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| 05 Jun 2015 09:31 AM |
A new game had just come out all over the world. It included the game itself and a choice of headgear or visor. You got the game and you visor or headgear for free as you tried out for beta tester and made it. You bought the actual game some months later. When you finished your character and joined, the place called the Town of Beginnings, was PACKED. The game moderators had to make the announcement for the game to begin so everyone was finding friends, sending parties, or trading. When it was time for the moderators speech, the sky went blood red, boxes that had the word "Error!" in it. A figure that looked like a giant grim reaper began to appear. He was wearing a crimson cloak but didn't have a scythe. The, he began to speak in a loud booming voice. "Players! This game is no longer for fun, but it is now your new life! If you die in this game, the microchip in your head gear or visor will short out it AND your brain, meaning you will die here and in real life. You have actually been in this game for hours. I will reset the time as it is in real life. But as we SPEAK, you are being moved to hospitals, being kept alive by machines. You must beat the last floor boss on floor 100 in order to beat the game and go back to your 'normal' life. The bosses will get harder and harder as you proceed past different floors. There will also be mini-bosses on some floors. Your lives now belong to me!" He screeched with laughter as he disappeared. The passage ways to the rest of the town and the gates to the fields opened. The merchants area with the shops and NPCs lined the ways. As everyone's message alert began to flash, they all appeared to get the same new gear. Everyone put it on at almost the same time. The item caused you all to change to your appearance from the real world.
You get a ping from your message box. The note reads: Hey! Welcome to Sword Art Online. My program's name is Mixxy. I will let you know about when there is a guild raid, guild meeting, messages, duel requests, and other things. You will probably be hearing from me a lot. Once you join a guild or get a house/appartment, I will instantly be downloaded into the walls. On that note, you are the only one who can hear your messages. Everyone has their own personal Mixxy though. Everything that grim reaper said by the way, is true. So don't go killing yourself. Be safe and have fun! See you around player!
~CS~ Name: Gender: Age (14 and older): Personality: Appearance: Beginner clothes that consist of a black, red, or blue shirt and brown breeches. Your shirt and breeches also have leather padding. Weapon(s): Beginner sword and Shield (The Shield is optional to use)
~Rules~ 1. No fowl or cruel language 2. No goddmodding or power play or meta gaming 3. Listen to Mixxy 4. Don't get into fights 5. HAVE FUN :D |
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| 05 Jun 2015 09:53 AM |
I'm all for taking inspiration for an anime but a complete copy? Unless it's one of those free-roamer anime ( eg Pokemon even though the anime is terrible ), then that's more acting from a script than roleplaying. I'd try to come up with something original - spend a while thinking until you imagine something new?
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| 05 Jun 2015 01:56 PM |
| Its supposed to be exactly like the anime but I made it with my own touch with Mixxy and now people can make their own character to try it out XP |
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| 05 Jun 2015 02:08 PM |
Sorry, bro. I just don't think people like exact copies. SAO has a plot, which means that it's not for people to make their own stories. It's just a written version of the anime. And it's not original. You aren't showing creativity, and people like to see creativity in a RP.
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| 05 Jun 2015 02:10 PM |
I have tumors in my eyes, neck, and throat. And lungs, but those are unrelated.
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| 05 Jun 2015 10:34 PM |
| Alright thanks for the input Senpaisaur |
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| 05 Jun 2015 10:39 PM |
Silly boy, this isn't original.
/sarcasm (No seriously.) |
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| 06 Jun 2015 12:33 AM |
| He's already admitted to this being a copy, so don't complain about it not being original. Even still, people don't like it when something is unoriginal. Just think of something else with 'mixxy' in it. |
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| 06 Jun 2015 06:16 AM |
@above, It doesn't matter what he admits or what he doesn't; disclaimers are irrelevant and people don't care about them. Something doesn't just become popular because the creator admitted to taking ideas.
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| 06 Jun 2015 08:36 AM |
| *cough cough* I'm female *cough cough* |
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| 06 Jun 2015 09:15 AM |
she* fixed
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| 06 Jun 2015 10:03 AM |
~Rules~ 1. No fowl or cruel language 2. No goddmodding or power play or meta gaming 3. Listen to Mixxy 4. Don't get into fights 5. HAVE FUN :D
1. No fowl or cruel language 1. no fowl or cruel 1. No fowl or cruel 1. No fowl or 1. No fowl No fowl fowl
You heard him guys! No birds allowed! |
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