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| 07 May 2015 10:59 AM |
It's called "Can I go see Freddy?" Originally written for a Reddit contest.
(Note: I wrote this for the contest since I always thought of myself as good at writing fictional narratives and such. Hope you guys like it!) "Hey hey hey! Welcome to Freddy Fazbear's! We hope you all have a good time here! Now lets sing, guys!" It's what I first heard when I walked into the place. Kids at my school who went there said it was awesome, especially seeing Freddy and Bonnie on stage playing, and also Freddy was my name too! So of course I asked my mom if we could go for my birthday. She said yes! I waited. It was only a few days until it came, and my friend we're teasing me about how awesome it was and how I never went. "Dude you really got to go see Freddy. He's the star of the show!" "The Puppet in the box gave me a Bonnie plushie!" "Building Mangle is so fun!" "I heard someone peed on Toy Chica. But it was white pee for some reason... kinda like toothpaste." I just couldn't wait any longer. I wanted my birthday to be at that point in time. I was too impatient to wait any longer. I know it was tomorrow, but still! Finally, it came. My birthday! Freddy Fazbear's! YES! I walked inside. The first I saw was boy holding balloons with a sign saying "Balloons!" and a box near him with a prize counter near the box as well. I figured this is what they called the "Prize Corner". I walked over to the man over there and asked him what was in the box. "It's the kid-loving Puppet in there, of course! If it's your birthday, he gives you a prize!" A prize?!? Yay! I run over to the box. A long slender black figure with white stripes pops out. The mask was a bit creepy though. It looked you like he was crying purple tears. He had a plushie in his arms. It was a Chica plushie!!! I ran back to my table. All my friends were there! This was the coolest birthday ever! I showed them my Chica plushie, but they all laughed and made jokes about me getting Chica. But we were kids, of course we would do things like that. Soon after came the pizza. We ate all of it. It was the best pizza I tasted in a really long time. Everyone was stuffed after that pizza, but soon the cake would come. We were all excited for the cake, despite our stomachs saying they didn't want anything to do with the cake we were gonna eat. The man from the Prize Corner walked to our seats. "You kids want to see a cool secret in the backstage? We have a Golden Freddy backstage!" Of course we did! I mean, it's Golden Freddy! "Mom?" "What sweetie?" "Can I go see Freddy?" "Of course, it is your birthday!" We all followed him to the back of the stage. We heard a slam behind us. "Hey where's Fre-" Slice. I saw his head come clean off. The man behind the counter killed my friend. I ran to the door. I wanted to leave. I wanted to be safe, away from this guy in his purple uniform, I wanted to go home, I didn't want to see Freddy anymore, I didn't care. I just wanted to leave, "Hey there little guy, no big rush. The party is just getting started. Don't you want to join your friends?" I saw them. All dead. Blood on the floor. All my friends. Dead. I felt terrorizing pain. He stabbed me in the chest. All I could see was my eyes filling up with tears and his smiling face as everything went black. Of course, that was maybe 6 to 7 years ago. It's different now. Right now as I'm telling this story. I'm currently in the new Freddy Fazbear's. They took away almost everything. They took the toys, the boy holding balloons, the Puppet, everything. They soon after found a few animatronics in a Parts & Service room and decided to fix those up and use them. Currently they are here in this new pizzeria. I'm one of them. My name is Freddy, a little child who just wanted his birthday at Freddy Fazbear's. Please don't touch me. I get scared easily. I'm sorry if I stare at your parents and scare them, I just wish they could cut some cake for me. After all, it is my birthday. End. (Note: Only some parts of this I thought were canon. Some I just made up to fit with my idea of the story. Don't take any of this story as canon. Just enjoy it as it is. A story. Feedback is welcome.)
Steel fuel can't melt dank memes./#TACOBELLMASTERRACE/r u redy 4th fredy |
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| 07 May 2015 11:03 AM |
| Damn that's deep, although OT don't like FN@F much. |
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| 07 May 2015 11:09 AM |
"although OT don't like FN@F much"
I know there's quite a few that do. Most just say it sucks to troll others.
Steel fuel can't melt dank memes./#TACOBELLMASTERRACE/r u redy 4th fredy |
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| 25 Jul 2015 07:09 PM |
This is cool.
Needs indentations though.
"where MAKING THIS HAPEN" / ;TheChangerDB; |
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| 25 Jul 2015 07:10 PM |
"OT HATES FN@F" yeah kk we just hate the fandom but otherwise nice job
Somehow has a bottle of eggs. |
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| 25 Jul 2015 07:12 PM |
Spino stared at the screen, blinking.
She turned, "Could we get Ari Folman to direct this?" |
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| 25 Jul 2015 07:22 PM |
Englitch shuffled through his documents.
He looked back to Spino, "Yes, if we have a couple thousand on hand."
"where MAKING THIS HAPEN" / ;TheChangerDB; |
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| 25 Jul 2015 07:26 PM |
And then a guy ran in and yelled
ALLAH HU ACKBER!!!
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