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| 19 Jun 2015 07:49 AM |
| Give me brief plot points and I'll throw them all together to make a narrative |
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| 19 Jun 2015 07:51 AM |
There was a man named Softy
He was a caveman living in modern times
Trying to cope with the new life he began destroying things randomly and becoming like Lennie from Of Mice and Men but ultraviolent. |
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| 19 Jun 2015 07:52 AM |
>He was a caveman living in modern times
Is this something of a metaphor or should there be time travel involved |
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| 19 Jun 2015 07:53 AM |
Time travel.
Lets say aliens invaded Earth in the early years, a caveman stumbled into some time machine sending him to 2015. |
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| 19 Jun 2015 08:01 AM |
| Neato. What type of aliens are we talking about here? |
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| 19 Jun 2015 08:05 AM |
| a major character has an absence for about 3%ish of the entire plot for some wacky reason |
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| 19 Jun 2015 08:05 AM |
| They aren't really important to the story, but I'm guessing 7-legged anthromorphic cactus type creatures who speak a reversed serbian-like language. |
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| 19 Jun 2015 08:06 AM |
>for some wacky reason Can I kill them and then revive them |
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| 19 Jun 2015 08:14 AM |
| okay so. there's this guy from west philidelphia. |
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| 19 Jun 2015 08:15 AM |
>okay so. there's this guy from west philidelphia.
Softy will end up in West Philly. |
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| 19 Jun 2015 08:18 AM |
| yeah, he lived there until these really mean guys got in a fight with him in the playgroud. and his mom got scared so she told him that he was moving with his auntie and uncle in the californian city knows as bel air |
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| 19 Jun 2015 08:19 AM |
"Can I kill them and then revive them"
NO i hate nothing more than the cliché of 'dying then coming back to life' because it eliminates all sense of jeopardy have them be kidnapped or sucked into a parallel dimension or something |
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| 19 Jun 2015 08:42 AM |
>i hate nothing more than the cliché of 'dying then coming back to life' because it eliminates all sense of jeopardy have them be kidnapped or sucked into a parallel dimension or something
Can it be perceived as a death but they never actually die I just want to emotionally torture the other lead characters |
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| 19 Jun 2015 08:44 AM |
WE'LL GET ARI FROM WALTZ WITH BASHIR AND PAARTHURNAX FROM SKYRIM
AND HAVE THEM CREATE OFFSPRING |
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| 19 Jun 2015 08:46 AM |
>WE'LL GET ARI FROM WALTZ WITH BASHIR AND PAARTHURNAX FROM SKYRIM AND HAVE THEM CREATE OFFSPRING
I don't think I'm going to take that suggestion |
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