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Re: Pokemon: The C&G Story (PART 4)

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LegendSoul12 is not online. LegendSoul12
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Part 1: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=167105350
Part 2: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=167230974
Part 3: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=167240598
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Legend ran as fast as he could to make sure Nicole was safe. He ran forward then down the hill with Chimchar so he could be in front of Nicole. He saw so many Poochyena. He wondered why, then he noticed something. All of them had collars and blue eyes. Legend was shocked. This could mean just one thing only.

Several men came out of their hiding trees and looked at Legend, Nicole, Chimchar, and Eevee.
"Well well well. Look at what we have here. A boy trying to save his girlfriend." said one of the men. Everyone laughed. Legend got annoyed. He looked at the man's nametag. It said "3eh." He looked like a tryhard. He was wearing a cap that said "murica!" The circle above the i was a burger instead.

"Why are you attacking Nicole and Eevee?" asked Legend. Eevee said her name. Nicole was grateful. She thought that the group Legend was in was kind, and this confirmed her suspicions.

"How pathetic," said one recruit named Bubleman78, "you do not understand. We are Team Galactic. Team Galactic II, that is. We strip away other people's Pokemon from them if they aren't worthy as trainers."

"You do not look worthy," said a different recruit named Azulk, "maybe we can talk away your Poke-"

He was interrupted when Legend's Chimchar jumped on Azulk and bit his arm. Azulk was yelling. He never thought he'd be in that much pain ever, but he was wrong. Legend got angry at how terrible this Galactic group was, so he did something a bit risky.

"Chimchar, use Ember!" laughed Legend while he was saying that. Azulk began screaming for mercy, but it was too late. Chimchar didn't use Ember, he learnt a new move. He learnt Flamethrower.

"Chimchar..." Chimchar said. Chimchar was smiling. He never felt such a rush of energy. He learnt FLAMETHROWER! That's one powerful move, Legend thought. Chimchar jumped off his arm and looked at Legend. He laughed. Poochyena looked at Azulk and cried "Pooch!" Azulk looked mad beyond belief.

"Poochyena. BITE THAT MAN!" Azulk shouted. Poochyena jumped at him and Legend couldn't ask Chimchar to defend him. This was it. He was about to get bitten and scarred. Damaged and injured. That's when the unexpected happen. A man appeared in front of him and Poochyena stopped. He couldn't attack whoever this person was. He was wearing a hat with these orange feathers or something on his hat, and he was wearing a beautiful robe.

This mysterious man sent out a Bisharp and he spoke. "Use Night Slash!" Legend couldn't describe the sound. Nicole was opening her eyes so wide. Bisharp cut open the collar and the blue eyes faded. Poochyena looked shocked. Bisharp went to all the other pokemon and cut their collars. They all looked confused and ran away into the forest. Eevee looked angry and ran towards THE RECRUITS AND SCARED THEM OFF! Eevee did that. The mysterious man waved at Legend and disappeared...

The Galactics thugs would escaped if it wasn't for a police force that came to the forest. Some of them hid but Legend saw the police capture every single one of them. He looked a bit confused because all of them looked alike. Exactly alike.

One of the police people ran to Legend and shook his hand.

"Hi, I'm Zachlovespizza. Well, all of us are Zachlovespizza." he laughed.
"Uh, yeah," Legend replied, "I kind of put that together." Legend was still confused. All of them looked alike. Expect one. He was black. Legend pointed at him.

"Is he your brother?" Zachlovespizza, or blacklovespizza (that's his name from now on) ran to them.

"Yeah. No one likes him though." Zach said. Blacklovespizza sighed. "It's okay. It's only-"
"ik I'm black." said blacklovespizza.

"Well, it was nice meeting you!" Zach and his brother and the police said went all on their cars and out their prisoners in the backseat and drove to the jail. Legend sighed. Why did all of them come? Who called them? Nicole was still panicking. She wouldn't get up to get her Eevee so Eevee had to come to her. Who was that man? His hat looked familiar but no one (as in him) knew why.

Legend turned around and helped Nicole up. He asked if she was okay and she nodded. She hugged him. She got bitten several times. Legend patted her on the back.

"You should come with us. I saw the Poochyena. You weakened all of them. You only lost because you were out numbered." They stopped hugging.

"Ar..are you sure?," Nicole stuttered, "I mean, we don't know each other that well." Chimchar and Eevee were talking. Legend pointed at them.

"If they can get along, all of us will be able to get along just fine." Legend said. Nicole smiled. She thought everyone would be nice to her, so she said yes and called her parents telling them she'll go with her friends. Legend called his dad RodgerDodger also.

"Hi Legend. How's it going?" Rodger said.
"Good. I made a new friend. Her name is Nicole."
"Great. I'm at work, but how's your adventure going? Heard you got a Chimchar!"
"Mhm! He's really strong. He even knows Flamethrower now."
"Congratulations! I gotta go, but have fun! Keep in contact with Mom." Rodger hung up.

The gang ran to them. They all caught a Pokemon. DieSoft waved at Nicole and she waved back.

"So, is Nicole apart of our..uh...gang? Do we call it that?" Neon asked. Legend nodded. Legend looked at DieSoft. He was trying to hide a smile. They all had caught a Pokemon. Legend frowned. He didn't get his Murkrow.

"Oh..you couldn't catch a Pokemon." iKeno patted Legend on the back. He noticed Nicole was bitten. "What happened to her?"

Legend explained the story. How he saw a Murkrow, how Nicole was cornered by Galactic thugs, and how a mysterious man came and saved him.

"Maybe it was the champion!" Kasumi and Cong said at the same time. They laughed. Legend was scared that they were gonna become such good friends and prank everyone on the team that he panicked so much.

"Uh...um..." iKeno said. Everyone looked at him. "LEGEND WATCH OUT!" he yelled. A man from Galactic managed to escape and jumped at him. Chimchar was about to use Flamethrower before 4 people attacked him. Glerax was there! He somehow managed to appear out of the trees and the recruit fell on the floor. Two boys and a girl pinned him to the ground and one officer from that police force came and arrested him. Glerax and that Zachlovespizza officer nodded and the officer left.

"Well, isn't it funny? I managed to see you guys yet again!" Glerax said. Everyone had their jaws open. How? What? Uh...okay? He is a stalker, DieSoft bet.

"Well, I'd like you to meet some people who will help you on your journey. This is Raethyr." Raethyr was the one in the green attire. "This is Flammavir." Flammavir was wearing a coat and he had a beard. He for some reason also was wearing a firefighter hat. "This is FalseProphets. They're interns at Galactic Industries. They've volunteered to help you on your journey. They train Pokemon too."

They all went to the gang. 11 people. That was a lot to take care of. They had no choice but to say yes. They seemed nice.

"We'll take them." Legend said. Glerax smiled.

"We changed our name to avoid any relation with that galactic group. We're Dimension Industries now." Glerax said, "and I need to leave. Here's my number." Glerax gave Legend a strip of paper and it said the number.

"Bye. See you again!" Glerax walked in the forest into the shadows.

"So, should we go? asked Raethyr. "We're also sorry if we disturbed your journey. We can leave if you want." Legend told them they can stay and they're happy they have more people. Legend felt bad if he said leave.

"Well, I never caught a Pokemon..." Legend said. Chimchar cried. Before they knew it however, Murkrow went on Legend's shoulder.

Nicole told Legend, "I think he likes you now." Legend turned at Murkrow and asked him, "Do you wanna journey with me?" Murkrow nodded but looked Chimchar and Chimchar stared at him. It looked like they wanted to battle. Legend realized that the only way he could catch Murkrow if he proved his worth.

"Well, you want him? You gotta fight him." Flammavir said. Everyone took out their Pokemon. iKeno had Torchic and Rufflet. DieSoft had Snivy and Eevee. Conglacior had Oshawott and Misdreavus. Kasumi had Squirtle and Petilil. Lionbaita had Growlithe and Starly. Neon had Bulbasaur and Yanma. Flammavir had Charmander and Duskull. FalseProphets had Piplup and Venipede. Nicole had Eevee and Chikorita. Raethyr had Treecko and Combee.

Legend decided he would. Plus, Chimchar needs a little practice, he said. All the Pokemon and the people went to a empty spot in the forest. It was on the border of Magenta Town. There were two trees behind Legend and Murkrow. Everyone else was on the sides.

"You ready Murkrow?"
"MURKROW!!" Murkrow screeched. Legend took that as a yes!

Legend looked at Chimchar. "Get ready." "Chimchar!" Legend smiled. This was gonna be one fun ride.

"Chimchar, use Scratch!" Chimchar jumped in the air and used Scratch and Murkrow used Aerial Ace to counter. They were about to impact each other. Everyone gasped...
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LegendSoul12 is not online. LegendSoul12
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11 Jul 2015 11:54 AM
THIS WAS SO LONG FFS
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ExaltedArchitect is not online. ExaltedArchitect
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11 Jul 2015 11:55 AM
Am I in this?
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11 Jul 2015 11:58 AM
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LegendSoul12 is not online. LegendSoul12
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11 Jul 2015 11:59 AM
SORRY YOU GET A POKEMON OF YOUR CHOICE PM ME

Exalted, I don't know what you'll do.
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NeonSkelion is not online. NeonSkelion
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11 Jul 2015 12:02 PM
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Runite is not online. Runite
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11 Jul 2015 12:02 PM
You are messing up with some grammar aspects in this.

"Bye. See you again!" Glerax walked in the forest into the shadows.

This should be:

"Bye, hope to see you again!" Glerax shouted as he walked deep into the shadows of the forest.
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Runite is not online. Runite
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11 Jul 2015 12:03 PM
Sorry to be picky, its just I feel the writing could be much better, and more enticing.
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LegendSoul12 is not online. LegendSoul12
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11 Jul 2015 12:03 PM
You know what Runite?

It's like 2 AM.
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Blizzardous is online. Blizzardous
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11 Jul 2015 12:03 PM
wigglytuff mang


-lord of the frozen north-
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Runite is not online. Runite
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11 Jul 2015 12:06 PM
Just write it, and proof read it when you are more awake.

I didn't mean it in any harsh or negative way. :C

I have read the others and I feel your not a bad writer c:
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11 Jul 2015 12:06 PM
"Bye, hope to see you again!" Glerax exclaimed as he moonwalked into the depths of thy mother ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

The Phantom Prophet of Frost and Fire; Telling multiple people to die is worth more punishment than rough jokes
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LegendSoul12 is not online. LegendSoul12
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11 Jul 2015 12:07 PM
I know. I'm just SUUUUUPER tired yet I sleep
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Runite is not online. Runite
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11 Jul 2015 12:07 PM
LOL
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Runite is not online. Runite
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11 Jul 2015 12:08 PM
Trust me, I am so bad at writing, I left college because I couldn't write papers, and EVERY CLASS wanted them. I literally gave up.

However, I am at a college learning to weld, and I absolutely love it c:
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11 Jul 2015 12:18 PM
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LegendSoul12 is not online. LegendSoul12
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11 Jul 2015 01:39 PM
Nice
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ZyphrMagik is not online. ZyphrMagik
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12 Jul 2015 09:48 AM
I was promised a role T^T
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shadowelliot2302 is not online. shadowelliot2302
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12 Jul 2015 09:50 AM
just out of curiosity am i in any of these parts if not add me in



No one can just deflect the Emerald Splash!
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12 Jul 2015 09:54 AM
This is my favorite one.
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