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crazsquirrellover101 is not online. crazsquirrellover101
Joined: 18 Jul 2014
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29 Jul 2015 05:24 PM
Lore: You have never been noticed by anyone not even your own family. You have tried everything, well almost. You think up of ways that will catch everyone's attention. When you do you caught the attention of the government. They remove you from your "comfortable" life and place you in a training facility.(takes place in early 19th century.)

Rules: basic rp rules,please try to be descriptive

CS)

Name:
Age(13-18)
Appearance:
Personality(optional):
Physical flaws:
Mental flaws:
Bio(at least tell me how you caught the attention of the government):
Capabilities:
Other:
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BrickDynamics is not online. BrickDynamics
Joined: 18 Jul 2011
Total Posts: 767
29 Jul 2015 05:35 PM
I find it hard to believe your mum and dad don't notice you being born.
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crazsquirrellover101 is not online. crazsquirrellover101
Joined: 18 Jul 2014
Total Posts: 891
29 Jul 2015 05:39 PM
(Put your character's gender in other please it would be appreciated)
CS)

Name:Harper Kane
Age(13-18): 16
Appearance:Coal black hair with golden streaks,dark brown eyes,wears a dark grey cloak, black tank top, brown trousers, leather boots.tall,slight build
Personality(optional):kind,resourceful, cunning, elusive
Physical flaws:her height could make her an easy target
Mental flaws:is very impatient
Bio(at least tell me how you caught the attention of the government):she assassinated the governor of Boston.
Capabilities:close combat and unarmed combat
Other:Female
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crazsquirrellover101 is not online. crazsquirrellover101
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29 Jul 2015 05:40 PM
(What I mean by that is that they didn't care about you. So they never took care of you properly)
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rockmax2112alt is not online. rockmax2112alt
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Total Posts: 16470
29 Jul 2015 05:41 PM
"You have never been noticed by anyone not even your own family."
That's a double negative. And how are you not noticed by your own family, who care for you, live with you, and clothe you until you're 18? Don't you go to the store, school, entertainment places? Strangest sentence I have EVER read.
"You have tried everything, well almost."
Tried what? To cure cancer?
"You think up of ways that will catch everyone's attention."
Hm? What do you mean? Why do you want to catch attention? Are you in a circus or something? Do you want people to marvel at you so they can shower you with money or what?
"When you do you caught the attention of the government."
But... Why? You said you wanted to catch the attention of everyone? Why do you instead catch the attention of the 'government', who's the highest form of authority? And what government is this? Is it the government of a country that doesn't exist? There's no country name before 'government'.
"They remove you from your "comfortable" life and place you in a training facility."
Who said people lived comfortably? What about people who are poor? People that have an illness? Surely, life isn't "comfortable".
"(takes place in early 19th century.)"
Please no.

"Rules: basic rp rules,please try to be descriptive"
You contradict the rules already by the first paragraph.
CS)

Name:
"Age(13-18)"
...Just... Why?


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