PlanePond
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| 17 Jul 2015 01:09 PM |
Note! This is fiction, so a lot of this is not Historical, hoping you already knew that.
=Sequence 1=
Main Characters: Luigi,General(General Staff) Papie,Captain(General Staff) Ezio,Lance Corporal(Line Infantry) Mario,Private(Artillery Loader)
1807 December 2nd, 6:00am
Italian troops march into the Papal States towards a small village near Rome.
Papie: Sir, are you sure we can stay in this village until Noon? Luigi: Yes, why do you think we cannot stay here? Papie: Well, its close to Rome and I think there is an army waiting in that village. Luigi: Think positive, alright! Papie: Okay...
1807 December 2nd, 6:30am
Italian troops arrive at the village just to get attacked by Militias.
Papie: Sir, I told you this was not a good Idea! Luigi: Dont worry, its just militia, we just need to break them! Papie: Butt sir, that's all we can see, we don't know what they have! Luigi: *Sigh* Alright, go tell the Artillery to set up on the hill! Papie: Yes, Sir!
1806 December 2nd, 7:00am
After 30 Minutes of fighting militia Artillery finally sets up.
Artillery Officer: Mario, load round shot! Mario: Yes,sir. Artillery Officer: Focus fire on the militia on the right flank. Artillery Troop: SET! Artillery Officer: FIRE!!! *Artillery Fires at the militia* Papal troop: INCOMING!!! Guah! *1/8 of the militia gets killed cause them to lose morale and flee* Artillery Officer: Calvary Incoming!!! Load Canister! Mario: Yes, sir! *Loads as fast as he can* Artillery Officer: Quickly!!! Mario: I'm going as fast as I can sir, Loaded! Artillery Troop: SET! Artillery Officer: Steady... Hold... FIRE!!! *The artillery fires killing most of the Calvary but did not break there Morale* Artillery Officer: Equip Flintlocks... Ready... Aim... Fire! *They all fire except for Mario who gets ran over by calvary* Artillery Troop: Miss! Ahh! *Calvary comes in and kills all of the Artillery troops except Mario and the Officer* Mario: Uhg, hello? Anyone? Artillery Officer: Mario... Run!*Bleeds out*
=Sequence End=
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| 17 Jul 2015 01:27 PM |
| Well, here's some advice. I guess I'll give it to you nicely, since this is probably your first time. Don't use *grabs coffee*, use, 'He grabbed the coffee.'. Don't use 'Mario: Hi.', use '"Hi." said mario.'. |
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PlanePond
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| 17 Jul 2015 04:21 PM |
| I can type how I want thank you very much. |
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leRiddler
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| 17 Jul 2015 04:26 PM |
plane
take his advice
you sound like a game rper
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AVbQo3IOC_A |
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leRiddler
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PlanePond
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| 17 Jul 2015 05:13 PM |
My god, is it really a big deal? If it is, what has this world become. |
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| 17 Jul 2015 05:44 PM |
Plane
why do you act like were saying
'talk like this or die'
just advice
calm your plane k
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AVbQo3IOC_A |
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leRiddler
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| 17 Jul 2015 06:02 PM |
plane
take a break
refuel
if u need to
go to the toilet and take a 'flight' |
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| 17 Jul 2015 06:03 PM |
you gotta bomb the toliet if you know what i mean
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AVbQo3IOC_A |
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leRiddler
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| 17 Jul 2015 06:03 PM |
call 911
cos sht is goin down
wink wink |
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| 17 Jul 2015 06:05 PM |
-wink a dink dink- while your at it clean the mess you made.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AVbQo3IOC_A |
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leRiddler
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| 17 Jul 2015 06:09 PM |
| nothing can clean it, its on the walls and everything |
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PlanePond
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| 19 Jul 2015 09:35 PM |
Why
tf
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you
talking
like
this? |
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| 19 Jul 2015 09:53 PM |
we're not lmao
we put each sentence on a different line ok
in short
if ur not gonna take our (real rpers and writers, unlike you) advice, then just get out kk
~~ this is your captain speaking - you are all about to die ~~ |
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leRiddler
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| 20 Jul 2015 03:43 AM |
mate
im sorry to say this
but you got rekt |
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leRiddler
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| 20 Jul 2015 04:35 PM |
breaking news
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DggAXSv53Qc
i love this video
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AVbQo3IOC_A [BUMP IT! LOUDER!] |
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| 20 Jul 2015 04:40 PM |
look out, we got a badass over here (OP)
~~ this is your captain speaking - you are all about to die ~~ |
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leRiddler
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PlanePond
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| 26 Dec 2015 04:28 PM |
| looking back at this makes me want to murder all you 11 year olds |
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leRiddler
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PlanePond
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| 26 Dec 2015 04:31 PM |
| Okay I want to kill you all anyway -_- |
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MrStilts
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| 26 Dec 2015 04:54 PM |
| Someone's feeling edgy. I mean, it's just a horribly written story mate, don't blow a gasket over other people's opinion about it. |
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