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poisondart59 is not online. poisondart59
Joined: 17 Jul 2014
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16 Jun 2015 09:31 PM
My grammar isn't THAT bad. And also,if the roleplay I set up is SO BAD,what does a GOOD roleplay look like?
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bebithetuffle is not online. bebithetuffle
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16 Jun 2015 09:32 PM
Plots and features and everything that this doesn't have.
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PickachuGirl is not online. PickachuGirl
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16 Jun 2015 09:34 PM
this is entertaining to watch
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IKatikas is not online. IKatikas
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16 Jun 2015 09:35 PM
I'll just give an example on how it should look in the actual roleplay-wise.

Your way:
-is confronting a victim-
???: N-N-No! Please spare me!
Jeff: Too late,my mind is set on killing you.
-the victim shakes in fear,knowing that this is the last day of his life-
-slowly strarts to draw my knife out from the sleeve of my hoodie-
Jeff: Now,why don't you go to sleep?
-------------------------------------


Jeff is approaching a victim, when a few seconds later, he tackles the hopeless man. The victim soon gets scared out of his wits from the confront of a mad man. "N-n-no! Please, spare me!", he shook with fear. "Too late, my mind is set on killing you." The victim shakes with horror, for he is about to die, knowing that his last moments were being confronted by a serial killer. The victim was wide eyed, staring at Jeff's face in horror as he drew the knife out from the sleeve of his hoodie. "Now, why don't you go to sleep?", Jeff soon sank the knife into the victim, ending their life.

This is at least a decent example.




"Virginia! Hanging around with little boys in spandex, I see!"
— Lord Frisbee, AKA Freezy Pop (Frieza)
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poisondart59 is not online. poisondart59
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16 Jun 2015 09:41 PM
Oh,WELL I DIDNT KNOW I HAD TO GO FULL FREAKING DETAIL,AND TYPE OUT A FIVE-LINE PARAGRAPH ABOUT IT. IM SORRY,I DIDNT KNOW THIS WAS WATTPAD,I THOUGHT THIS WAS THE ROLEPLAYING COMMUNITY. I MUST BE IN THE WRONG PLACE,GOODBYE,GOOD DAY,HAVE A NICE LIFE WRITING FULL-ON STORIES!
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poisondart59 is not online. poisondart59
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16 Jun 2015 09:42 PM
I'm done with this thread,goodbye.
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Snackys is not online. Snackys
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16 Jun 2015 09:45 PM
Yeah,your grammar is AMAZING.I'm suprised you don't use spaces in commas nor periods, that's a totally common grammar mistake!!!!
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IKatikas is not online. IKatikas
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16 Jun 2015 09:45 PM
Lol, I was just giving an EXAMPLE. It does not mean you have to write a paragraph. I know this is not wattpad. But atleast put effort into it. I only wrote a paragraph to give you the idea. Not like you have to do it.



"Virginia! Hanging around with little boys in spandex, I see!"
— Lord Frisbee, AKA Freezy Pop (Frieza)
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PickachuGirl is not online. PickachuGirl
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16 Jun 2015 09:46 PM
lol
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bebithetuffle is not online. bebithetuffle
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16 Jun 2015 09:47 PM
Dude.
Like.
Roleplay isn't supposed to be nonsensical idiocy.
It's supposed to be a story played among multiple people.
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IKatikas is not online. IKatikas
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16 Jun 2015 09:49 PM
And dude, my paragraph was freaking easy to write. Don't overreact about it.



"Virginia! Hanging around with little boys in spandex, I see!"
— Lord Frisbee, AKA Freezy Pop (Frieza)
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poisondart59 is not online. poisondart59
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16 Jun 2015 09:49 PM
I said I'm done,so stop posting on this thread.
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IKatikas is not online. IKatikas
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16 Jun 2015 09:51 PM
Alright, alright. I get it. You don't like people helping you out. This is why I don't help people on the forums much.



"Virginia! Hanging around with little boys in spandex, I see!"
— Lord Frisbee, AKA Freezy Pop (Frieza)
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bebithetuffle is not online. bebithetuffle
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16 Jun 2015 09:52 PM
Aw, he pressed the do not allow replies button.
How cute.

Also, if you wanted to stop using this post, then why do you care if we keep posting?
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poisondart59 is not online. poisondart59
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16 Jun 2015 09:53 PM
screw you -.-
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bebithetuffle is not online. bebithetuffle
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16 Jun 2015 09:54 PM
Aren't you just the edgiest little nard.
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InfraredChasm is not online. InfraredChasm
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16 Jun 2015 09:57 PM
Instead of being a mouse-brain (anybody?) at least take these into consideration. I understand that you're a greenie (Eh?) to the forums but come on. This is ridiculous.
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poisondart59 is not online. poisondart59
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16 Jun 2015 09:58 PM
I'm done for real this time,I'm tired of you,I'm tired of everyone else on this post. See you all in hell,goodbye!
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IKatikas is not online. IKatikas
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16 Jun 2015 09:59 PM
I just tryyy to give you some advice, and this is what these people get. 'See you in hell'. That's just fantastic.



"Virginia! Hanging around with little boys in spandex, I see!"
— Lord Frisbee, AKA Freezy Pop (Frieza)
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InfraredChasm is not online. InfraredChasm
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16 Jun 2015 10:00 PM
My dear lord. I wonder how this kid's teachers and parents are... On vacation?
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IKatikas is not online. IKatikas
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16 Jun 2015 10:02 PM
Never helping the roleplay thread again. People just get mistreated to helping people.



"Virginia! Hanging around with little boys in spandex, I see!"
— Lord Frisbee, AKA Freezy Pop (Frieza)
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InfraredChasm is not online. InfraredChasm
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16 Jun 2015 10:03 PM
Agreed. At least in the scripters section, helpers don't get crap.
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indyracoon is not online. indyracoon
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16 Jun 2015 10:06 PM
"i thought this was the good roleplaying community"
kek

"YES IT IS. However, caps lock isn't required."
that made me lol so hard tho thnx
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MegaFusionX is not online. MegaFusionX
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17 Jun 2015 12:20 AM
InfraredChasm
Breaking people's dreams since the year he joined
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jcarsonw2 is not online. jcarsonw2
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17 Jun 2015 12:26 AM
can I borrow some of your chromosomes? I see you have too many.
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