HPC3
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| 12 Jun 2015 03:15 PM |
[Chorus] Money, money, Clouds our whole view, Bank accounts and dollar signs change what we feel is true, Greed sick as a flu, See our end through, All you see is war for money when you step into my shoes, (2x)
[Patrick, of Difference]: We’re all poets, But our contracts don’t show it … You rap for profit, not music Don’t lie, you know it Trading in the artist’s note pad, For a chain, all glittered and golden, It’s true, this message stickin’ like a postage, If music is medicine, today’s game is a fatal dosage, … Remember to grab your paycheck, but forget to pay thanks and ex-claim your homage, Money and showbiz, Your only current motives Hip hop game bloated, Corrosive, Good on the inside, But when you focus on the foliage, You can see poisons and thorns, in-between those sweet roses, "Reality is wrong, dreams are real” That’s Tupac quoted, In beginning the dreams blossom like roses or lotus, Keep these quotes noted, Focus.. .. Focus, On the original columns, poles of Totem, So blinded by money Rather prefer bucks than flowers under their noses, Stay humble, don’t stumble, Carry yourself as the holy ghost is..
[Chorus] Money, money, Clouds our whole view, Bank accounts and dollar signs change what we feel is true, Greed sick as a flu, See our end through, All you see is war for money when you step into my shoes, (2x)
[Rootling the Rapper]: Your worst work emitted, You've been dubbed pretentious ..Should feel like a pocket Full of molten Hershey Kisses But they're so full of Benjamins Ya pockets have no feelins. The best of your raps Tantalized by all seeing eyes ..Before realized you've Led life, fathered lies and had Messages etched in dollar signs No morals, just altered minds.. Papers colored grime you couldn't Find without fostered crimes-- That influence dawns over late Teens and crazies happily Grimacing teeth over cased cheese ..Igniting with the Felonies you've fanned over beats You've suspended their means over Shark tanks of money you need.. Morals crushed over corporate greed And can't breathe But you could care less, as long As you get proceeds..
[Chorus] Money, money, Clouds our whole view, Bank accounts and dollar signs change what we feel is true, Greed sick as a flu, See our end through, All you see is war for money when you step into my shoes, (2x) |
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| 12 Jun 2015 03:20 PM |
Bars: 8.7/10 Punchlines : 0/10 Message : 6.7/10 Timeless Laws : 7.5/10 Overall: 5.7/10 Mediocre but better between mediocre and great.
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HPC3
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| 12 Jun 2015 03:22 PM |
| Whack, Thanks for your irrelevant feedback, while you can't find the message and punchlines because you're too stupid to see sophisticated, actual lyrics. Your "music" is about being a thug on a game for kids. Yet you find the courage to talk about my music when you aren't in a situation to even rate music... You're only an underground artist, trying to rate a mainstream and a legend's music. okay then. |
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| 12 Jun 2015 03:26 PM |
@H Umm, you suppose to use calculator sometimes to find the overall rates, you about to be irrelevant yourself, you need to stop fronting. |
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HPC3
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| 12 Jun 2015 03:31 PM |
| Irrelevant myself? I have legends all over my album. You have wannabe chief kieffs. |
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| 12 Jun 2015 03:32 PM |
@H [N], [F] that chief keef [S], now i using more poetry in my rap then you other ro-rappers do, except rooting. |
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| 12 Jun 2015 03:35 PM |
BTW, I don't got time for a newbie in rap that keep talking about me in some chief keef this and that and,Chief keef these nuts, he don't got nothing to do with me life. And on top of that, I been in ro-rap before you my friend, so you can't start trash yapping before my gun start clapping at your [A] for a lesson. |
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HPC3
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| 12 Jun 2015 03:51 PM |
| Ive been in Ro-Rap since 2012... Lmao my original account is haydenred4444 I was in shadow master's YMCMB hall of fame. I'm an innovator in rap. Talking about coke with simple words aint poetry btw, it's what they call garbage. You do NOT use more poetry than me, and you probably don't get half the things I write because of your illiterate mindset. |
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| 12 Jun 2015 03:58 PM |
| I'll use ghetto poetry from Nas,2pac,Raekwon and Mac from New Orleans. |
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| 12 Jun 2015 03:58 PM |
| just because it's from the 90's doesn't mean it's good music, df you talking bout dumbass. There's bad music and things in every era. |
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| 12 Jun 2015 03:59 PM |
| I rap about the ghetto because my whole family from a trap house back then, so just STFU or get illuminated. |
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| 12 Jun 2015 04:00 PM |
| "my whole family from the ghetto" Quit playing with yourself. I asked where you based and you said Merrick. LMAO. You aint anything but a ro-thug who sits at home stuffing his face instead of socializing. Don't act like you've been through struggle. |
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| 12 Jun 2015 04:02 PM |
| My RL family you dumb [S]lut. |
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HPC3
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| 12 Jun 2015 04:05 PM |
| i know you are talking about your real family, dumbass, but aint nobody believe for a second that you ever went through a struggle with you acting like a thug on roblox. |
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| 12 Jun 2015 04:06 PM |
| King...Shut up..Now. You're an idiot, you asked me to teach you what punchlines are a week ago, and now you're judging everyones punchlines, meanwhile yours are bad, you aren't from a ghetto, you're 13, you're dumb, you keep talking about Nas, Tupac. etc. But, you're nowhere near them, you're just a minor rip-off of them, so, shut up. You're whack, your name says it..Wonderflow out. |
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| 12 Jun 2015 04:07 PM |
WTF in a conversation that you and your opinion can do for me? Nothing. |
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| 12 Jun 2015 04:08 PM |
@Devil Oh MB, I didn't know it was you, sorry fam. |
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| 12 Jun 2015 04:12 PM |
why god in heaven
why do you do this to us |
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| 12 Jun 2015 04:15 PM |
| lmao wonder flow explained it perfectly. |
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| 12 Jun 2015 04:17 PM |
| Your username should be LCP, Because that's a drug you addicting to. |
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| 12 Jun 2015 04:24 PM |
| You spelled xXXKingofWackXXx wrong. Wack, not whack. You don't wack. The name would work better in 2 senses, of you being wack, and your favorite action since that's all your lonely ass does at home, wack :] |
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| 12 Jun 2015 04:26 PM |
| lol you're saying you use more poetry than me when you have a legend roasting you saying you asked him how to make a punch line a week ago. Hop off youngin' |
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| 12 Jun 2015 04:27 PM |
| But I'm seeing you suffering lack of coordination struggle rap on your song. |
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| 12 Jun 2015 04:29 PM |
| You can rap about ANYTHING you want to. |
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