Pen54321
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| 01 Aug 2015 12:15 AM |
Would you like to read 2 pages of a rough draft for the human side of history?
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| 01 Aug 2015 12:16 AM |
Youll have to make a signle thread after all are made. Itll have to be like page 1:LINK HERE page 2: LINK HERE etc Good luck |
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Laedere
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| 01 Aug 2015 12:17 AM |
| imo short and simple is the best lore |
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Pen54321
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| 01 Aug 2015 12:20 AM |
@Commendable Ik.
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Pen54321
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| 01 Aug 2015 12:30 AM |
So no to the drafts?
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gamma2244
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| 01 Aug 2015 12:31 AM |
if it's good, i'll read the entire thing.
i enjoy fiction writing.
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arcage
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Locard
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| 01 Aug 2015 12:35 AM |
| Just create an event table instead of writing 60 pages of lore. It's not worth it plus I wouldn't read such a long lore. |
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Pen54321
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| 01 Aug 2015 12:35 AM |
60+ pages for the backstory of all of the races in The Corsair (This will grow whenever we create a province on a group we won a war against) factions, old and new, drama within governments, wars, continental drifts, small stories involving characters in a time period , and the creation of the entire universe The Corsair is in.
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Pen54321
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| 01 Aug 2015 12:37 AM |
@Locard
I plan on making an event table, a directory for the lore, a small summary, and creating videos about the lore.
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| 01 Aug 2015 12:39 AM |
Lol you're over thinking leading a clan.
At this rate, your clan won't match all the work you put into it |
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Pen54321
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| 01 Aug 2015 12:41 AM |
@Marshal Hey, unlike most of you guys, I can spend 5 years here on ROBLOX and continue to develop.
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| 01 Aug 2015 12:41 AM |
| This seems interesting post links. |
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| 01 Aug 2015 12:41 AM |
Umm
Well gl with your clan, rofl
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Pen54321
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| 01 Aug 2015 12:48 AM |
@Medieval You want me to post the first draft of the human story?
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Pen54321
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| 01 Aug 2015 12:55 AM |
I'll just post anyways:
300,000 years before The Corsair is created: The first humans were born in the middle part of Craowilim, the supercontinent that included Cratenous, Vialim, and The Crow. These humans, were not hunters, but they gathered berries and mushrooms. Because these first humans did not hunt, they were not very militarized. 10,000 years after the continual gathering, the humans, numbering around 25,000,000 humans, ate most of Craowilim berries and mushrooms, causing most 12,000,000 humans to leave the middle region to travel to the eastern southern part of Craowilim. The eastern southern part of Cratenous is filled with Hamiki Buffalos and Fengols. Because the 11,000,000 humans migrated, the Fengols and Hamiki Buffalos tried to insert dominance over the humans, and native animals, including the Druid Birds. In the first year of settling in the middle part of Craowilim, 1 million humans died from attacks from the Fengols and during the migration. The Druid Birds moved into the middle part of Craowilim because of the abrupt hunting and eating.
Because of the abrupt hunting and eating from the Hamiki Buffalos and Fengols, the 11,000,000 humans agreed to separate into nomadic groups, and move camp every day to ensure that the Fengols do not kill them all. Here are the list of the nomadic groups in the beginning.
The Gustani Clan: 1,000,000 humans. The Hulon Clan: 900,000 humans. The Clois Clan: 870,000 humans The Yolopono Clan: 600,000 humans.
The rest of the humans in the party of 11,000,000 humans. The 7,630,000 humans, became what the clans named, the Freelancers of the Wild. The Freelancers of the Wild fought Fengols, and always were together. The Freelancers of the Wild became the first humans to actually fight, and within the Freelancers of the Wild, disputes occurred, specifically the Freelancers of the Wild Chaos 592, when a Freelancer of the Wild led Fengols into a camp where his rival was, which ended up with the death of 2,000 humans.
5 years after the clans were created, The Freelancers of the Wild dwindle to a small number of 1 million Freelancers. The clans constantly hired the Freelancers to protect them from Fengols. The Fengol raids became more frequent in the areas where the Clois and Gustani Clans settled in, so they hired more Freelancers there.
Meanwhile in Middle Part Craowilim: The people in the middle part of Craowilim, now had Druid Birds, that constantly tried to attacked the human’s babies. The people there, were not as skilled at fighting, and many babies were keaoyttuntuneqluo. This led to the populace in the middle part of Craowilim to be around 5,000,000 people 5 years after the clans were created. Because of this, the berries begin to grow back, while mushrooms became extinct. The people in middle part Craowilim, however, picked up agriculture, from observing how saplings were grown.
Orion Palestria, a human in Middle Part Craowilim, started to implement agriculture in his community, forming the first village, called Keval. Orion Palestria called the village Keval because Keval was his infant son, but Keval died from a Druid Bird. Keval was prosperous. There was food surplus, and if they didn’t have crops, they gathered berries. Orion, however, became crazy, mainly because of 2 things, his 5th son has been killed by a Druid Bird, and management of Keval. Orion Palestria then created the second army, the first being The Freelancers of the Wild, called Terra’s Army. Terra’s Army swept through Craowilim, trying to take over Craowilim into Keval.
1st page draft of The Human Race Part 1
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Alcaras
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| 01 Aug 2015 12:59 AM |
| Boring. Maybe fix your crap uniform instead of long words. |
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Pen54321
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| 01 Aug 2015 01:07 AM |
The Corsair uniform is fine right now.
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Alcaras
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| 01 Aug 2015 01:09 AM |
| If you haven't noticed, no one cares for your junk because of its nonexistence. Go write a damn book instead of wasting your time. |
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Pen54321
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| 01 Aug 2015 01:16 AM |
"If you haven't noticed, no one cares for your junk because of its nonexistence. Go write a damn book instead of wasting your time."
Someday, The Corsair will grow and become massive. More complex, advanced, helping new clans, unlike the rest of you.
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gamma2244
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| 01 Aug 2015 01:48 AM |
As the New Clan World...
shouldn't we be more chill
The most dangerous thing on the battlefield is a junior officer with a compass and a map. |
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Pen54321
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| 01 Aug 2015 01:53 AM |
@gamma
I tried my best not to insult c&gers. |
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| 01 Aug 2015 01:55 AM |
| pen, i applaud you for actually taking the time and the effort in creating a backstory for your clan, best of luck. |
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caspianIX
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| 01 Aug 2015 01:58 AM |
i've never read any clan lore at all
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