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NiyvonALT is not online. NiyvonALT
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29 Jul 2015 04:58 PM
PREVIEW:
Yuki sighed, looking around the snow covered white town, it was sometime in December, her wearing a black coat and a scarf, She was rather tall, being around 24, as she brought her glasses up, closer to her eyes, "God damn.. This town can be boring.." She mumbled, to no one but herself, as the town was rather empty. She started walking, the soft blanket like snow crunched under her red boots, as she walked towards her house, aware of what was around her.



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29 Jul 2015 05:03 PM
CHAPTER 1:
Yuki sighed, as the crunching stopped, her grabbing keys from her pocket, her breath was made into a white fog, as she opened the door, walking in.. The house was empty, or it seemed like that, atleast, as she growled, crouching, creeping upstairs, only to find Silver
"God damnit Silver, you scared me," She put the knife away, standing up straight, putting the knife away.
Silver smiled, "Hey Yuki."
Yuki smiled back, "I'm gonna go downstairs, alright?"
Silver nodded,
Yuki sighed, walking downstairs, putting the knife away.


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29 Jul 2015 05:05 PM
I wrote this at one time so sorry for any mistakes q.q i wrote putting the knife away 3 times god damnit q.q


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29 Jul 2015 05:09 PM
CHAPTER 2:
A few days had passed, Yuki getting up, getting changed, and walking downstairs, armed with many pocket knifes, as she walked out, keys in her pocket, shutting the door behind her, the snow crunched under her feet, walking to a near by bar. Sitting down, as a man, wearing a bartenders uniform walked over, asking for her order "Water.." She was quiet, though her voice firm, the bartender nodded, handing her water, as Yuki drank it, looking around, there weren't many people, except for about 5 men, rather shady looking, each wearing trench coats, fedoras, none of their faces visable, as Yuki walked over, pulling out a pocket knife, one of them looked at her, "What is it?".. Yuki sighed, stabbing one of them, walking off.



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29 Jul 2015 05:15 PM
CHAPTER 3:
Yuki dashed, ontop of roof tops, police chasing her, since the cops had been called when she stabbed one of the men, she eventually lost them, deep in the forest, "Where the hell am I now..?" She mumbled, looking around as she ran, the same way she came, she had to be quiet, since now the police seemed to be after her, as she took out her keys, walking into the house, Silver not there. She shut the door behind her, taking off her boots, as she was rather cold, walking over to the couch, sitting down, curtains closed, doors and windows locked.


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29 Jul 2015 05:19 PM
Ill write more tomorrow too lazy 4 u


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29 Jul 2015 07:11 PM
Haha, I lied, writing more now
Yuki sighed, looking at the ceiling, sitting on the couch, as Silver walked in, him looking at her, Yuki not noticing, mumbling to herself, "Hey Yuki," Silver said, smiling
Yuki jumped, looking at him, Smiling "Hey Silver..", as she said that, there seemed to be a loud bang on the front door, "Damnit.. They found me.." Mumbled Yuki, quietly, looking at the door, grabbing a gun, opening it, shooting, several police men dropping dead, infront of the house, as she silently closed the door.


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29 Jul 2015 07:16 PM
note:

dont use that many commas like holy hell you use a lot of commas


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29 Jul 2015 07:17 PM
i want to do something like this


i need a idea pls


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29 Jul 2015 07:35 PM
This was actually an RP me and my friend Passot had, these are just the side storys of the charcters
I can send you the charcter Silvers side story.


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29 Jul 2015 10:49 PM
Silver looked at Yuki, his irises obviously Silver.. "I won't ask.." She sighed looking around. "Good.. Don't." Said Yuki, growling, obvious annoyance in her voice which was colder than normal "You alright, Yuki?" Said Silver, raising an eyebrow at her unusal annoyance, "Yeah, I'm just gonna go to bed.." She mummbled quietly as she walked upstairs, getting changed into the generic pajamas, and getting in bed, Silver was wierded out at how Yuki had snapped "Shes usually never like that.." She mummbled, quietly.


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29 Jul 2015 10:53 PM
A few weeks passed, Yuki downstairs with her usual clothes on, rather quiet as she was in the kitchen, cooking, mummbling as if pissed off abit still, Silver walked by, mumbling "PMS.." Yuki growled, slapping him, "What the hell was that for!?" Growled Silver. Yuki had already turned back around, cooking again. "Tsundere.." He mumbled, as Yuki slapped him again. "God damnit Yuki that hurts!" Silver said, with tears in his eyes. "Kind of the point.." Yuki growled, Silver walked out heading upstairs.


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29 Jul 2015 11:16 PM
Yuki had finished eating, getting her coat and scarf on, and unlocking the door putting her boots on, yawning and walking out, the snow crunching under her boots, Christmas closing in as she walked to the bar, yet again. "Still only 5 am.." She mumbled "Wonder if they are even open.." as she walked to the bar, walking in "Thank god.. They are open.." she mumbled, getting water as usual and walking home slowly after.


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30 Jul 2015 02:49 AM
"YUKITERU-KUN! DON'T DO IT!" <---- Worst Anime ever quote. (We all know what i'm talking about.)


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30 Jul 2015 02:46 PM
Yuki had reached home, looking at the tall brown brick building, unknowing if Silver was home or not she walked on, boredly. "God damnit.. Tatsumi just had to betray us, and nearly kill us all.. Would have been so much more fun with him.." She mumbled, coldly. As memories of her and her brother flooded through her head. "Had to kill Jonaki too.." She snapped out of it, looking around "..?" She seemed to be lost, her breathing still being a white fog infront of her, as an assassin jumped down "Aha, got you now, stupid Kami.. Killed my family.." The assassin smirked, throwing a knife, it piercing Yuki's hand, as she showed no pain.. "Its alot harder to get rid of me than that." Her wings spread from her back, they were gray large and full of feathers, they looked like they were crows wings almost, as she ripped the knife out and throwing it at the assassin as the knife pierced his head she ran off, her hand still oozing black blood.


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30 Jul 2015 03:14 PM
my goodness these paragraphs are like 1 sentence
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30 Jul 2015 03:36 PM
Yuki returned home, opening the door with keys as if nothing had happened, as she walked in Silver seeing the knife gash in her hand, "Oh my god Yuki! What happened!?" He said in shock, her wings still out. Yuki mumbled, Silver listening "Wouldn't he be used to this by now?" She sighed, looking around the almost empty house as Silver said "No, I'm not used to this by now since this doesn't happen on a daily basis." "Whatever, just help me," Replied Yuki. Silver nodded as he grabbed bandage, bandaging the large gash in her hand.


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