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superjayjaysaiyn is not online. superjayjaysaiyn
Joined: 29 Jun 2012
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24 Jun 2015 11:20 PM
i guess its funny lol,the last part should give you a laugh:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=afpmB3i3Tbw


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2lazy is not online. 2lazy
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24 Jun 2015 11:48 PM
I'll try my best no to sound mean.
No one likes hearing people talk shat about their video.
While it does follow most of the "Roblox machinma" formula

kevin macleod music
a plan and simple story
jokes
drawn faces
photos instead of actual movement

There are some things you can improve on:
The pace of the video. It feels very sloooow.
Don't put "-Goes outside-" Make the actual scene!
Add more jokes! I'm not even sure if there were any.
Clear up all your tabs/downloads on chrome. Come on, I can see all your work!
Add an outro with "next video" and a "subscribe" Even tho I don't like em, they do work!
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BloodSpilled is not online. BloodSpilled
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25 Jun 2015 04:46 AM
gold doesn't shatter
Just thought I'd mention that
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RandomRobloxTV is not online. RandomRobloxTV
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25 Jun 2015 08:25 AM
ehh
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RobloxRevived is not online. RobloxRevived
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25 Jun 2015 09:19 AM
I would disable banner ads.


My Most Recent Vid :D https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C8kGVRHZoF8
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Inventor1116 is not online. Inventor1116
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25 Jun 2015 10:14 AM
no black bars pls. and make sure you voice act. people hate reading.
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SHElakMan is not online. SHElakMan
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27 Jun 2015 02:07 AM
Why haters? he is trying. i'm his friend, wanna see my content, check out my vids for whatever i care. like this video of mine : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L5_O7vWPilE anyways, guys, dont crush on him, just encourage him, just say "way to go bruh" and you'll be fine
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2lazy is not online. 2lazy
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27 Jun 2015 02:11 AM
No one is really hating on his videos. We are giving him criticisms so that he does not make the same mistakes.
If we say "way to go bruh" that will encourage him to make videos with the same mistakes.

Also keep in mind that VCR always has something to say about videos. If you don't want to hear them, avoid vcr.
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SHElakMan is not online. SHElakMan
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28 Jun 2015 02:51 AM
oooooooooooooh, thanks man, now i get it, you guys are NOT haters, your just fixers. OHHHHHHHHHH, phew, thanks for the notice
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RandomRobloxTV is not online. RandomRobloxTV
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28 Jun 2015 07:44 AM
^
Most peope
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RandomRobloxTV is not online. RandomRobloxTV
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28 Jun 2015 07:45 AM
*people
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SHElakMan is not online. SHElakMan
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29 Jun 2015 12:48 AM
btw im not being sarcastic
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LilKoho is not online. LilKoho
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29 Jun 2015 02:24 AM
?
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Orwinlandis7 is not online. Orwinlandis7
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29 Jun 2015 01:37 PM
Whats wrong with using music from incompetech?
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BloodSpilled is not online. BloodSpilled
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29 Jun 2015 01:58 PM
^
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Orwinlandis7 is not online. Orwinlandis7
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29 Jun 2015 02:09 PM
btw i use incompetech music in my animations
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superjayjaysaiyn is not online. superjayjaysaiyn
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29 Jun 2015 05:08 PM
ok ok ok now how did we change the subject from imcom whatever dot com
If i could i would rename this forum TELL ME MORE WAYS TO FIX MY MACHINMA


but i say the best answer was the top.


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MyDadIsAGuest is not online. MyDadIsAGuest
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29 Jun 2015 06:50 PM
atleast you tried/10
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littlerocker77 is not online. littlerocker77
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29 Jun 2015 06:52 PM
Ehh you tried.
Not really funny though.



Check out AlwaysEthan on youtube! https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC6FsUMFZMFaVQTbFI4nX_Ew
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SHElakMan is not online. SHElakMan
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30 Jun 2015 12:59 PM
jayy, i just uploaded and you might get some examples from, it's kinda different from my other videos since i used more modeling WITH motion AND a joke, and you might see how i did that:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uUpQQTG3vV0

so yeah, hope you enjoy!
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superjayjaysaiyn is not online. superjayjaysaiyn
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30 Jun 2015 05:28 PM
did you had to highlight WITH AND ;-; which made me feel badder about my machinma atleast it got to 100 views so i should be happy about that and it got some positive comments D:


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superjayjaysaiyn is not online. superjayjaysaiyn
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30 Jun 2015 05:44 PM
And another thing robloxrevived vids have movie maker in it
subtitles in it too, i love putting subtitles in my videos when i feel like sharing my voice on the web i do it ok? so yea hope i didnt sound cringy on both of the recent post i made. I cant do anything about black bars and im going back to text to speech. whether people like it or not im still using the first post problems tho i will surely use his recommendations


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