it was about half of the video
-dont beg for subs, it will make you look desperate

To me it was a 3/10 because literally the cons outweigh the pros

if you want an example of a montage I made please check out this one:
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uranium52 is not online. uranium52
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14 Jul 2015 09:35 AM
sorry, forgot the link, here it is: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DQO-OUKE59Q

(I know its not roblox, but you should still learn from it)
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uranium52 is not online. uranium52
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14 Jul 2015 09:39 AM
here is another one: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6IpGVGLVO_8

I didnt follow two of the rules but its not noticeable.
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crafter103 is not online. crafter103
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15 Jul 2015 08:58 PM
Oh and ill subscribe my name is zyrofox in a couple of hours or wahtevs
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CookingCereal is not online. CookingCereal
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15 Jul 2015 09:07 PM
if you were using sony vegas and movie maker (WHICH YOU SHOULD NEVER USE) why didnt you just save it and wait till tomorrow
if you did it couldve been better
you didnt have to finish it up in one session


Cooked cereal is not cooked but at the same time cooked without ever being cooked.
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uranium52 is not online. uranium52
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16 Jul 2015 12:48 PM
^the truth
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