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Re: How does this sound as a story?

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adventurebroemil2 is not online. adventurebroemil2
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25 Jul 2015 10:35 AM
A boy finds an old house in the woods that used to belong to an old scientise , but the scientist is nowhere to be found and left a book in the basement behind explaining how to use and maintenence his many machines also in the basement.

the basement is huge by the way.

The boy reads the book and after a LONG time (its a huge book that says that he left the book behind to see if someone could become sort of like his pupil if they read it and that the house is now theirs). he fixes a few of his machines and from what he's learned he has made a kind of unstable machine that creates creatures

He makes a bunch of creatures and uses another machine to give himself wings.

He then sees that there is a hidden tunnel under the floor after he trips on the lock to it with the name "B. E. R".

The government finds out about his creatures and the house and wants to take away the machines and the creatures he has made , but as they come the boy scrambles around with the secrutiry system and eventually presses a button that makes the house fly and he escapes.


He goes to sleep and finds that all of the creatures and some machines were taken during his sleep.

but 3 of the creatures went in different rooms that were not the basement (where the boy kept the rest) and make noises and reenact what happened by themselves.

now the boy is trying to get his creatures back and find the old scientist.



my boss doesn't appreciate this "fun" of yours

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drpece231 is not online. drpece231
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25 Jul 2015 10:37 AM
Sounds like a pretty neat idea
Although it seems it would work more as series, written or animated
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adventurebroemil2 is not online. adventurebroemil2
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25 Jul 2015 10:39 AM
@drpece


yeah I want to work on a series for this actually.

I'm starting to draw better so I want to animate it myself.
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Foxcatgirl is not online. Foxcatgirl
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25 Jul 2015 10:39 AM
sounds familiar
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SoundBarrierSpino is not online. SoundBarrierSpino
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25 Jul 2015 10:40 AM
new rick and morty???
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adventurebroemil2 is not online. adventurebroemil2
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25 Jul 2015 10:54 AM
@Sound


I don't understand
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25 Jul 2015 11:04 AM
final bump deployed
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