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| 11 Jun 2015 06:43 PM |
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/628991
not a nsfw link, it's just music i'd appreciate feedback or something like that yeeeee |
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pie4049
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| 11 Jun 2015 06:52 PM |
your voice is actually p good man
i like it |
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| 11 Jun 2015 06:55 PM |
| thank you :%) it took me all day to record and mix it and stuff but i'm pretty happy how it turned out |
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pie4049
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| 11 Jun 2015 07:04 PM |
| Yeah it sounds really good. Your voice compliments the acoustics really well. |
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Zokulzoh
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| 11 Jun 2015 07:05 PM |
| i remember seeing a video of someone playing this on bass |
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| 11 Jun 2015 07:09 PM |
"i remember seeing a video of someone playing this on bass"
i considered putting in bass but the bass guitar i have sucks and also i don't actually know how to play the song on bass lol |
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| 11 Jun 2015 08:26 PM |
next time, use soundcloud
because i couldn't even load it. |
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| 11 Jun 2015 08:47 PM |
| juan my man that's pretty damned swell. |
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| 11 Jun 2015 08:49 PM |
| Pretty good but use soundcloud yo |
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jone1196
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| 11 Jun 2015 08:56 PM |
its ok, unique voice but i have a thing for tenors
and did you bother using any noise removal bc that sssss is bugging me, also a bass woulda been niced, woulda fattened the mix right up, theres a lot of space hmm, shouldve added a second guitar imo, harmony was cool, coulda rolled off the low end on the guitar though unless youre aiming for a warm sound |
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| 11 Jun 2015 08:59 PM |
| forrest are we gonna have a discussion on vocal ranges? this is really derailing, but i'm pretty sure i lied about my vocal range back then |
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jone1196
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| 11 Jun 2015 09:10 PM |
"use soundcloud"
just download the song if it doesn't load
"and did you bother using any noise removal bc that sssss is bugging me,"
i could fix it but i didn't think it distracted from the music too much so i just left it
"shouldve added a second guitar imo"
there is a second guitar but i only used it for that middle part
"coulda rolled off the low end on the guitar though unless youre aiming for a warm sound"
yeah i was kind of thinking the same thing. i'm pretty bad at mixing though lol |
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jone1196
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| 11 Jun 2015 09:11 PM |
| but yeah man bass is super key to making a mix feel FULL |
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| 11 Jun 2015 09:16 PM |
if i had a working bass i would have the bass i have has a lot of technical problems |
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jone1196
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| 11 Jun 2015 09:23 PM |
also a trick to make the choruses seem more upbeat and better is overdub a 12 string or a 6 string in nashville tuning
and adding a very quiet string section in the back fills the mix right up so theres no space
idk about you but i like a fat warm analogue mix |
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| 11 Jun 2015 09:57 PM |
| I only use mobile so I can't download it :/ |
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| 11 Jun 2015 10:44 PM |
| Not bad, my friend, not bad. |
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