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| 22 Jul 2015 06:07 PM |
A wooden, crowded boat was seen heading to the island. The island was no island, it was, according to some, the "magical" land of Tahiti. Lush, green palm trees, white, flakey sand and the warmest water comparable to a Jacuzzi. Tons of unique wildlife, and various towns dotted the land. The travelers couldn't believe it. It felt like the perfect paradise out of all the other ones. A pair of young women in the boat yelled, "What are we waiting for?! Let's live here forever!" before jumping off the small ship. The ship itself was slightly majestic, named the "SS Feilds". It was once a World War II scout ship, one of the few to survive unscathed. After the war, it was repainted, refurnished, and renamed. It contained an almost first class experience, with dining and entertainment comparable to a circus. It had well furbished bedrooms, and a pool. Many of its passengers liked the ship's design, and maintenance more than on the average 90's cruise. The ship slowly docked near one of the wooden ports with much hustle and bustle of the sailors docking the ship. The moment after, the sailor spoke into the intercom microphone, "We're here at the wonderful island of Tahiti." much to the excitement of the passengers and crewmen and women. The boat entrance/exit opened as the men and women rushed out of it. The crew and captain watched the passengers board the island as they sigh, few shaking their heads. The passengers were disappointed to find only jungle and dense Forest awaiting them, but after a few seconds of the passengers romping on the sand, they heard a microphone call out: "You may be disappointed at the lack of civilization, but that doesn't mean there WON'T be any, because you've simply landed on the wrong side of the island! No matter, we have trucks and cars waiting to take your proper destination!" Upon further examination by the various tourists, revealed many trucks, cars, and other transport vehicles awaiting. The passengers sighed in relief as they climbed aboard the trucks and cars. As their journey to their residency began, many were in awe at the dense, beautiful jungle. Monkeys were swinging around, tigers were running together, every animal you could imagine from your childhood cartoons is there. Some even recognized the animals as past characters. Their travel brochures promised what the "guests" to the island have seen: it seems that the brochures hit the nail right on the head, with exotic flowers encompassing the landscape. Typical paradise, as everyone has ever dreamed of. The town came into view after the vehicles passed through the flower field. The resort wasn't full of happy people, but it was deserted. The passengers were confused about what's going on right now. "Do not be confused, travelers!" Said the womanly voice, "This is where you stay! If you need assistance, there is a phone box where you can call our assistants in a nearby town. Enjoy your stay!" before the passengers got off the vehicles. As the woman whispered, "Typical tourists..." to herself, the vehicles began going away with tire screeches. "What do we do now?" A middle aged man asked? A shout was heard from the inside of the resort. "Guys! There's a swimming pool! And a Jacuzzi! And a Tiki bar! And a high dive!" After hearing the news, the passengers cheered and rushed into the resort. After maybe an hour or so, laughs, cheers, and excitement were heard from the pleasant residence. In one day, however, the laughs would turn to screams...
RULES Welcome to "A Fool's Paradise", a roleplay made by marc and rock. In this roleplay, you are a tourist visiting the wonderful island of Tahiti. Now, this takes place in 1994. No iPhones or that sort of stuff. Also, no Mary/Gary Sues, godmodding, powerplaying, metagaming, or any sort of uncool things. No weapons of any kind, I mean it. Enjoy your stay! Or will you?
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| 22 Jul 2015 09:32 PM |
| I see why its not successful. It doesn't allow much freedom |
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| 22 Jul 2015 09:39 PM |
"Not much freedom" Were you not thinking something bad was going to happen by "the laughs would turn to screams" and "enjoy your stay... or will you" and no, this isn't murder mystery |
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| 22 Jul 2015 09:44 PM |
But your limiting items.
I mean I suck at making storylines at times
But at least I know how to format it.
Try making paragraphs so people don't lose interest.
Instead of one giant blob |
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| 22 Jul 2015 09:45 PM |
| this was for the newbies anyway so eh |
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| 22 Jul 2015 09:56 PM |
| Ive been on RP longer than you have. Ive had my share worth the terrible stories |
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| 22 Jul 2015 10:01 PM |
i don't give a crap if you've been on here longer this is an experiment
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| 22 Jul 2015 10:02 PM |
CHARACTER SHEET Name: Sam Caius Age: 31 Gender: Female Appearance: Sam's hair color is a blend of black and blonde. Her eye color is blue. She has no wrinkles on her face, probably implying she aged well. She is approximately 5'9 and she weighs 135 lbs. She has a slim body type. She wears a white O.J. Simpson t-shirt. Her black jacket covers most of the shirt. She has a grey skirt to accompany with her black-and-white polka-dotted shorts. She dons black, thigh-high socks. Finally, she has black Victorian-style laced boots. Bio: Sam was born with the original last name of "Leyton". Her original parents were Penny Leyton and Ben Leyton. However, they were forced to divorce with Penny taking the daughter with her. Cortland Caius became her mother's new husband, resulting in her name change to "Sam Caius". She was perfectly happy with the new parent she had. But Cortland was away after their first photoshoot together when the Vietnam war was still around. This didn't stop the little girl from being still feeling good. She went to a school which she finds okay since she gained a few friends there. When her new father came back, she was quite excited to see him again. However, her father's mutation slowly began to cause problems. She didn't mind it completely at first, but she was getting a little suspicious. When her mother finally found out about the mess later, she divorced quickly and she was taken with Penny somewhere from Cortland. She found her new school a bit better and years later, she graduated high school at the age of 17 and college when she was 22. She had a job as a police officer. She found a French husband that she liked and married him. She then gave birth to half-identical twins, whose only difference is their genders. She began planning her vacation alone to Tahiti a few years after giving birth. Eventually, when she was 31, she went to vacation on a famous re-purposed World War II ship. Now, she ended up in the apocalyptic-like island of Tahiti unlike in her vision of what the vacation will be. Other: Oh yeah, Sam was born BEFORE Axton and Alexander, and Penny is the sister of the mother who gave birth to the brothers and died. |
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| 22 Jul 2015 10:04 PM |
ahm sh sh sh sh no apocalypse here just nice mineral spring water shhh
accepted |
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| 22 Jul 2015 10:54 PM |
Name: Stephan Murray Age: 19 Gender: Male Appearance: Stephan stands at 172 centimetres. He is a skinny and pale man, his cheek bones clearly visible. He has deep, hazel eyes and scruffy brown hair that reaches down to his eyes and neck. He sports an accurate watch set at the right time. He wears a grey polo t-shirt and black shorts with laces. He can be described as a shady character. Bio: Stephan was born to his biological parents, but after a blood infection, his parents both died of AIDS. He was adopted by a wealthy man, and lived with him for his entire life. However, when his stepfather (or whatever) married when Stephan was 9, he was confused and curious, the latter emotion getting the most of him. He found out that his stepparents weren't his biological parents, and therefore, he entered a phase of depression and locks himself in his room everyday, not acknowledging that his stepparents are worried about him. He was a particularly good student, but with this incident he did not achieve his usual good grades. Stephan has gotten a part-time security job eventually in a rather lax hotel. Despite his attempted efforts of trying to do a good job, he was denied promotions countless times. His stepfather has died from a heart failure incident, the blame being put on Stephan by his mother for his unsuccessful career. Stephan has planned for a holiday escape from the trauma he's been experiencing to the tropical island of Tahiti. He hasn't been much happier since before finding out that his stepparents weren't his biological parents. Other: Tacobell. |
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| 22 Jul 2015 10:54 PM |
| Oops, he's supposed to be 29. |
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| 22 Jul 2015 10:59 PM |
Oh my jello donuts someonr acknowledges this accepted |
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| 22 Jul 2015 11:29 PM |
I always acknowledge something made by Rock-senpai.
I wasn't meant to say that. |
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| 23 Jul 2015 07:38 AM |
| HI MOM IM ON A FOUR R U PROUD MUM MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM MOM mom mom |
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| 23 Jul 2015 08:54 AM |
| dad can we go to 2 da park pls |
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| 23 Jul 2015 04:30 PM |
| but dad..can we go get sum ice cream pls ;-; |
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| 23 Jul 2015 07:58 PM |
| How many more joiners do we need? |
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