aaa328
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| 09 Jun 2015 07:33 PM |
[INTRO] f*** you n*ggas, bruh...
all these haters imma call up my n*ggas, they is some raiders we will run in yo house quiet as a mouse then we gon be sprayin s*** that place gon be lit the police gonna have a fit and if the police ask, i had nothing to do with it f*** you haters next time a n*gga look at yo body there will be craters um... ya, im done.. laters.
rate/comment dont care about how small
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circirak
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| 09 Jun 2015 07:34 PM |
| This is an abomination of the english language. |
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| 09 Jun 2015 07:36 PM |
| "the polica gonna have a fit" |
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aaa328
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| 09 Jun 2015 07:38 PM |
maaan im lookin for the feedback of rap fans if you dont like rap i really dont care about how "rappers r so vilent!!1" shut the f*ck up.
and im not looking for fools who want big words, this aint poetry |
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circirak
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| 09 Jun 2015 07:41 PM |
@aaa
i like rap, this is not rap, it's horribleness put onto a forum about music, tv, books
Get out if you don't like it. |
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aaa328
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| 09 Jun 2015 07:42 PM |
| @cir, where are my mistakes? how may i improve? |
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circirak
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| 09 Jun 2015 07:43 PM |
All of it.
you can improve by taking your tghings, opening the figurative door, and getting out |
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aaa328
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| 09 Jun 2015 07:47 PM |
@cir, maaan quit trollin.
and before you come back and say "im not trolling"
shut the f*ck up and give me real advice, otherwise you troll. |
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Dynerov
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circirak
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| 09 Jun 2015 08:17 PM |
@aaa
You're delusional, you're the one trolling everyone with awful "lyrics" |
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| 09 Jun 2015 08:26 PM |
Why'd you switch to the forums, couldn't you have stuck to Rap Tournament?
4/10 |
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| 09 Jun 2015 08:27 PM |
@circirak the even sadder part is he's serious. He's not trolling, at all. lol. |
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circirak
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| 09 Jun 2015 08:31 PM |
@luna
Even though im not religious
im going to pray to the sweet baby jesus to help save us all from op's awful writing. |
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| 09 Jun 2015 08:34 PM |
I will join you in that, as well. Maybe we should add gods of other religions as well just for a safe bet? |
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circirak
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| 09 Jun 2015 08:36 PM |
I swear, if i see another asterik from OP...
you know what
you don't want to know |
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| 09 Jun 2015 08:38 PM |
@Circirak It gets at you that bad, huh? I feel you. |
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| 10 Jun 2015 07:10 PM |
| This Rap Is Poor.Say Something And I'll End You Quick. |
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circirak
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| 10 Jun 2015 07:37 PM |
@lll
It's so poor, it envies people living in poverty, because they're richer than it. |
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Chuggen
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| 10 Jun 2015 09:59 PM |
I use big words. This is my 1st time trying something new, can someone comment on this? is it good? http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=164238924
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=164238924
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=164238924
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=164238924
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=164238924 |
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