ChanelG
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| 23 Jun 2015 05:33 PM |
[Intro]
"Blue. Themes of reaching beyond; Think the sky and ultimate freedom. Your soul they're feeding upon, But you definitely don't need them. The rare thread in the needle; Sweet nothings, capturing you. Opening doors for the evil, Little do they know they're Gathering Blue..."
[Verse I]
Haven't given a [s] in months, it's like I'm mentally constipated, Aggravated, still don't know why things gotta be all complicated, I'm just tryna find a sign, sixteen and already signed, Outta sight, I'm outta my mind, now I'm startin' to run outta time, They say when it comes to writing, I'm gifted, so I wear these bows, I'd say I'm pretty on the low side, but I still get C-Notes, Feelin' like I'm closer to, knowin' what I'm supposed to do, I was born for this, but don't forget this is what I chose to do, [N]s look at you strange when you find another way to play the game, But they quick to switch lanes, those are the ones to later do the same, Man, I put my all in this, life go quick, so it ain't hard to miss, Handed me the pen and the paper, I put my art in this, Now it's like I can't breathe, I put my heart in this, And that's real, they say that you gotta get it how you live it, Time's passing you every minute, life's everything you put in it, Said I'm not the one to settle for all that regular [s], Said I'm not gon' be the one whose counting regular chips, Said I'm not gon' be the one whose driving regular whips, But look, now I'm the one who's taking regular tips, Watchin' the fakes take control, taking regular sips, Its crazy what my thoughts will do to me, Too much to explain, if only you could see,
[Hook]
But that's how it's supposed to be, Ain't nobody coming close to me, (x2)
[Verse II]
I remember my first time writing some, thinking it was hot [s], But the more I look back, it got me thinking that it's not [s], I wanted something that's genuine, that's real, and that's not it, That's probably the reason it's been awhile since I dropped [s], First time at the studio, remember my sound and how they [f]ed with it, Told me that I could record, as long as I stuck with it, Told me that I could stay, as long as I made a couple bucks with it, Told me that I could produce, so I messed around and fell in love with it, Felt like I couldn't get enough of it, then I started losin' touch with it, That's when they dropped that bomb on me like- I won't say it Indiella, I guess I had potential that they just no longer found in me, huh, They made a column 'bout Atlanta artists and they skipped me, But they surely didn't forget to include the ones who skip beats, "Too many end rhymes, that's not how you're supposed to send rhymes, And at times, you just need to figure out how to bend rhymes-" (The [f] does that mean?) What really hit the core, is when they said I didn't have metaphors, I thought if they got the point of the lyrics, that's all I meant it for, They said I lacked authenticity, but really I lacked melanin, Funny thing is, I was told this by one of the skin of melamine, I can still see that room that I was yellin' in, That room of lies, full of [s] that they were tellin' in, I'll prove 'em wrong where it's not evident, I'll have 'em poppin' [s] like adrenaline, MD, I'm "Yet To Begin", Just watch, on top is where I'll be dwellin' in, Blue.
[Hook]
And that's how it's supposed to be, Ain't nobody coming close to me, (x2)
[Outro]
That's how it's supposed to be, Nobody'll ever come close to me...
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| 23 Jun 2015 05:36 PM |
| I think it's great. Just one thing; can you remove the [N] word from it? |
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ChanelG
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| 23 Jun 2015 05:38 PM |
| Sure thing, thank you very much. =) |
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| 23 Jun 2015 05:39 PM |
| I really like this. This really shows stuff that all well, unique artist go through. (If you get what I'm trying to say). I like the rhymes, I like how real it was. I give this a 9/10. |
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| 23 Jun 2015 05:39 PM |
"But look, now I'm the one who's taking regular tips, Watchin' the fakes take control, taking regular sips"
Slay.
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Cybertro
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| 23 Jun 2015 05:42 PM |
| 8/10, don't remove the [N] words :P |
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ChanelG
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| 23 Jun 2015 05:46 PM |
Thank you guys so much, I really appreciate it.
@TheUnknownZodiac Alright I won't XD |
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| 23 Jun 2015 05:50 PM |
9/10 NICE COMEBACK.
"That's when they dropped that bomb on me like- I won't say it Indiella, " I LOLLED BTW. |
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ChanelG
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| 23 Jun 2015 06:02 PM |
Thanks a lot!
@lunafanplace LOL! Thank you! XD |
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KidVigi
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| 23 Jun 2015 06:23 PM |
| I had to read gathering blue in 8th grade...worst book I've ever read. |
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ChanelG
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| 23 Jun 2015 06:28 PM |
| Tbh I didn't like it either XD. But I thought it'd be a nice metaphor to wrap the concept around. |
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Visixnary
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| 23 Jun 2015 07:50 PM |
| DAMNNN *Vine Voice* 9.8/10! |
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ChanelG
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| 23 Jun 2015 07:58 PM |
| But fr when you said " When I comeback,I'm going to dominate" you really did dominate,great job. #Waitin4thenextsong |
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ChanelG
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| 23 Jun 2015 08:05 PM |
| Thank you Combat, and thank you Tyga =) Means a lot to me. |
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| 23 Jun 2015 08:16 PM |
| gawdamn this shxt go hard asf |
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ChanelG
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| 23 Jun 2015 10:16 PM |
9/10
I better be ready if your gonna dominate |
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ChanelG
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| 23 Jun 2015 10:24 PM |
Thanks, guys!
@DX Haha, yeah. Appreciate it! |
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