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Re: Horror Game (FEEDBACK NEEDED) [TECH DEMO]

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ShadowAley is not online. ShadowAley
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30 Jul 2015 10:17 PM
http://www.roblox.com/games/276447769/The-Unknown-TECH-DEMO




Just a little demo of the new horror/puzzle game I'm making. WEAR HEADPHONES, I PROMISE IT WONT BE LOUD. There's a bit of a puzzle in the game, if you can manage to make it to the end of tech demo screen, and screenshot it, I'll add you in the credits of the final game! Anyways, I need feedback on how its looking, and suggestions on what to add.
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seanjohn5 is not online. seanjohn5
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30 Jul 2015 10:25 PM
Wow! Pretty Interesting. But I have some suggestions. Instead of going silent when you turn on the power why not add some scary music leading up to a jumpscare when you turn around.
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ShadowAley is not online. ShadowAley
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30 Jul 2015 10:26 PM
Haha alright. I need to save up my robux to be able to get more audio, but okay!
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ShadowAley is not online. ShadowAley
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30 Jul 2015 10:44 PM
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penguinkangaroo31211 is not online. penguinkangaroo31211
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30 Jul 2015 11:21 PM
Brilliant! I loved it! In the idea of the betterment of the game, I believe that you should implement a factor of randomness and unpredictability, giving everyone a slightly different gameplay along with multiplying your game’s replay value exponentially. With the element of randomness, players will be more apt to share their stories with one another.
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ShadowAley is not online. ShadowAley
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30 Jul 2015 11:21 PM
Of course! A few things are random but not things that you'd actually notice! I've got a few ideas for the developing story..
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penguinkangaroo31211 is not online. penguinkangaroo31211
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30 Jul 2015 11:25 PM
I did notice a few minute details that had an element of randomness, such as the clock not displaying the time after revisiting it.
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ShadowAley is not online. ShadowAley
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30 Jul 2015 11:28 PM
Yep! Theres a few things about the clock, that if you're quick enough, can reveal more about the plot later on
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ShadowAley is not online. ShadowAley
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30 Jul 2015 11:45 PM
Added a few minor things :)
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cookiedude42 is not online. cookiedude42
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30 Jul 2015 11:56 PM
I dont like horror games. 2spook4me
I just quit when I saw the weird face in that hallway or w/e, just decided I would quit while im ahead
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ShadowAley is not online. ShadowAley
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30 Jul 2015 11:58 PM
LOL
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cookiedude42 is not online. cookiedude42
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30 Jul 2015 11:58 PM
Im a grade A poospoos
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ShadowAley is not online. ShadowAley
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31 Jul 2015 12:03 AM
there are no jumpscares yet
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cookiedude42 is not online. cookiedude42
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31 Jul 2015 12:52 PM
Actually played it, looks good thus far
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DermonDarble is not online. DermonDarble
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31 Jul 2015 12:57 PM
Isn't really scary at all.

Improvements:
Disable jumping, it feels weird in a game like that
More ambient sounds
More detailed building
A way to tell what you can interact with
Camera bobbing
Slower character and camera
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ShadowAley is not online. ShadowAley
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31 Jul 2015 01:21 PM
"Disable jumping, it feels weird in a game like that"

That's something I was looking into, thanks!

"More ambient sounds"

Saving up robux to upload some ambient sounds

"More detailed building"

I'm more just working on the tech and not the building right now, but that's a priority!

"A way to tell what you can interact with"

That takes the fun out of the puzzle

"Camera bobbing"

Interesting.. I'll look into it

"Slower character and camera"

I'll slow down the character even more, thanks.
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thunderbrickdude is not online. thunderbrickdude
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31 Jul 2015 02:05 PM
Didn't scare me a ton, but did keep me paranoid and I jumped a bit. Pretty cool so far.

*SPOILERS KINDA*
Was the ghost lady supposed to fall apart before you go into the bathroom after turning power on, because she just kinda collapsed for me. Still freaked me out though lol.
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ShadowAley is not online. ShadowAley
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31 Jul 2015 02:11 PM
Shes a work in progress, LOL
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