Elcudias
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| 11 Jun 2015 09:17 PM |
| We're making a futuristic city, one side slummy, one side clean, we only have the majority of the clean side done so far, can you come give criticism? (partner is Jhenryis2) |
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Elcudias
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| 11 Jun 2015 09:18 PM |
| http://www.roblox.com/games/248154137/Elcudiass-Place-Number-45 |
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Elcudias
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| 11 Jun 2015 09:19 PM |
| Majority of the SLUMMY side* not clean. |
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Elcudias
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| 11 Jun 2015 09:39 PM |
| Looks good, just keep working at it! Im bad at criticism xD |
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| 11 Jun 2015 10:15 PM |
| very subtle social commentary ok ok |
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| 11 Jun 2015 10:53 PM |
| It looks kind of (these days) to me from the thumbnail...If you can add some old broken up robot parts into the dumpster it might greatly increase the (futuristic) side if it. |
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