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Re: RATE MY FANFIC IN A SCALE OF 1-10

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FoxerzXD is not online. FoxerzXD
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30 Jul 2015 11:32 PM
Fanfic Name: Hunt for Pajama Sam
Chapter 1: This Fanfic is gonna be stupid!!!
So one day i was walking with my friend pajama sam, and we were fine and all but then GRUNTILDA CAME UP AND SAID "Ugly you will be! I will be pretty!" and kidnapped Pajama Sam!
then she went to her lair and i had to go there to save him.

Chapter 2: On the BossBot HQ!
So i went to a weird golf maze, everything was black and it looked like a business guy's golf course
So i went to the end of the golf maze and saw 4 people, one had a cheese head and the 3 others were obese pirates
I defeated them with a cake (idk why) and their skeletons appeared
I killed them again and continued my journey

chapter 2: act 1
I got scared then i saw a annoying red small dragon cannibal whistling and saying "HELP", so i grabbed him and threw him to explode BBHQ
Then i flied and stopped in a weird place that seemed familiar...

Chapter 3: One Direction's HQ!!!
I got to see every 1D member and wanted to tell a certain cool 1d ot'er but they didn't allow OT in it
I got mad, and ANGRY! (yes this is a reference to that gmod video)
Then i tried to escape but Harry Styles blocked me
Then i used GENO WHIRL!, and it pushed him away so i escaped it.
But then 3 Koopas blocked me right when i was going to exit the HQ... then i stomped on them all and continued my journey

Chapter 4: What's this??
Then i found a cannon and i went on it, and then it threw me away so fast and far that i hit a road, and i exploded the middle of it
Then the police said "HEY YOU!!"
I tried to escape, but couldn't
Then i ended up in the onnet police force, but i used all my powers to defeat the cops
Then i runned and found a helicopter to halberd

Chapter 5: Halberd
I went on halberd, and found 5 Waddle dees
I defeated all of them, but i saw someone suspicious..
It was...
META KNIGHT!
I couldn't defeat him, i tried my best, then i saw something that had 3 colors: blue red and yellow
It was Ness, he used his PSI rocking omega power to pwn meta knight.
then ness used PSI teleport beta on me to a place near gruntilda's lair

Chapter 6: Entering Gruntilda's lair
I finally got here, and Ness seemed to be my partner from now on
So, i said "be careful"
Then i saw a big robot with the name of "GutsMan"
We couldn't defeat him, he was too strong, he reflected Ness' PSI
Then Megaman came in and used Hyper Bomb and defeated him, and joined our party

Chapter 7: A suspicious cauldron
Then, i said to both ness and megaman "Ty" and ness said "OK" and megaman said "No problem."
Then we went hunting to find where gruntilda and pajama sam were, and we found a cauldron
He said that if you entered in him, we would find gruntilda
Megaman didn't come, he only came to wish good luck and kill gutsman
Then we went on the cauldron...

Chapter 8: Last fight...
And we got on a tower, where gruntilda was
Then i said "FREE PAJAMA SAM, NOW, OR REGRET YOU WILL!"
Then gruntilda replied "You will not get him! Say goodbye to your friend, Pajama boy!"
Then Ness used PSI flash and gruntilda took 100 damage
and Gruntilda said "Me angry because of stupid child! Me will get rid of child! Get ready to go to home without a smile!"
Then she got a shield, and reflected everything
Then i remembered someone, it was the JooJ, he could defeat everything
Then i and ness summoned the JooJ, and he hitted gruntilda 5 times, then gruntilda was almost falling off the tower.
Then we and JooJ helped to push her off, and she dropped the key to the cage
I grabbed it, and freed pajama sam
Then he said "Thank you! You are a great friend!"
And we got to home, were we belonged
THE END
pls rate it on a scale of 1-10












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30 Jul 2015 11:33 PM
MY EYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES!


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30 Jul 2015 11:33 PM










no/10
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30 Jul 2015 11:35 PM
Worst Fanfic ever 1337/10~ IGN
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30 Jul 2015 11:35 PM
" MY EYESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS"
"NO/10"
wait what why?
btw, this fanfic is probably lots of things i like in one horrible fanfic








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30 Jul 2015 11:36 PM
i pressed read no regrets


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30 Jul 2015 11:38 PM
I forgot to put a "Warning: this is stupid" warning. Sorry.












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30 Jul 2015 11:39 PM
tl;dr



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30 Jul 2015 11:41 PM
I can make a fanfic of vore if you guys want to see more stupidity.







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30 Jul 2015 11:43 PM
TL;DR:
Pajama sam gets kidnapped by gruntilda, then Me, Ness, Megaman, and a secret person go to save Pajama sam.











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30 Jul 2015 11:45 PM
b1








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30 Jul 2015 11:48 PM
Come on!









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30 Jul 2015 11:49 PM
1-10


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=15MqcNwkpq4&t=47s | skeleton of OT
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30 Jul 2015 11:50 PM
Why is this so underrated? come on it's good!










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30 Jul 2015 11:52 PM
Post "VORE PLZ" if you want a vore fanfic.











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31 Jul 2015 12:02 AM
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