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Re: Transformed (my first roleplay, criticism welcomed)

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PheonixRei is not online. PheonixRei
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01 Aug 2015 11:57 PM
"Aargh!"
I screamed as a ringing filled my human ears as they shrunk into my head, disappearing as new, furry ones took their place. My tailbone ached as it grew longer and longer, morphing into a fluffy bushy fox's tail. My nails sharpened into claws and so did my toenails. I screamed again as my face started morphing slightly, my eyes becoming a bright yellow. My eyes became slightly larger and my face shape got slimmer and angular, one that could only be described as fox-like. My feet's bone structure arranged itself around and grew fur as my lower legs and part of my thighs started to resemble a fox's hind legs.

"Enjoying yourself?" Asked an evil-sounding voice behind me.
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This is a roleplay about a group of humans who somehow angered a warlock, who used his magic to transform them into a half-animal. This group of humans now live in secrecy, together. If they are discovered, they would get put in a cage for other people to gawk at and admire. The warlock, after changing them, told them that if they ever touched the animal that they are now now fused with, they would become a full-on animal and it would be permanent.

Character Sheet:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Animal you're fused with:
Bio: (optional)
Appearance:
Other:


Rules:
No godmodding.
Romance is allowed, just keep it PG-13. If you have to, fade to black at...'touchy' moments, if you know what I mean.
No perfect characters.
Put 'cereal' in Other to show you read the rules.
No meta gaming.
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Danonymous is not online. Danonymous
Joined: 21 Jun 2012
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01 Aug 2015 11:58 PM
Fennekin...?
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TheGamingCinema is not online. TheGamingCinema
Joined: 28 Nov 2012
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02 Aug 2015 12:01 AM
(um not bad i guess)
Character Sheet:
Name: Red Stones
Age:17
Gender:Male
Animal you're fused with: Red Wolf
Bio: (optional) nooo
Appearance:He has red hair, which comes down to his eyes.His eyes are amber, and he has some red wolf ears along with that.His skin is pale too.He wears a black hoodie, and a white t-shirt behind that. He has a red wolf tail and claws, with denim jeans. He wears fingerless black gloves too. (Barefoot also.)
Other:Cereal (and milk!)


[eat fire]
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Danonymous is not online. Danonymous
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02 Aug 2015 12:04 AM
^ Zoroark...?
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TheGamingCinema is not online. TheGamingCinema
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02 Aug 2015 12:06 AM
(POKEMON
GOTTA CATCH THEM ALL
A HEART SO TRUE
YOU TEACH ME AND I TEACH YOU
PO
KE
MOOONNN
GOTTA CATCH EM ALL
GOTTA CATCH EM ALL

yeaahahh

sorry.

rip chompu the mawile

you were never good anyways)


[eat fire]
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PheonixRei is not online. PheonixRei
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02 Aug 2015 12:06 AM
just a fox person thing
though, I am fond of that particular Pokemon and it's evolutions
My character:
Name: Iris Amelia Thyst
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Animal you're fused with: Fox (WHAT DOES THE FOX SAY?!)
Bio: mehhhhhhhh
Appearance: Iris has short, bob-cut slightly spiky orange hair with slightly larger than normal green eyes. She has classic fox ears and a fox tail, along with claws and fox-like legs.
Other: I dun nerrhh
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TheGamingCinema is not online. TheGamingCinema
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02 Aug 2015 12:07 AM
(ugm

favie pokemony:the eeveelutions

SO KAWAIII-DESU CHAN AGYASADAHHS)


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PheonixRei is not online. PheonixRei
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02 Aug 2015 12:09 AM
Iris wears a purple dress that reaches down to her knees.
We don't want a n@k3d fox girl running amok in the streets.
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TheGamingCinema is not online. TheGamingCinema
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02 Aug 2015 12:09 AM
(@op

am i accepted)


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PheonixRei is not online. PheonixRei
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02 Aug 2015 12:12 AM
gaming, your CS is accepted
I doubt we'll get much more joiners so here we go, imma start because -music- I DON'T CARE~

Iris


I sit as normally as I can with my fox legs in a diner, my ears twitching as I ordered some pancakes. The waitress stared for a moment. "It's a cosplay. A robotic one that moves." I said, trying to hide my legs. She nodded and went to get my pancakes.
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Danonymous is not online. Danonymous
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02 Aug 2015 12:13 AM
Iris from Pokemon Best Wishes?

I WANNA BE, THE VERY BEST,
LIKE NO ONE EVER WAS,
TO CATCH THEM IS MY REAL TEST,
TO TRAIN THEM IS MY CAUSE.

I WILL TRAVEL, ACROSS THE LAND,
SEARCHING FAR AND WIDE,
EACH POKEMON, TO UNDERSTAND,
THE POWERS THAT'S INSIDE,
POKEMON.

GOTTA CATCH EM ALL~! (It's you and me)
I KNOW IT'S MY DESTINY! (Pokemon)
OH, YOU'RE MY BEST FRIEND,
IN A WORLD WE MUST DEFEND,
POKEMON.

GOTTA CATCH EM ALL~!
A HEART SO TRUE~
YOU TEACH ME, AND I'LL TEACH YOU,
POKEMON~!

GOTTA CATCH EM ALL,
GOTTA CATCH EM ALL!
POKEMON.
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PheonixRei is not online. PheonixRei
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02 Aug 2015 12:14 AM
...
cough
can you please stop?
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TheGamingCinema is not online. TheGamingCinema
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02 Aug 2015 12:20 AM
I cover most of my body with my hood,nobody noticing I have transformed. I walk into the diner, and order some food.


[eat fire]
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succesfulfundude is not online. succesfulfundude
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02 Aug 2015 12:23 AM
(let me consider

also it's all about the typhlosion)
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PheonixRei is not online. PheonixRei
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02 Aug 2015 12:45 AM
Iris


I notice someone with red hair walk into the diner. My eyes immediately go to his tail as I realize he's like me. Maybe.
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succesfulfundude is not online. succesfulfundude
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02 Aug 2015 12:51 AM
Name: Jacob Ford (meh, recycled names are the best)
Age: 17
Gender: M
Animal you're fused with: Jackal
Bio: maybe later
Appearance: Jacob stands at around 5'9", sporting short but somehow messy kept black hair. He is Caucasian and has an unnatural shade of dark brown for eye color. He usually wears a jacket and jeans with tennis shoes. You know, the common thing. He also is fairly skinny and has an average build.
Other: cereal
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succesfulfundude is not online. succesfulfundude
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02 Aug 2015 12:53 AM
(wow i was so distracted i forgot the animal features)

Jacob also has jackal ears that he hides, but sometimes shows when he feels comfortable with it. He also has a tail, but, I mean, who EVER sees that?
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PheonixRei is not online. PheonixRei
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02 Aug 2015 12:53 AM
(succes, you're accepted but I just have one thing to say
your character has absolutely no jackal features, from what I could tell)
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PheonixRei is not online. PheonixRei
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02 Aug 2015 12:54 AM
(nevermind)
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PheonixRei is not online. PheonixRei
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02 Aug 2015 12:55 AM
(still accepted)
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succesfulfundude is not online. succesfulfundude
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02 Aug 2015 01:00 AM
(also forgot to mention jacob has quite a few ways to conceal his ears)

Jacob

I walk into the diner, adjusting my jacket slightly before spotting a girl with fox ears. Normally, that wouldn't look right, but it did, at least to me. I make sure my fedora (m'lady) is on my ears correctly before sitting down at the same table as her. This probably isn't the best idea.
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Pruz is not online. Pruz
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02 Aug 2015 01:25 AM
(JACKAL QUEENSTON !!! )

(Oh, hi Renard.)
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BrickDynamics is not online. BrickDynamics
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02 Aug 2015 02:12 AM
Character Sheet:
Name: John Mcgavin
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Animal you're fused with: Spider
Bio: Normal childhood, found ambidexterity a useful skill, grew fond of magic and slieght of hand in general, learned to use spider properties for this.
Appearance: 6'2, thin, two extra pair of arms (both narrow and spider like in nature, same amount of eyes as a spider. Normally found wearing a tuxedo and slacks, conceals the addition of eyes using a balaclava to "conceal his identity)
Other: Magic spoiders cereal
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kitrain is not online. kitrain
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02 Aug 2015 07:58 AM
This is so similar to rise of the broken that im facepalming
Half-animals,
Living in secert
Discovered and captured/(maybe killed?)
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PheonixRei is not online. PheonixRei
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02 Aug 2015 02:00 PM
Iris


My ears perk up as someone with a fedora sits across from me at a table. "Uh...hi?"
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