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Re: I just made this song in a few minutes

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stormiebob is not online. stormiebob
Joined: 09 Nov 2008
Total Posts: 3165
06 Jun 2015 12:23 AM
It may not be the best but I'm posting this for help, so I can fix it and possibly get some tips.

(Please note that this is the first song I ever made)


I also need help for a title so yeah


[Song]

I love you, I miss you
and I notice that now.
Now that you're gone
I can't figure out how.
All those days we laughed
are in the past.
Every single day from now on
is an ongoing loop that's going to last.
All I can do is keep remembering the past.
I hope this will all go by fast.

Beautiful, Lovable, Wonderful you
Everyday I wake up and think about you.
Everything that I do is for you.
Now that you're gone I don't know what to do.

You've been making me cry since you left
I've been losing my mind since you left
I feel like dying since you left
Now I realize how important you were since you left.

I thought it would go another way
I never planned it to be this way.
Never thought I would be too late
Now I can't get past this gate
All I can do is wait.

Beautiful, Lovable, Wonderful you
Everyday I wake up and think about you.
Everything that I do is for you.
Now that you're gone I don't know what to do.

You've been making me cry since you left
I've been losing my mind since you've left
I feel like dying since you left
Now I realize how important you were to me.


I've wanted to tell you how I felt about you
but you left too early and I wasn't able to.
Now all I can do is miss you.
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feline75 is not online. feline75
Joined: 08 May 2012
Total Posts: 6169
06 Jun 2015 12:30 AM
since you left would be a good title

and not bad for the first song you ever made
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FOXmcloud021 is not online. FOXmcloud021
Joined: 14 Apr 2012
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06 Jun 2015 12:30 AM
TL;DSing


~ ♪♫ If only I could dravv what I see in my head ♫♪ ~
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stormiebob is not online. stormiebob
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06 Jun 2015 12:31 AM
Thanks :)
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DonMangLy is not online. DonMangLy
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06 Jun 2015 12:31 AM
sounds like someone needs a hug
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JoesephStratenburgh is not online. JoesephStratenburgh
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06 Jun 2015 12:31 AM
terrible

awful

a piece of crap




lets hook you up with a record dealer
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HydroKyogre is not online. HydroKyogre
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06 Jun 2015 12:32 AM
taylor swift is that you
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Auroraceratops is not online. Auroraceratops
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06 Jun 2015 12:39 AM
Get a good non mopey singer and epic guitar
And I'd pay for it
Also
Does someone need a hug?
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stormiebob is not online. stormiebob
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06 Jun 2015 12:40 AM
I might be able to sing it but hell I'm just an 11 year old and I also need to learn to play guitar.

And yes I do need a hug.
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Soup3rMan is not online. Soup3rMan
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06 Jun 2015 12:40 AM
It's hard to tell how good a song will be by just the lyrics, as you don't know the tune or the instrumentals, however the lyrics do look interesting. Well done OP. Keep it up and I think you'll be going places.
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Soup3rMan is not online. Soup3rMan
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06 Jun 2015 12:41 AM
Oh also you can purchase a hug if you buy the Physical Contact DLC which includes Hugs, High Fives and Hand Shakes, all for $4.99
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FOXmcloud021 is not online. FOXmcloud021
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06 Jun 2015 12:42 AM
*Hugs OP
I am a fox, so it should be a pretty soft and fluffy hug


~ ♪♫ If only I could dravv what I see in my head ♫♪ ~
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stormiebob is not online. stormiebob
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06 Jun 2015 12:42 AM
I love all these responses. Thank you everyone :)
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iEvilBrodey is not online. iEvilBrodey
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06 Jun 2015 12:43 AM
That song is suicide in a bottle
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feline75 is not online. feline75
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06 Jun 2015 12:46 AM
i'd say you're pretty mature for an 11 year old

and to write a song like this at only 11?

you have a bright future kid
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kevinc99 is not online. kevinc99
Joined: 14 Mar 2011
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06 Jun 2015 12:46 AM
All i can do is wait

is a good title

or "Wait"

idk how it would sound, but i sang it outloud and the most powerful part is "All i can do is wait"

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stormiebob is not online. stormiebob
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06 Jun 2015 12:48 AM
So it's a battle between "All I can do is wait", "Wait", or "Since you left".
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kevinc99 is not online. kevinc99
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06 Jun 2015 12:52 AM
i wish i could record myself to show you XD

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stormiebob is not online. stormiebob
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06 Jun 2015 12:55 AM
xD
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Noitacinu is not online. Noitacinu
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06 Jun 2015 12:56 AM
terrible

awful

a piece of *hipster trash [2]

--http://youtu.be/hod0WtYE4SA?t=1s <--What's good!? (Add Unication's post count to this account)
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FredTheFazbear is not online. FredTheFazbear
Joined: 14 Sep 2014
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06 Jun 2015 12:57 AM
emo nerd go watch some mlp u fat losr go ear sone kfc

我是同性戀 あなたが小児性愛者ですか?Ты педофил
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Fr33Sp33ch is not online. Fr33Sp33ch
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06 Jun 2015 12:57 AM
/e cringe

and you're 11 . I think 5th graders should be worried about breakups OR relationships

Cold and wet and dirty , you're looking mighty purdy
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JoesephStratenburgh is not online. JoesephStratenburgh
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06 Jun 2015 02:12 AM
OD me op
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me2avril is not online. me2avril
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06 Jun 2015 02:29 AM
Love it-
Singing it-
Making video of it tomorrow-
yay c:
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stormiebob is not online. stormiebob
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06 Jun 2015 02:33 PM
b1
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